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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: rasyafan



sneha not so soon first attract readres let them develop their interest and then let the story unfold slowly and with lots of feelings emotions that is how readers would come again n again 👍🏼



Obviously Monica...my story will be long...dont worry! 😊
And I have so many ideas for Rasya ❤️
And Veecha too 😊
Speaking of Yukta...their story will come after sometime 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear!!! keep rocking!!😊😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sylvia107

awesome dear!!! keep rocking!!😊😉



Thank u!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Wow sneha!it is soo good! great! loving it! do keep updating!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ishani--

Wow sneha!it is soo good! great! loving it! do keep updating!



Thank you Ishani! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow sneha..good job... it was so good ...loved tapasya part...different one...

keep going dearr...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww sneha it's so wonderfull... 😃 just eagerly waiting for yukta story... 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 3: LIFE GOES ON...

Part 1 : The begining...

The alarm rang loudly...waking him up from his long dream...for a minute he couldn't believe that it was a dream...because everything seemed real...but he knew that his room, his alarm which was irritating the hell out of him was reality...and strong and handsome Yuvraj Singh Bundela dragged himself off the bed..and got ready for his jogging session and a game of tennis with his dad...
Veer Singh Bundela was already awake...and ready, and waiting for his son...and Yuvi entered the living room, Veer chided him for fun and told him, "Yuvi there will not be a single day when u get ready before me!" for which Yuvi replied, "Papa, there's not a single person who's as active as u, I seriously dont know how you manage it, ok come on, we're getting late!"
Veer and Yuvi left the house, jogged for 20 minutes, and started their game.

"What's the bet today, son?" asked Veer, for which Yuvi replied, "No need for any bets papa, we'l just play!"

This was unlike Yuvi, who wanted to have a bet in every game, and somehow made Veer lose everytime, so Veer asked him, "Are u ok Yuvi?" for which Yuvi said, "Fine, today's bet is 500rs, shall we play?"

Veer grinned and said "sure, lets start!"
The game went on for 10 minutes, and Veer couldn't believe it, he won the game! Now he was sure that Yuvi wasn't concentrating, and wanted to know what was bothering his son...

"Ok beta, now give me 500rs" said Veer, and Yuvi had a sheepish look on his face and said "Papa tomorrow?"for which Veer replied, "Haha, its ok, I was just joking! Now just come and sit next to me, and tell me what ur problem is"

Yuvi was shocked, because somehow or the other, his father always knew it when something bothered him. "How do u know that im having some problem papa?" asked Yuvi, for which Veer replied, "Ur my son, obviously I know it when my son has a problem! So tell me now!"
Yuvi sat next to him and told him..."There's this girl papa..."...

Part 2: Begining no.2...

She had studied hard the previous day...and she slept only for 2 hours, and she couldn't keep her eyes open...yet she tried to make herself fresh by taking a hot shower, and a hot cup of tea...because Mukta Rathore, a bold and beautiful diva, was an ambitious girl who wanted to top in her college and become a successful businesswoman...somehow she loved the field of business...
She went through her list of chores for today, and she was very excited about today, because she was nominated for the president of students body head...and yet she was bit tensed because it was her seniors who were going to interview her..but she knew that she was fit enough to get that role...and she got ready for college with a smile on her face..:)

Part 3: Begining no.3..

She didn't know how to describe her emotions...happiness, joy..and she was scared too..because she was going to come face to face with a woman..whom she only heard about...but never seen or spoken to...yes...the pretty and charming Meethi Veer Singh Bundela was waiting with anticipation for her mother. She had heard a lot abt her mother, from her Nani, and her Kanha bahiyya...she knew the pain her mother was going through...and she wanted to console her mother...listen to her childhood stories, tell her abt her childhood, and so many more things...but still, the prospect was meeting her mother..who was completely new to her was a scary yet wonderful feeling for Meethi...and so she waited...waited for her mother to come to her...

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What is bothering Yuvraj Singh Bundela? Will Mukta get the leadership, or be stopped? How will Meethi feel after meeting her mother? How will Ichcha and Meethi bond? Wait for the next chapter, Chapter 4: Emotions...:) Stay tuned guys :)
Edited by sm123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dear ur going great. this time ur FF will appear in the newsletter. 👏👏👏👏

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