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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sm123

CHAPTER 1 : BROKEN, SHATTERED - 18 years ago, a memory.

Part 1 : Leaving..

She was going, with a destination in mind...the wind whipped her hair back and forth, and in the same way, her memories tore at her heart, attacking her with their brute force, almost killing her...yet, she had to leave...for her good, for her family's welfare..and finally, for HIM. He mattered the most. She couldn't break his heart with the truth, coz he trusted her with his own life..he loved her, and she was the center of his universe..
"Dont cry, Tapasya", she consoled herself, but she couldn't stop herself. She imagined..she thought of the pain he would go through after reading the letter she wrote...
"I'm sorry, Mr.Rathore!" she cried out, in the lonely road, and no one could hear her pain..no one could console her..
Thousands of memories flooded back...his face, his touch, his laughter, his love..and more than anything, the trust he had, on her, on Tapasya...she wanted to go back to him...his arms were her safe haven...he protected her, loved her...
"NO!" she decided firmly..."He deserves someone better than me"...she assumed..
She took her bag, saw the photo of her love, and the little child she left behind..controlled her emotions..bit back her tears...and set on her journey..destination known..but future...unknown...

Part 2: Broken..

"You're a great husband..but you're an even better father"...his eyes kept going over the same line again and again...
He didn't know what to do, he didn't know what to say, for the first time in his life, Raghuvendra Pratap Rathore didn't know what to do next...
All that he knew was he couldn't live without her, without his dream, without his love, without his better half...without his..Tapasya..
"WHY TAPASYA WHY?" he screamed! All her life, she was in pain, and when he thought he could give her happiness, make her live a life without any fear...she left him...
"Come back to me Tapasya..I dont care abt your past..." he kept repeating it over and over again...but it was of no use...she left him..left him..
He knew that she couldn't live without him..and he thought of the pain she would feel...it made him cry..scream...for his love...for his life...for his Tapasya..
He set out...searching for her..but it was in vain...
Broken, he returned, her mangalsutra and the letter firmly clutched in his hand...because it was all that was left of his love...

A love story..two people separated...will they ever get back again? In what circumstances can they meet? "Chapter 2: 18 years later, memories rekindled"...will be uploaded tomorrow :)



U r just awesome Sneha...love it...wnt rasya 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rasyafan

Sneha I have been thinking for so long that Rasya as a lead there should be a story but it should be completed by all the fans giving it unique turns after turns 😉 so the story can be according to all the fans involved they get to satisfy themselves through what they want

like they play a game 😆

but your story also great loved every moment of it 👏 👍🏼
look forward to more of it 😃


Moreover it was natural story...the feelings of a hubby n wife are beautifully xpressed 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Monica, I know...my emotions for rasya are all coming out now 😊 Wait for the next part 😉
Sylvia, thank u so much!😊
Nish, thanks a lot dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sm123

Monica, I know...my emotions for rasya are all coming out now 😊 Wait for the next part 😉
Sylvia, thank u so much!😊
Nish, thanks a lot dear 😊



😆 Sneha I just read it and WOW HOW 😉
eagerly waiting 👍🏼😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rasyafan



😆 Sneha I just read it and WOW HOW 😉
eagerly waiting 👍🏼😃



Thank u sweetheart 😊 Ur my inspiration, really! How much we felt bad for Rasya? you, me, merry, nish...this one's for all the people who want Rasya so badly! 😊
And of course, Veecha is also there..because there are equal no of people who want Veecha too 😊
Speaking of the new generation...*suspense* 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sm123



Thank u sweetheart 😊 Ur my inspiration, really! How much we felt bad for Rasya? you, me, merry, nish...this one's for all the people who want Rasya so badly! 😊
And of course, Veecha is also there..because there are equal no of people who want Veecha too 😊
Speaking of the new generation...*suspense* 😉

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Impossible I swear yesterday I was just thinking about gaurav that he should get into serials which are not like uttaran but full of suspense thriller and romance like left right and left 👏
We really connect some way pata nahi kaise I swear I am shocked 😆
Wow just what we all need Rasya Vechchha and SUSPENSE 😆😉
sounds zabardast thriller 👏
I am looking forward to it cant wait to read further 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rasyafan

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Impossible I swear yesterday I was just thinking about gaurav that he should get into serials which are not like uttaran but full of suspense thriller and romance like left right and left 👏
We really connect some way pata nahi kaise I swear I am shocked 😆
Wow just what we all need Rasya Vechchha and SUSPENSE 😆😉
sounds zabardast thriller 👏
I am looking forward to it cant wait to read further 😆



Haha, I know..my story will be abt how to live life happily, and also abt love, rejection, pain and all...😊 Pm some ideas abt our Rasya to me! Im sure u would have many dreams 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great work sneha. better to read ur wonderful updates than watching that crap. well done👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: itstimetospeak

great work sneha. better to read ur wonderful updates than watching that crap. well done👏



Haha, thank u disha! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gaurav Sir posted this video...
Rasya Dream Sequence

http://www.facebook.com/video/video.php?v=10151324669767005

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