She his weakness OR Thaakath!- the K-Jodi - Sukor - a Bonus. - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sritama for the overwhelming feedback..

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Fantastic update Sumi di👏👏thrill n suspense quotient getting more n more intriguing n interesting👌👌our super cop Suraj saving Chakor n Asha in full on filmly style😍as always sparks flying high btwn Sukor🔥Suraj not replying to Chakor n Chakor getting irritated with his arrogance..😍both of dem r getting deeply affected by each other's behavior n both of dem thinking abt each other n making opinions😍😀m getting so nostalgic n emotional seeing Chakor calling Suraj devil..missing MeeJay more n more😢😢it's reminding me Sukor's junglee billi-pakhandi fights❤❤now d villains hv understood dey r up against not only one bt two khatras..can't wait to know why dey kidnapped that boy n d girl n why Asha said powder to Suraj..is it a drug racket?M also wondering abt d precap..d whole Ajay incident seems a preplaned trap to fool d villains..n Suraj forcefully taking Chakor with him n both escaping..m getting those golden Sukor safar vibes😍🔥❤super exited to read d next part Sumi di😍😍

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sonia so much

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Interesting updates with full of suspense,drama & thrill With every update story become more interesting Waiting for next update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Smita for your detailed comment. Aaawwh sukor intensity haha as of now the Arrogant and the Devil are intense in their work. 🙈🙈🙈 Omg tantantaaan... Too short a period 🤣🤣🤣

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Part 3A:

Wow such a terrific, breathtaking update Sumi 👌👌👏👏, so much excitement,like a thriller movie😇😇, the way Suraj saved them, like a filmy hero, amazing😍😍. I'm going crazy just imagining Vj in that scene 😍😍but It's sad that Asha went in coma as being an eyewitness her deposition is very important in this case. Suraj's ignoraning her questions, rough & tough attitude bothering Chakor😊😊😉. Tanu's discretion on informing Suraj & Ajay about the bribe matter was praiseworthy👏. Whereas the offenders got mad at them for repeatedly failing to commit their mischief. Indeed they have two khatras to handle which is like making possible the impossibility😀😀. It's sad Asha's friends have been abducted by the miscreants but I'm still confused about their abduction & what misdeed the evildoers committed, may be they are a drug trafficker as Asha always says the word 'powder '. It's good that luckily they were saved due to the sacks being opened in the carelessness of the miscreants. Just looking forward to suppressing the evils in sukor hands & waiting for some blusterous action sequences which will be a sheer treat to us😍😍, then the beginning of sukor intense love & sweet relationship with a taannn taannaaaa taannn sukor romance😍😍😜😜. Over all a fantastic, super fast paced update, full of anxiety & excitement throughout the part.

Precap is as usual very thrilling & excitative, waiting for the Mall incident , Suraj's plan to catch the perpetrators red handed to unfold.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi good paced story👏👏👏 fantastic update....

Intrigue again intact.

Chakor suraj angle is getting interesting... keep it up.

Powder refers to drugs kya??

Pleaseeee tell me that Ajay suraj have a plan!!! And the sword connection... wondering wondering🤔🤔🤔🤔

Update soon😜

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

Sumi good paced story👏👏👏 fantastic update....

Intrigue again intact.

Chakor suraj angle is getting interesting... keep it up.

Powder refers to drugs kya?? sort of yes but something more which came as a hitting to me...

Pleaseeee tell me that Ajay suraj have a plan!!! And the sword connection... wondering wondering🤔🤔🤔🤔

Update soon😜

Niki...🤗

@ bold blue just going to check with Suraj, ugh the Devil is not even looking at me...

update soon😔 i am updating like yesterday and stiill you want soon bah... Insatiable bossy!!!

love you loads but....❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 3 B

Watering still………………..

Asha was moved to a special room on the first floor and was on 24*7 vigilance. Only Chakor, another senior trusted nurse,Tanu and the Chief were allowed to attend to her. The room was under cctv surveillance and curtains were drawn when she was dressed.

Due to the trauma she went into a comatized state, but her parameters were slowly improving.

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The Gokul Lodge

He walked in his jeans and plain black T with a back pack to the Gokul lodge. I need a room for couple of days he said at the reception. He was asked to show his ID proof and also his work letter if any as he could not be judged as a student.

He produced all documents which showed his name Aditya…

He very casually enquired about the boy stating he had referred him to stay there as the lodge was very good but did not come to pick him from the bus stop. They said he left for the village and refused to divulge any information as it was confidential. There was a big photo of Kabir Nath. A very simple looking gentleman with a pleasant smile. He had been letting the lodge at very nominal rates. He has many establishments and many businesses but he never visits the lodge.

He was taken around the lodge. The ground floor had the reception and the visitors lounge. There was an office room beside. It was a simple, neat lodge with good sanitation facility. It had three floors with 15 small rooms in each floor and common washrooms in the corner of the corridors of every floor. The stairs were well lit and also had a lift. The ground was very vast with trees around and bushes through and fenced.

At quite a distance there was a small outhouse and was locked. It looked like the old furniture and mattresses were stocked there before being discarded. It was not lit and was very dark. He went towards the outhouse when the lodge manager said.. its an old outhouse and not used. The fence had two gates, one was the regular one and the one behind the outhouse, which was chained and locked as not in use.

He was taken to the room on the third floor and given the keys and said the master key will be with the office. The dos and donts were mentioned especially no alcohol and smoking. He stayed there for sometime locked the room and went down.

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Suraj was on his jeep and was thinking about the girl and the word powder… what powder ??talcum powder and why was there a sword as the book mark.. whose book was it???…he was surprised as why suddenly he remembered the sword. She is too bold did not fear even at the gun pointing to her… She ran to save Asha inspite of her life at stake. Why no surname??

Ajay walked to him. Any luck with the lodge he asked.. Not yet… I will go again late night and check he said.

But you have to sleep… its already three days now and you have not even gone to your quarters. You worry about the girl but more so about the Dr.

Suraj looked up Dr??? what nonsense??…

If it’s nonsense then why are you down every night below her room at the dark side of the hospital. He could not answer. Yes why am I here?? Why I don’t want anything to happen to her?? He saw the lights switch off at her room…

He just left Ajay there and drove his jeep … he left the jeep in his quarters and went to the lodge..

It was dark… he went around very cautiously and found…………………. His eyes grew bright….it was dawning when he quickly went to his room.

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It was the control room

Ajay got the information that there were two persons at the riverside in a very dazed state.

The two were admitted in a different hospital. Ajay was there to enquire with his team as Suraj had gone to the Gokul lodge…

They were not in sense and were very disoriented. They were put through various tests which was bringing out shocking results.

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It was morning and it was Chakor’s off, she wanted to go to the mall nearby and informed the Chief and went ahead……

He called the hospital and checked about Asha and also asked about the Arrogant Lady when he was told that she had gone out as it was her off and Chief is with Asha.

He got a bit agitated…He got ready and was about to make a call when the control room called and told him that news… he just grabbed his guns and drove fast his jeep.

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It was the mall…

There were quite a lot of people going about.

She came to the centre of the mall only to realise there was a hue and cry and confusion and all the people were literally fearing and shouting.

There was a tall guy looking like a goonda who was holding Ajay at the knife point. She got shocked. Ajayyyyy she came running towards him and stopped… The guy was huge with a big jacket on him and was literally scaring all the police around. Move move else I will kill him…Call your that Officer the Encounter Specialist....

She ran and stood on the side as the police stopped her when she saw the Devil ramming his jeep's brakes, opening the door while on motion, doubling up the steps to the centre with rage and holding his gun towards the goonda….

By the time there were many police vans and ambulance stationed and the police were clearing the people. Cordoning the mall and specifically the central area.

Suraj shouted.. surrender yourself…. Kasib… don’t die like Garv … Kasib was the thug who had escaped from Bareilly and Suraj was chasing him when he diverted to save Asha. The thug shouted, badla lengey. Aaaoo! you think you are a big Police Officer … You killed my friend in the name of encounter … see I am going to kill your man… pointing the knife at Ajay’s chest. Suraj quickly noticed that he was holding Ajay with his right along with the knife and his left hand was on his jacket packet. Chakor saw this and was jittering…

Surrender Kasib he shouted again. Noo… I am going to kill him in front of your eyes like you did to my friend he said…. Suraj just looked deep into Ajay’s eyes who was standing still …. There was chaos and confusion. Ajay just looked at Suraj with his hands in air.

Suraj lifted his right gun, Down your guns Officer, I will kill your man.. Kasib shouted.

You need not kill I will …In a fraction of seconds before anyone could realise…Suraj quickly shot Ajay on his right shoulder blade with his right gun and shot Kasib straight at his temple with his left and a second shot quickly on his shoulder down so he left the string attached to his jacket. The police rained him with bullets while Ajay slid down in pool of blood to his left holding the knife along with Kasib’s hand .. ….

She screeched Noo…………. Ajayyyy…pushing the police officer she started to run to him when Suraj turned around and saw her…he ran to her…

You are ruthless….. she screamed…. how can you shoot your man…. …. Hey listen… he was trying to hold her. He came trusting you….You are a Devil.

He caught hold of her hands…pulling her close. With stern face…Shut up he said. She was hysterical non stop hitting his chest. You heartless how can you kill Ajay. I can if I have to save all here he said. How can you she teared and shouted holding his collar, you killed your own deputy.

Arrogant Lady can you stop… just shut up and get into the jeep…..dragging her, she was refusing, within no seconds he just lifted her ran down to his jeep pushing her inside... There was too much chaos but the ambulance went fast taking Ajay and another group was taking care of Kasib….

You are a Devil she shouted, tears were rolling.

He just drove his jeep… His walkie talkie was nonstop and he was giving them instructions while trying to hold her……

Stop else I will jump she said trying to grab his hands…

Jump Jump Jump Now he shouted……

She grabbed his uniform collar which gave way and she saw the sword pendent, she froze..

They drove a longway to a river side and the jeep screeched to stop… he got down and got a call and he calmed..

He gave her water.. she just threw it and went down crying… sitting on the stone.

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The saplings…. A sneak peak

saab I don’t want anything please help with her studies she cried…

He cried holding his hands…

He was charred completely… the one who has the sword ……He died without completing ….

She cried….he did not take his responsibility… he left her to die…. I saw her suffer and her heart stopped in my hands..

I knew nothing but all I would get is a bookmark with the sword drawn on it.. and a .........and it suddenly stopped…. I trust no one, I fear none as there is none to worry about me…

Their phone battery died.

All were searching the K Jodi……. well Smita winsss it’s the Khadoos Jodi…. and technically the Khatra Jodi tooo.

Ready for the rollercoaster ride of flashbacks and actions…and some ……… hmm togetherness .. of the Arrogant and the Devil......…..

YES OR NO......................

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Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sritama for the insta comment. 🙏🙏😍

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Ufff Sumi di..absolutely mind blowing..it was a complete entertainment package..thrill,exitement,suspense perfectly blended😍😍all in all a dhamaka entertainer 👌👌👏👏👏it seems Gokul lodge will play an integral part in d story..great to see Suraj anticipating it n from now onwards he will keep a close vigil there..Ajay- Suraj conversation..n Ajay truly caught Suraj off guard..Ajay asking to Suraj why is he thinking so much abt Chakor, n why is he keeping a close eye on her..n our super cop caught red handed😁😍Ajay already understood d unsaid facts😀d super thrilling,action packed mall scene😍👏👌Suraj-Ajay eye contact..d way Suraj-Ajay staged that drama n nabbed Asha's shooter..it was so engrossing..n Suraj-Chakor's fiery interaction🔥🔥😍😍Chakor repeatedly calling him devil..Suraj forcing her to come with him..their tashans in d jeep n Chakor's surprise n shock seeing Suraj's sword pendant..Sukor's first proper interaction n it was absolute bomb🔥🔥🔥❤❤❤

Eagerly waiting to see how their equation unfolds from here onwards n Sukor vs d evil fight...damn exited for d next part😍😍❤❤❤thanks lot Sumi di for dis absolute entertainer..loving it to d core👌👌❤❤

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumiiii fast paced action thriller this is👏👏👏👏

Gokul lodge to ajay's observation to the action filled mall to the jeep tashan to this uffff unbearable suspense of the sword..... everything is bang on and fab.

Where is today's update??

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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Sumiiii fast paced action thriller this is👏👏👏👏

Gokul lodge to ajay's observation to the action filled mall to the jeep tashan to this uffff unbearable suspense of the sword..... everything is bang on and fab.

Where is today's update?? 😱😱🤪🤪

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Thanks Sonia for the lovely words

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Another amazing & fantastic update full of full package of drama,thrill,entertainment & 👌👌👌 Mall scene was full of action👊👊👊 & finally first SuKor fully interaction Loved this story full of suspense Now my curiosity increased what happened next & how this story unfold Thanks dear for this lovely SuKor story

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