She his weakness OR Thaakath!- the K-Jodi - Sukor - a Bonus. - Page 13

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks Smita for the comments.

Happy all liked it and 😜😜cardiology class

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Wow the bonus was actually a sweetest treat for us, so enjoyable & pleasant 😍😍❤❤. I just imagining Meera as Mrs. Chakor Khatri with the mangalsutra & sindoor😍😍. They were psychologically affected during the 1 week separation😊😊. Their first night, the nervousness of the newly wed couple , their pounding heart, her worriredness, holding the book upside down😁😁, his trying to make her comfortable❤❤. Loved the innocent Chakor, her simplicity, her medical interpretation about his pounding heart were killing me 😁😁❤❤& expert Tanu's super expert advise about first night was so cute & amusing😂😂. Their first night was interrupted due to the emergency but their awkwardness slightly reduced, her being amazed by his understanding & supportive nature & happy tears was so sweet😊😊. And what can I say about the blissful morning romance, it was so fiery & fabulous🔥 🔥 😍😍& the sweet journey of their marriage life began utterly. I think the lizard deserves our thanks & gratitude for bringing them closer to each other so soon 😜😜& you for giving us such beautiful update😍😍 . Loved their happy family moment with their symbol of love, the fairy Pari Khatri😍😍😚😚, loved her cuteness & Suraj's naughtiness😜😜 which was quite incredible but so adorable😍😍. Thanks a lot Sumi for this short & sweet bonus🙏🙏. Take care dear, have fun & enjoy your vacation which is requisite for you.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita38

Thank you so much dear for writing this beautiful lovely story in spite of your busy schedule. U r an awesome writer and more awesome person as u never deny our wishes.

Enjoy your vacay!!

😍😍

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Awwwwww this is such a sweet one❤❤🥰🥰

Let me tell you that the end is absolutely a cutie pie one ❤❤

And ofcourse with sukor things have to be different... so its good that the night was disturbed and then we got the unplanned morning🙈🙈🙈 thanks to the lizard and the latch😜😜

Her doctori explanation about the heart beating was just😂👍

A big thank you to ankita😜 and tons of love to you for writing it inspite of a hectic schedule.

Niki🤗🤗🤗

Thank uuu.. 🙈🙈Doctori explanation.. Poor girl

Little reptile which make me jump too but 😍😍

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: nemo316

Beautiful Bonus 😍❤️️.

Sukor's awkward first night was beautifully written, Chakor's insecurities, Suraj's supportive nature and both excitedly worried of what's coming ahead. Tina's giggling was funny and cute.

The morning scene 😍😍, we must thank the lizard for getting them close 😂😂.

Sukor scene with their Pari was adorable, so she's daddy's daughter, and thank you for naughty Suraj, hope Pari's wish gets fulfilled 😉😉.


Thanks Sumi, and enjoy your break ❤️️❤️️.

Thanks so much Mai🤗

Yes thank thanks the little crawly.. Else i would have been another day of cardiology class😂

Happy you liked pari..

Break yep enjoying the divine blessings

Loads of love 😍

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Awww thats a sweet bonus❤

touch my Angel I will Kiss my fairy for you both are my empire…..

this is Awww❤😍❤ . loved it.. hv a happy trip

Hiii Uma🤗🤗🤗

Yep you got that right 👍🏼

Thanks so much dear

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Posted: 5 years ago

many wanted this in the same thread so posting it here

The White…. The Blue…hayee its Hue….K-Jodi… My SuKor a miniOS

Hey Ram…. Mai tho gayee …. Have loads of work after the vacation but those insta pics of the white and blue jeans in dude…. Sumi gone bonkers….. Kept aside all the work……. Ughhh let it be for the later in the day or burn the midnight oil…. Am like keeping my palm under the chin and………………………..

Ok……few twitter hearts were liking the little cuteaaa pari but wanted to know what was the effect of the K Jodi when they realized about their symbol of love was going to come in their hands!!!

I did not have any thoughts earlier but dude in White hugging his torso and that blue slim fit jean….my hues was coming out……………

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Just a precap………………….

She held his head caressing…when he said I love you….. You are so beautiful my Angel…. He carried her to their bed placing her…. Things were taking its course…… Kissing her…… they went into a different world not hearing the door bell ringing…… the helpers smiled to themselves and left the couple to mingle in their new world to return back later………………

The Angel and Darling started their journey not in a set way, set time, set place as when love takes over it does not see time or place…………..

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It was midday

It was new…. They never realized that what they wanted to take slow and comfortable had indeed taken place with so much love, passion and warmth…

They slept in peace….he was holding his angel to his chest and she was hugging him tight….she slowly woke up to see herself clinging to his torso.. …. An unknown happiness …. She was just lost in his handsome face….He opened his eyes..looking at the beauty in front of him. Her face was pink and she lowered her eyes not able to meet his as she was eaten with shy… He smiled and kissed her forehead… and her eyes…

Holding her chin he lifted her and asked… are you ok? She nodded yes… he lowered the quilt to find infact she had sore marks on her hands… neck and............ I am sorry, is it hurting?… I have been harsh… she quickly closed his mouth and said no… I am fine…. She could not talk more as she was indeed palpitating in his hold… He realized and soothed her to calm…I love you he said…

His phone vibrated when he asked the helpers to come in 15 minutes. They both refreshed….

Tanu called her and asked if she should call in leave giggling when the K doctor said I will be there soon set the OT for the 2 pm surgery she said.

Suraj was getting ready when she saw his torso…. Toned but with quite a few wound marks… unknowingly she caressed his mark on his rib..and the others too … she teared a bit when he said… Angel, these are the prize I got for battling the bad….. please don’t tear I know I am not that with a perfect tor…..she caressed and said You are a Kshatriya and you look more handsome and brave like a warrior, I am proud of You… they were lost in each other gaze when the door bell rang.

He got a call from the Commissioner and quickly got into his Uniform and left grabbing a quick bite and dropping her at the hospital though she said she would walk down.

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They both were drowned in their work and missed lunch too.

Suraj was called for a special protection duty for the Prime Minister and he had to rush to Delhi…. She knew the reality hitting and she took it bold though her heart was craving for him…

He was very professional the Devil infact forgot her for few minutes and was giving the instructions to Ajay and his team in Delhi while packing his uniforms and his stuff …

She was calm looking at him when he realized she was standing….. Am sorry I just….

You are packing for……………… she could not complete… he said may be for a week I am not sure it depends on the dignitaries program..

His walkie was beeping and the jeep was there to take him to the airport…. He asked her to stay safe or be in the hospital room till he comes. She assured him she will manage and act accordingly. It was just a day and they had to part…… He walked to the door and turned to wave to her… her eyes ….. was clouding……it cringed him. He doubled up and pulled her aside to their room… She hugged him and said… I am sorry…. I will not cry nor be your weakness… But promise me to be safe… He kissed her on her forehead and said I promise, I am Yours… she smiled wishing him good luck.

The Officer walked straight and set off to his duty…..while the Doctor was holding his heart which just beats for her…

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It was over ten days and he would call her whenever he would get his time but it was too difficult as either she will be in the OT or in rounds or if she called his phone would go unanswered … but a good morning Angel and good night Darling was never missed everyday.

Though engrossed in their work they missed each other during their few moments and more so psychologically and physically too now. She would touch her swore parts the marks left by him and smile… while thinking if he would remember and miss or the Devil will be taking over him due to his work. He would touch his sword which had the lock along with it which he added to his chain when he had ordered the mangalsutra for her….He would kiss it at the start of the day and then go about forgetting everything when he is on his Protect Dignitary mission.

She would stay in her room or in their apartment depending upon her work, but they could not converse much as he was always in the high alert protection mode.

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It was the last day for him and he and his team were appreciated for their meticulous planning and the dignitary set off for their countries.

He was called by the Gwalior Training camp to be felicitated and to give special speech to the budding cadets as he is the best encounter specialist and the best Commando, before flying to Kanpur and a party thereafter.

He was very happy and invited her and sent air tickets to join him in the celebration. She was eagerly looking forward more than the party to see him as it’s been long….

She had a surgery that morning and she instructed her team and also her assistant surgeon about the course of action and set off to the airport afternoon. She spoke to him and he sent his pic on whatsapp and she was awed…..

He was in pure white shirt tight fitting his physic with a blue slim fitting jean with coat at the side. For the first time she was seeing him in a shirt as he had always been in T or in his uniform. You look handsome she said and immediately turned pink when he said ahhhannnn not bad my Angel is drooling. Come fast he said…His love was evident. She was about to check in when she got a call from the hospital that the patient who was operated in the morning had developed severe complications.

She debated and with no option called him to tell him that she was unable to make it and has to go to the hospital when he paused for a second and said oh ok and the line got disconnected…..

She could not reach him again as it was switched off. She was perplexed….. but the Doctor put everything aside and went to fulfill her professional oath that she had taken while taking her certificate.

It was late midnight and the patient was stable….

She went to her apartment in the saree she wore to the airport…. Holding his pic was crying… His phone was still not reachable…She heard the door bell.

The helpers were sleeping so she went to open the door…………………….

The Devil was indeed standing at the door…. She just could not believe herself….

Suraaa ….jjjjjjj its you…… she just clung to him tight and started to cry….How did you come?? What happened to your that function??? I am sorry but I couldnot leave the patient… I know you must be upset…that’s why you switched off your phone…..I am not suitable for a married life… I could not meet your expectation… I am not a good wife to participate in your happiness….I know you adjust for everything but I am…but.... I love you when he just held her tight and lifted her holding her waist and placing his fingers on her lips….Shhhhhhh oh god you talk too much…..All I needed to hear was the last three words that you told… and don’t cry and spoil my White Shirt he said…. My Angel likes it, he smirked.

Her heart was heaving.. she slowly smiled….. and, he said...I did not switch off my phone the battery died as I did not carry the powerbank….

He wiped her tears and hugged her… closing the door behind….he took her to their room…

When you told that you had to go to the hospital I knew it was an emergency, but before I could say anything my phone died and when I reached to call from the landline guess you went to the OT so could not reach you.

I quickly finished the felicitation and did not stay behind for the cocktails as this Cock wanted to meet his Hen soon… So I quickly got onto the available jeep and drove off to see you. I was sure my Angel would be brooding over and accusing herself….hmmm she said….I was scared that you….

He lifted her chin and said Chakor we know about our professions and I left you too… Like I said before, we both are married to our coat and uniform first….but still, she said….. he realized she was in a beautiful muslin saree….

looking at her from top to toe he said...You look beautiful… and….. should we waste our time……he kissed her cheeks…and neck below. loosing herself....

Surajjj….You look handsome in this white and blue …. He was indeed ravishing with the tight fitting shirt to his toned physic and his slim fitting jean which was low waist revealing his toned abs and the packs….she was getting affected that her face was changing colours bringing those hues in her which did not go unnoticed by her Darling and he was feeling proud.

Lifting her chin he said looking into her eyes….Doctor my four chambers are gushing with blood and aorta is pumping too fast… can you please treat, this is also an emergency… She smiled… hugging him tight pressing herself to him.…. hmmm my operation is always success but don’t know about the patient.

He lifted her and placed her on the bed saying this patient will survive only if this doctor treats him personally with her personal instruments.. she blushed terribly…

Hmmmm she was holding his crook while he was devouring her with his subtle but which soon turned into passionate kissing and she was ready to have his marks which will be imprinted on her. it indeed pained but that was the pain she wanted to have... she wished for…. The week long separation was kindling them and the Doctor was treating her patient with utmost special care. They mingled together. As promised by him he returned safe to her as he was hers…..

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Life was going like the uneven ECG reading as work was taking its prime position but not that they did not have their moments. Their bond was growing more and more that the professions they married to did not come in between their passion….

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They completed six months of married life….. wished each other with a hug and a kiss…

He was getting ready to go to his base office getting into the jeep when he saw her going down in the balcony while she was waving to him…

Saab called the helpers… Chakorr…. He doubled up quickly calling Tanu on his phone…

He carried her to the bed and placed her sprinkling water on her face. Chakor, Chakor…. Look at me….

Tanu quickly came with the gynae from the hospital who checked Chakor and…………………….Tanu happiness knew no bound, she hugged her and felt happy for her…. Suraj was becoming impatient for the first time …

Can you both please tell me he said… both the doctors just shook his hands and said be ready for a Baby Khatri Leaving the K Jodi… they both left for the hospital….. Tanu said Doctor I will mark you leave today…

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He walked in towards her with tears in his eyes…. Varied emotions… She was in tears…. She could not believe neither could he…. …. He didnot speak anything…..

She was worried for a second as if he would think it was too soon as they did not plan about family….but missed on protection as passion was taking over their mini separations... She searched in his eyes… her lips were trembling… do you feel its soon she asked….. he hugged her…. My Angel ….kissing her forehead …. Soon??? Why do you ask…. I cant say how happy I am…. I love you and how do I thank you for this symbol of our love.

She cried hugging him…. Looking at her he said… I know whats going in you…If it’s a little angle like you or a devil like me…. My love will be the same. Please remove all your insecurities… I love this additional responsibility… thank you for everything….I hope and pray I can be beside you always…

He hugged her thinking about his father…. Thank you daddy for finding me the best lock….and blessing me with a complete family…

She slept in his arms … her face was plain…. Innocent with happiness. He cradled her close to him … caressing her flat belly he said… who ever you are a little angel or a little devil…. I will love you and protect you a lot but my love for my Angel will be always more…. As she is too precious to me…. She is my first baby and will always be my best….. He kissed her belly…. and laid beside her eyes closed.

She smiled with her eyes closed as she listened to the man who was there like a rock, like a pillar who will always hold her as his first responsibility.

I saw through the balcony as the sky was clear white with blue clouds but the clouds indeed had its own silver lining which is a very special hue.

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Hope you all liked it...

Now running to do my work!!! which is turning red......smiley1

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