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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter II

Sowing

Who has done this to her she asked…and any information about her? Ajay said we don’t know but will soon find out.

Our policemen will be here round the clock on guard so that those guys donot come back. Fine, but please let them maintain silence and let their presence not intimidate the others…thinking to herself hope that special officer do not come and rule again. Ajay smiled to himself.. She turned to him with a questioning look, when he said Sorry, Yes Sure.

Ajay gave instructions to the constables and asked them to watch out and also to let him know if they find any suspicious movement. He was telling DCP may come any time when the ward boy passed by oh god that K Inspector hmm.He remembered the way he just picked him by his collar when he was smoking inside the hospital corridor few months ago and warned him as he was visiting the Chief.

She walked to her recess room when there were two eyes watching her standing beside the reception….

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Tanu was with her.. Tanu and Chakor did their MBBS together while Chakor went ahead with Cardiology, Tanu went ahead with Anasthesia and being the native of Kanpur she was in this hospital for the past three years.

Tanu was always in touch with Chakor though Chakor never called her on her own but always responded to her calls. Chakor was giving instructions to the staff about the medicines and the schedule. She wanted half hourly update of the girls BP and cardiac functions. Half Hourly?? asked the nurse, she just said yes with a stern face. Oh god this K Doctor within one month but keeps us on pins… and don’t know Chief also listens to her hmm. She hardly smiles but don’t know from where all her smile comes when with the patients. Uggh she went in.

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He was sitting on his jeep bonette and was drinking chai.. with his eyes closed a few yards away from the place he found the girl. It was a cross road at the junction.

Ajay came by and said, Suraj the girl, her name is Asha is a second year college student and her parents are in Gonda village few Kms away from Kanpur. She stays in the girls hostel alongwith two other girls. She would go to her village over the weekends along with her other two friends a boy and a girl who were studying in a different college.. Being Friday she had gone to join her friends and proceed to the bus stop to go to their village. The three were planning to leave for their village.

Where do they stay he asked. The boy stays in the Gokul Lodge while the girl stays in her college hostel. Gokul Lodge??? Asked Suraj whose lodge is that. Ajay said it is that industrialist Kabir Nath the one who has many establishments and holds a respectable status in the society… Gokul Lodge is very famous and house many students and working bachelors. Hmm said Suraj. Where are the other two Suraj asked. May be they had gone to their village said Ajay. I doubt check it out Suraj said.

As a special officer Suraj was on another case on the lookout for a goonda who had escaped from Bareilly and he was informed that he was hiding in Kanpur. While looking for him Suraj saw few thugs chasing the girl and he turned his jeep chasing the thugs who ran into the by lane…. He got off the jeep and stopped running behind them when he heard the girl shout, realizing she was been hit he ran towards her to hold her as the knife had pierced her back and he carried her to his jeep. She was loosing her conscience but was speaking feebly and Suraj could hear the word powder. He alerted the control room and Ajay and team took charge but could not catch them.

He just closed his eyes for few minutes. He just jumped down and went ahead searching the roads which was cordoned by the police looking for clues. He just looked deeper and it was a mobile phone broken…. Must be the girls phone, she must have dropped it while being chased. He gave it to Ajay. The girls face came in his eyes, powder. He said Ajay what did she mean by powder?? . He got into the jeep to move when he stopped his engine and asked well that Dr.? Ajay briefed him.. No surname ?… and changed six locations?.. his brows lifted… interesting. Be alert and have an eye on the hospital he said. He drove… arrogant though saying to himself. Head justed his left hand band and his chain which had that special pendant that of the sword. The Sword of a Kshatriya, Khatri…

What’s the mystery behind Asha….He was thinking…..Unless she opens her mouth… and where are the other two? Six locations in four years and no surname… he shook his head why am I thinking of that arrogant doctor.

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The day dawned..

Asha was in ICU onobservation. Her parameters were fine. Suraj was at the hospital checking her belongings which had her one torn footwear and her small gold chain and her earrings. He looked at the footwear and gave it back. He checked if the parents were informed when he was told that their house was locked. He went to the reception and asked for Dr. Chaand and saw a book beside with a bookmark in it. It was handmade out of a simple chart paper that of a sword. His brows shrunk. By the time he could give a thought, the Chief walked to him. Officer I just was briefed by Dr.Chakor. We will ensure the best care. But Chief, Suraj said, he walked with Suraj and said in a low tone voice… I know what you worry but she is not like Dr. Rawat… Thanks he said when he turned around to see the reception desk the book was not there.

He walked into the ICU when Chakor was there looking at the reports showing her back.

He coughed entering and said How is she ? touching the medicine trolley beside Asha.

Shhhh please and can you kindly use the sanitizer there before touching anything.. and if you have a cold or cough kindly refrain coming into the ICU. She was stern.

Oh sorry he said just that but I am fine. She turned and looked at him Oh Officer its you….. she told him in soft voice. She is ok but still not back to her sense, it may take some time…

Thanks but she is a very important witness he said. Witness for you Officer but patient for me she said.

He looked at her and just walked back when he hit at the door. Be careful she said. Are you ok she asked. I am fine ….. Well ! I am Suraj Khatri, DCP and special officer...he introduced himself … Oh ! I am Dr.Chakor she said. Dr. Chakor….. ???? he asked Yes Dr. Chakor she said very firmly. He walked out of the ICU into the corridor and she looked through the small see through in the door.

The ward boy was there in the corner of the ICU corridor when Suraj called him and asked are you the one attending to Asha. He said scared haan saab. Hmmm ok keep the constables informed of her state he said. Jee saab…not well ? why are you sweating in AC his voice was just too sharp… no saab..ham teek hai… Hmm… chal…with a very very rough face. Bach gayi K Inspector pucca.

Chakor was looking through the small peep through of the ICU and was thinking Khatri…. Hmmm scaring the wardboy.

It was late evening….

Chakor went to her room to refresh, when she saw a small packet beside her room door. She looked at it. Surprised herself, I don’t have anyone to send me anything. She looked around there was none… she looked at the packet it was a small box covered and sealed in a red cloth. She went inside her room. She opened and was astonished. It had a diamond necklace with two bundles of Rs. 2000/- notes. A typed note saying. Shut the girl’s mouth. She looked at it firmly. She took the box, she called the reception asking if anyone had asked for her and sent anything. The reception replied No Dr. Chakor none had come for you. A man was standing beside the reception. He took his phone and called… Its not working… lets do it ourselves…. He said.. She took the box and asked the reception for Ajay or Khatri’s No. She tried both their numbers but Suraj couldnot be reached while Ajay’s was ringing but no response. She kept the box inside her cupboard and locked it. She told about it to Tanu who was worried terribly. Chakor please lets shift this case to the other district hospital saying we dont have enough facility when Chakor firmly said... I don't fear... I cannot leave the girl as her life is in danger. Tanu called the Chief...

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It was night….

The ICU was calm, both the constables were outside the main doors of the ICU at the end of the corridor as that was the only way to go and come out of the ICU.

The nurse had checked Asha’s parameters and went to the rest room and came back and sat on her chair. The ward boy came in saying the nurse is being called by another doctor. She told the ward boy to be there while she will come back immediately.

Chakor was walking down the corridor with many thoughts…it’s a day completed though Asha was clinically ok but she was not showing any sign of movement. She was expecting her to atleast roll her eyes if not any other development…..Ajay was calling her but her phone was on silent mode.

The ICU lights were flickering and she was wondering what was happening… she was walking towards the ICU….

Ashas eyes were slowly opening..she felt the whole room rotating circling around. she could not move but she could see blurringly someone rotating and moving towards her.

The ward boy was in the corner of the room with the small surgical knife in his hand was walking towards the bed.

He was close to the bed tube when Chakor tried opening the door…

It opened and she saw the wardboy back, what are you doing? Where is the nurse she asked.. the ward boy didnot answer when she saw another guy who was standing near the bathroom door pointing a gun at her…

The gun fired…… she yelled running to the bed…..

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It was the mall….. he was holding Ajay at the knife point.

DCP drop your gun else I will kill your man…

You need not I will… he fired at Ajay…..

He dropped down dead with many bullets on him.

You are ruthless….. she screamed how can you shoot your man…. He came trusting you….

He caught hold of her hands…pulling her close. With stern face… Arrogant Lady can you just shut up and get into the jeep….. pushing her….

You are a Devil she shouted,tears were rolling.

He just drove his jeep… Stop else I will jump she said

Jump Jump Jump Now he shouted……she saw the sword pendent, she froze

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It was a dark room, they both were tied together…. They were dazed….. not knowing what was happening to them.

We don’t know where our children are cried the parents at the police station.

The single footwear…………….

Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Sumi dear🤗,

just loving the flow and the gripping precaps.

story is going in

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jet speed with so much details. I am trying to grab each of it.

I am loving it .. seems they have K past.😁 eager to know about it. Thrilling and exciting .. seems sukor style scene on the way.

you just

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shoot it on.. we are awaiting.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh my god umaaaa you just made my day 🤗🤗🤗🤗💃💃💃

Those gifs Sumi going bonkers

😜🤭🤭I know speed but that's how when I pen for the wild couple 🤣🤣

Thank youuuu loads 😍😍😘

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumiiii dear Uma's gif's have said it all!!😍😍👌👌👍

Loving the filmi style entertainer and waiting for the suraj action scenes and chakor suraj interaction.

The sword angle is intriguing....precap seems superrrrrrr .... all in all it is going great.

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

Sumiiii dear Uma's gif's have said it all!!😍😍👌👌👍

Loving the filmi style entertainer and waiting for the suraj action scenes and chakor suraj interaction.

The sword angle is intriguing....precap seems superrrrrrr .... all in all it is going great.

Update soon


Niki thanks deary 😊🤗🤗🤗

😜🙈I know but filmy

Update uff bossy always Insatiable.

Update well... too much speed not good. Sooo will update 🤔🤔🤔🤔 next week 😂

Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sritama for that in depth comment. Means a lot

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A complete nail biting thriller👏👏👏👏full of suspense n thrill👌👌Suraj trying to uncover d crime n unravel d powder mystery,enquiring n suspecting something wrong abt Asha's friends bt at d same time feeling curious abt Chakor after knowing her name n transfer history,thinking abt her arrogance..I guess in his subconscious mind n heart Chakor has already created a deep impact😍Suraj's sword sign pendent,d sword sign in d bookmark..I guess that sword sign will play an important part in d story..Chakor keeping a strict vigil on Aasha's condition,Suraj meeting Chakor n Chakor again reprimanding him n Suraj asking abt her full name n she replying only Chakor...such an intriguing meeting it was😍eagerly waiting to know Sukor's past history..d thugs trying to bribe Chakor to kill Asha,bt dey didn't know that Chakor too was a khatra for dem..ward boy joining hands with d thugs n trying to kill Asha with another person n Chakor caught dem red handed..such an engrossing last chapter..

Totally kept me on d edge of my seat..hope both Asha n Chakor will escape unhurt..d precap too was super thrilling ..so many chilling mysteries n drama..damn exited to see how d mystery unfolds..eagerly waiting for d next part..😊❤

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Smita for that lovely comment

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Part 2:

At first thank you Sumi for updating in due course even being so busy🙏❤❤. It's such an amazing & thrilling update Sumi👌👌. Loved Dr. Chakor, her calm but firm attitude, hardly smiles but everyone was shocked at her interaction with the patients👌👌👍. Because of her strictness, everyone fears & appreciates her & but may be her truthfulness, protesting against injustice was the reason behind her repeatedly transfer. Whereas the uncontrollable, desperate DCP, not just scary to the thugs but Hospital's ward boy too is afraid of him😎😎😍😍. Indeed they are a kharush jodi or can I say a khatarnak Jodi😍😍😜😜, (not sure but I guess it will be suitable for them, what's say Sumi ??😉😉)

The way suraj rescued Asha, he's getting information about her, searching the clues, so thrilling, so amazing, totally filmy style👌👌👏👏. They're remembering each other even in all the disturbance, have an impact on each other be it good or bad but it seems they couldn't resist of thinking about each other😊😊😉😉. I'm wondering that his locket & her bookmark was same symbol, the sword, quite interesting, then their first proper meeting, her saying about the precautions to be taken, loved her words "she is witness for you but patient for me"👏👏. Typical police & doctor's attitude, he's giving self intro, deftly trying to know her surname😀😀. All were so nicely done.

The attempt to bribe her failed,they tried to kill Asha with the help of the ward boy but I'm so curious to know whether Chakor can save Asha & herself 😔 😔 , Just waiting for the actual truth to come out & sukor fight against the evildoers.

Precap was quite interesting & exciting 👍👍, I'm shocked, who got shot, who died in the encounter between the police & the miscreants, Ajay or someone else but it seems sukor disputes began, Chakor surprised to see his pendant. Everything was so mysterious. Can't wait to know about the story of the symbol. It's full of thrill & suspense ,increase my inquietude . Eagerly waiting for the next. Thanks.

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Thanks so much for your encouragement


And you got it right yesss the Khadoosh Jodi 🙈🙈😜😜😜😍

Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 3 (A)

Watering

At the ICU

The ward boy was close to the bed near the oxygen tube when Chakor tried opening the door…

It opened and she saw the wardboy’s back, what are you doing? Where is the nurse she asked.. the ward boy didnot turn or answer. She saw another guy who was standing near the bathroom door pointing a gun at her and another at Asha.

The guy had masked his face. Who are you ?she shouted.

She saw the masked man being hit by a bullet on his shoulder from her behind and the masked man shot the wardboy…. He turned back ran inside the bathroom and jumped quickly through the window.

She yelled running towards the bed and hugged Asha. Asha opened her eyes looking at Chakor and closed her eyes immediately and her parameters where shooting abnormally due to the trauma….

Chakor just could not understand what happened.. the nurse and other staff ran to the ICU along with the police constables hearing the gun shots. Hugging Asha she lifted her head to see the door….

It was Suraj with his gun…..He shouted ..Ajay….follow the masked guy from the back of the ICU he spoke on his walkie talkie aloud… turning to Chakor…move her to another room. He ran towards the entrance.

Ajay was outside and ran hearing Suraj on the walkie talkie towards the backside while the masked guy jumped on to the motorbike which was revving and waiting forhim. They both fled away.

Ajay was fretting for missing them but fired few more bullets at them.

Suraj was fuming, banging his pistol on his thighs.

They informed the control room and they walked back to the hospital.

Asha went into comatose stage due to the trauma… Chakor and the Chief were treating her.

Suraj looked at the Chief and said.. We need to be more careful and she must be on 24 hours vigilance. Is there a safer room?

He looked at Chakor and asked… you ok? Yes she said but how did you come?

He didnot answer her but just walked away asking about the ward boy.

Ajayfollowed him…

Can’t he answer me? Am I non existent? Devil! she said to herself. Tanu came running hearing everything. Chakor are you fine…how is Asha?

I am ok,but Asha has gone into trauma … she was worried.

But Tanu how did he come?….Chakor asked… Who? asked Tanu. That Officer, the Devil (softly within herself)… I was not able to reach both of them…. Tanu smiled a bit and said well he has another name by our staff … what? the K Inspector… matlab…. The Chief called them to his cabin by then.

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Suraj, Ajay were there along with the Chief.

Chakor walked in after ensuring Asha was put to proper rest and on anti trauma IV fluids.

How did you… Chakor asked?

Where is the box given to you Suraj asked…. Its in my room she said, looking at Tanu…

Tanu nodded yes.

A small fb

Chakor why do you want to get into trouble again and again. Lets move this case to another govt.hospital. You have already been transferred so many times. Don’t stake your life. Said Tanu.

No, her life is in danger and I am used to these and I fear none said Chakor and there is no one to worry about me too. Tanu chuckled. She was calling Ajay and Suraj from the hospital landline as she never uses her mobile and does not want anyone to know her number.

Tanu quickly called the Chief who in turn called Suraj and briefed him.

Suraj was already nearby as he was having his own doubts about the ward boy.

Ajay saw the missed call from the hospital, he called Tanu who gave Chakor’s mobile no after much deliberation and he called her only not to be answered.

Anticipating trouble Suraj had walked in to the ICU and was behind Chakor when she opened the door. Seeing the masked man aiming at Chakor and at Asha he aimed at him.

The rest we know

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The Chief’s cabin

The wardboy, how can he do like that she said … and why was he killed? Chakor asked.

The Chief was perplexed. He could not do anything as the appointments of the staffs were done through the recruitment exams by the centre and the hospitals have no control over their background checks.

Ajay said,he was killed so that he does not reveal anything if caught. He would have been asked to cut the oxygen tube but he didn’t as you were there so the masked guy wanted to shut you and Asha but…..as Suraj was there he couldn’t do….…. We need to check about the wardboy she said.

Suraj said its no use as these are just arrows who will not be given much information… they will be lured with money that’s it. The constable called Ajay and told that there was a huge money packet in the ward boy’s room and his mobile has no details all erased. Hmm that’s evident….

She brought her packet and gave it to Ajay who put it inside a sealed cover to check for fingerprints. Chakor quickly said but I did touch and open it.

Suraj just looked at her… You should not have with a stern face.

He wished the chief bye and walked away with Ajay instructing the constables and asking for more to secure the backside too. Asha was shifted to the first floor.

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The evil was shouting in anger.

Again failed…. He kicked Deeraj who was already wounded due to the bullet from Suraj and was being treated by their doctor who was sweating in fear.

And that lady doctor, who is she?? He was briefed about her. So we have two Khatras to handle… he raged…

He walked to the underground of his bungalow which lead into another passage leading to a room.

It was a dark room, It was now over three days….

He saw the two… the boy and the girl tied together…. They were blindfolded and hands and legs tied. They were dazed….. not knowing what was happening to them.

Again Deeraj! you got the most useless ones. They are too new and lost their sense too quickly. Just throw them down the river before they come to senses. Are you sure they did not see anything. No boss they were walking to the bus stop and at the lonely lane we picked them comatizing them.. only that third girl we did not anticipate he scratched his head.

Hmm I will take care but that devil is there so lets cool for a day.. Keep a watch at the doctor. And be careful that nothing goes to his ears…. No No he will not know…

He kicked the two…. The thugs covered them in a sack and carried them to the van.

They drove in the dark and threw the sacks into the river not realizing the rope tied around the mouth of the sacks have opened. Both the sacks rolled down to the river. The dhobi at the banks saw the two sacks. He called out those nearby who were washing the laundry and ran towards the rolling sacks..

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The Gonda village

The parents of the boy and the girl were worried as their son and their daughter who come home for the weekend had not turned and also their phones were not reaching. It was already Monday they went to their local thana and gave a complaint.

The local thana informed the control room and message was spread to Kanpur as they studied there.

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It was the mall….. he was holding Ajay at the knife point.

DCP drop your gun else I will kill your man…

You need not I will… he fired at Ajay…..

He dropped down dead with many bullets on him.

You are ruthless….. she screamed how can you shoot your man….He came trusting you….

He caught hold of her hands…pulling her close. With stern face… Arrogant Lady can you just shut up and get into the jeep….. pushing her….

You are a Devil she shouted,tears were rolling.

He just drove his jeep… Stop else I will jump she said

Jump Jump Jump Now he shouted…… she saw the sword pendent, she froze

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome updates Sumi, the story is getting more and more interesting.

Suraj is curious about Chakor and she's already irritated with how he's behaving with her.

I wonder what's the significance of the sword.

I wonder why they kidnapped the boy and girl, I son't think it's for ransom so it's either for their organs or for trafficking .

I don't think Ajay is dead, it's a plan, seems Sukor will escape together, can't wait to read about it.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: nemo316

Awesome updates Sumi, the story is getting more and more interesting.

Suraj is curious about Chakor and she's already irritated with how he's behaving with her.

I wonder what's the significance of the sword.

I wonder why they kidnapped the boy and girl, I son't think it's for ransom so it's either for their organs or for trafficking .

I don't think Ajay is dead, it's a plan, seems Sukor will escape together, can't wait to read about it.

Mai thanks so much 😍🤗🤗🤗

That's a quick response

Am happy you are liking it.

Yes touching slightly another social issue too partly you are right

Will update...

Just that from next wee i will be too tied up with my board meeting preps etc so trying to update daily..

Hope the tempo is good and interesting.

Sword yessss..😉

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