A NEW START (FF)- chapter 6, page 15!

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Guys, I dont know what has got into me, but the current track of uttaran's making me very sad and depressed...so I kind of have thoughts of starting a fanfiction, a really good one, that gives prominence to Rasya, Veecha and the new generation..Ive a good story on my mind...and il try to start posting by tonight, hope its turns out to be a good story 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting for it dear...but b4 10.00...so that we can read this instead of watching that crap
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CHAPTER 1 : BROKEN, SHATTERED - 18 years ago, a memory.

Part 1 : Leaving..

She was going, with a destination in mind...the wind whipped her hair back and forth, and in the same way, her memories tore at her heart, attacking her with their brute force, almost killing her...yet, she had to leave...for her good, for her family's welfare..and finally, for HIM. He mattered the most. She couldn't break his heart with the truth, coz he trusted her with his own life..he loved her, and she was the center of his universe..
"Dont cry, Tapasya", she consoled herself, but she couldn't stop herself. She imagined..she thought of the pain he would go through after reading the letter she wrote...
"I'm sorry, Mr.Rathore!" she cried out, in the lonely road, and no one could hear her pain..no one could console her..
Thousands of memories flooded back...his face, his touch, his laughter, his love..and more than anything, the trust he had, on her, on Tapasya...she wanted to go back to him...his arms were her safe haven...he protected her, loved her...
"NO!" she decided firmly..."He deserves someone better than me"...she assumed..
She took her bag, saw the photo of her love, and the little child she left behind..controlled her emotions..bit back her tears...and set on her journey..destination known..but future...unknown...

Part 2: Broken..

"You're a great husband..but you're an even better father"...his eyes kept going over the same line again and again...
He didn't know what to do, he didn't know what to say, for the first time in his life, Raghuvendra Pratap Rathore didn't know what to do next...
All that he knew was he couldn't live without her, without his dream, without his love, without his better half...without his..Tapasya..
"WHY TAPASYA WHY?" he screamed! All her life, she was in pain, and when he thought he could give her happiness, make her live a life without any fear...she left him...
"Come back to me Tapasya..I dont care abt your past..." he kept repeating it over and over again...but it was of no use...she left him..left him..
He knew that she couldn't live without him..and he thought of the pain she would feel...it made him cry..scream...for his love...for his life...for his Tapasya..
He set out...searching for her..but it was in vain...
Broken, he returned, her mangalsutra and the letter firmly clutched in his hand...because it was all that was left of his love...

Part 3 : Forgotten, remembered:

"Ichcha? Thank you for saving my life, but who are you?" the words kept flashing across her mind...
"Veer.." she cried, because all that she could do was to cry..there was no one for her, she was helpless, and her husband falied to recognise her...her child was taken away from her...she was all alone...
"Why is everything against me?" was the thought that kept going across her mind...because she couldn't think of anything else..
Veer..the reason of her existence..everytime he was with her..everytime he supported her, he loved her truly..and now..he's not able to recogise her..
How will Veer live without her? And how will she, without Veer?


"Mai, who is that woman? I feel as though ive met her before" Veer, was murmuring, at the hospital...
Mai, scared that Ichcha would ruin her son's life told, "Beta, she helped in bringing you to the hospital, that's all..apart from that, we know nothing abt her..now u take some rest"...and she left the room.
But Veer couldn't rest...something abt the voice, something abt the way the woman held his hand, something abt her...seemed familiar, and somewhere deep down in his heart..he had a fluttery feeling...a combination of fear, pain, and one emotion he couldn't describe...the sad feeling of losing someone...but the problem was...he didn't know what he lost...confused...he closed his eyes...
He slept...with an unsettled fear...and miles away...there was a woman...remembering him, praying for him, loving him...




A love story..two people separated...will they ever get back again? In what circumstances can they meet? "Chapter 2: 18 years later, memories rekindled"...will be uploaded tomorrow :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Veer-Ichcha, love story coming on the way too...will upload it after I get a fresh story on mind 😊
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waiting for the next part!!!
and yukta story????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sm123

Guys, I dont know what has got into me, but the current track of uttaran's making me very sad and depressed...so I kind of have thoughts of starting a fanfiction, a really good one, that gives prominence to Rasya, Veecha and the new generation..Ive a good story on my mind...and il try to start posting by tonight, hope its turns out to be a good story 😊



excellent idea sneha 👏 👍🏼 I am with you 😆
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Originally posted by: sylvia107

waiting for the next part!!!

and yukta story????



Definitely, this story will be a major combo of Rasya, Veecha, and Yukta...the most sought out after couples! But ive to give a basic intro to main leads..Raysa and Veecha..later il move on to Yukta 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rasyafan



excellent idea sneha 👏 👍🏼 I am with you 😆


Monica, see part 1 😊 part 2 coming tomorrow, and after sometime, il include Veecha love story in part 1 too 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sneha I have been thinking for so long that Rasya as a lead there should be a story but it should be completed by all the fans giving it unique turns after turns 😉 so the story can be according to all the fans involved they get to satisfy themselves through what they want

like they play a game 😆

but your story also great loved every moment of it 👏 👍🏼
look forward to more of it 😃
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Originally posted by: sm123



Definitely, this story will be a major combo of Rasya, Veecha, and Yukta...the most sought out after couples! But ive to give a basic intro to main leads..Raysa and Veecha..later il move on to Yukta 😊


awesome!!😳😃
waise u are a grt writter!!!👏👏

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