She his weakness OR Thaakath!- the K-Jodi - Sukor - a Bonus.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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She his weakness?? No! she his Thaakath!- the K – Jodi….. My SuKor

(I wrote on seeing that insta pic of our adories and that attitude of dude with her along with the #SUKOR. I penned down a quick post but Mai asked fora continuation….. Well! I have not been writing SuKor but when Mai asked (she seldom ask) I wanted to as how can I say no to my buddy who has literally seen me from my silent days in this forum and who had held me with her excellent track analysis and WUs whenever I used to be depressed and off the show. This is not related to the show but my maiden attempt to twine a completely new story maybe 2 or 3 chapters…. Hope I could make you happy Mai)

Edited to added : this story is completely new and has no connection to the earlier post Eye my Girl Sukor post. Thanks Sritama for bringing this up.

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A sneak peak

The police sirens were on everywhere!!! … It was the district hospital..

Emergency..

Run… Run shouted the constables…

Call the Duty Doctor shouted the man .. where is the Doctor…..tall in his Police Uniform, his eyes looking out and not waiting for the stretcher but just carried the girl from his jeep who was bleeding, inside the hospital…

The ward boys ran took her in the stretcher and was pushing….

Walked in the Duty Doctor with her steth around… Officer I will handle you may leave….and please don’t shout she said… there are sick patients.

He looked at her…. Where is Dr. Chand? He asked…. The Chief is in a meeting and I am the new Duty Doctor… …. Oh he said….

The ward boys were pushing the stretcher… god! that K Inspector has come…. God knows what case is this they said to each other.

Shut up you both and don’t talk while pushing the patient…. Be fast take her to the OT…she said reading her pulse…

Sorry madam they said but very very softly...this is another K Doctor what she asked. Kuch nai Madam they said.

She went in to the OT.. the red light was on

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What is his weakness the evil asked….. there must be something

No! he is alone…. An Encounter specialist too… dare devil…he does not have anyone… Does not believe in Love…

Hmm… difficult then…

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Why do you want to get into trouble… asked her friend….

You have been getting transferred so often from hospital to hospital..

I cant keep quiet when I see something wrong and don’t care who ever is wrong!

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He turned back… I just cant…..

She turned him…. Don’t….. I don’t want to be your weakness….

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Is she his weakness or His strength..

Any guess what is K Jodi…..

Will get back soon!!!!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much Sumi for the dedication 🤗, it means a lot and it's very sweet of you ❤️

Love the start their jobs fit them so well and already there are some fiery clashes. Suraj is already known among the ward boys and is a thorn in the side of wrong people. Chakor is also a thorn in the side of the bad guys and has paid the price many times.

I wonder who's the injured girl.

Have no idea what K stands for but eagerly waiting for next.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Finally u r writing a sukor story ❤️.waiting! Waiting!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sritama. Thanks for highlighting.

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Wowww... damn interesting n intriguing Sumi di..nd i must admit that m yet to figure out d K Jodi mystery..how u r going to blend ur last Sukor story with dis one...from college students to encounter spl. inspector n doctor..who is that villain who is trying to know d inspector's weakness..my mind is pondering over so many things..waiting waiting to see how d mystery unravels😍😍

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I just edited to clarify this is a standalone story

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Smita for the excitement. Hope i meet up with the expectations

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Wow sumi what a wonderful surprise 👌👌, a new sukor story.... 😍😍❤❤. Nothing could be better than this. Thank you for this 🙏🙏❤❤.Very engrossing & impressive sneak peek 👍👍👌👌.I'm so ecstatic, imagining Suraj a super cop, an encounter specialist 😎😎😍😍 & Chakor as a sincere, dutiful doctor😍❤❤. Sukor first meeting created a spark. It seems they were already targeted by the evils. So curious to know about the injured girl. Great start, waiting for next update.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter I

Farming…

It was dark and the bungalow was in one of the big areas of the city of Kanpur. The cars came screeching and the man in his middle age with his pipe was followed by his assistants…well thugs. He was angry running inside the house to the big room and sat in his chair.

He took the long stick and started hitting them …. Saab please please we tried to catch her but she ran too fast and by the time we could, that DCP came from nowhere so we had to run but before running we did hit her with the knife and it hit her back. She was bleeding am sure she must be dead by now.

Don’t give me stories he shouted. I want that girl dead at any cost!... How can you all be careless and leave her. Where from this DCP come…. DCP Suraj Khatri…typical to his surname he is a Khatra…. kshatriya… How did you cross him?….Shouted the man, Bhero Nath who is the boss to his henchman Deeraj.

Boss, Deeraj said… we were chasing the girl from our lodge when suddenly the jeep of the DCP came and intervened. He got down and started chasing us so we had to throw the knife at her and run as you know if get caught what he will do. He will skin us alive. We already lost Garv to him .

I will skin you all alive, don’t sing praises of him shouted Bhero.. and how the hell did he come?. Go to the hospital and ensure she is dead. She has to die as she has seen everything.

Tell the duty doctor Rawat to ensure she is dead… but Saab,Deeraj said.

What Saab… Dr.Rawat has been moved and there is a new one and this is a lady. She has come a month back. Whaaat??? A lady uggh then its going to be easy… throw some jewels and money and ask her to shut the girls mouth.

Jee saab went the henchman along with his guys not knowing with whom he is going to deal with.

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At the hospital

He was in the jeep while his assistant Ajay was at the hospital waiting at the OT.

The girl was injured near her the heart. Severe loss of blood.

Ajay! said Suraj, get the details of the girl and also about this new duty doctor. Need full details.

I need to speak to Chief Chaand too…

Abay said … I have already informed the team to check about the girl but about the Doctor???

You know about Dr. Rawat most stained hand… she being a lady will be an easy prey. And who are the guys who were following girl.Get all the details. It was dark and they were far so I could not see them he said. He took his jeep and drove….

The girl’s face was coming in front of his eyes whom he was carrying . She was gasping and was holding his collar tight…. She was softly saying powder… …He was trying to figure out when suddenly he remembered the doctor’s face… quite an arrogant one asking me not to shout. Hmm.

Ajay was filling the forms when the anesthetist Dr. Tanu came out calling Dr. Chakor all set. She walked preparing herself for the surgery…Monitor the pulse, keep the blood bank informed as there is too much of blood loss and give her belongings to the Police. She was giving instructions to the team…and Switch on the CCTV to record the surgery she said.

Ajay was baffled at the way she was giving the instructions which were not in her area of duty. She said call the general surgeon too and inform Chief. The admin guy said Dr. this is a police case so we need to wait for the Chief’s approval. She turned gave him astern look and said the patient will not wait till the approval is sought. The patient is more important to me than your procedures. Walked with a firm gait.

The admin guy could not speak anything…..oh god she just came recently but K pucca K… Ajay asked about her…

Dr. Chakor, General physician and Cardio surgeon. Just Chakor?? Chakor what….

The guy said… Inspector Ajay she is very different… She does not write her surname… She completed her MBBSfrom Delhi AIIMS with flying colours and specialized in Cardiac surgery, all on scholarship. She was offered best jobs in private hospitals but she wanted to serve at the Govt hospitals in the districts and Municipal hospitals and no nonsense lady. She had been ruthlessly transferred to more than six locations within a span of 4 years as she bends for no one. Devi to the patients but Devil to the staff when it comes to misuse or abuse of power.

Her personal??? Don’t know much but she is single and stays in the quarters within the hospital itself in the last floor. Hmmmm interesting Ajay said…not less to him….

Though a cardiac surgeon she offered herself to be as the duty doctor at any point of time. The Chief indeed has a special respect for her and knows about her.

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The red light was off….

She walked out….

Ajay came to her.. Dr….. hmmm where is that inspector she asked. He is not Inspector , he is the Deputy Commissioner of Police and a special officer.

Oh ok she said no wonder he was shouting at the top of his voice (she spoke to herself). The surgery is success but she is still not out of danger. It will take atleast 48 hours for her to come to sense. The knife had been soaked with poison so the injury is quite grievous quite close to the heart but she is lucky.

Who has done this to her she asked… Ajay said we don’t know but will soon find out.

Our policemen will be here around the clock to guard so that they donot come back.

She walked to her recess room when there were two eyes watching her….

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She woke up and felt the whole room rotating.. she saw the wardboy with a small surgical knife. She could not move but only her eyes was tearing.

She was walking down the corridor.

He broke through the bathroom pointing the gun….

Their eyes met…..

I hate men… especially those who run from their responsibility. I saw her die in my hands……. Her heart stopped in front of me.

I saw my dad being burnt in front of me…… I don’t want any relationship… I am a stone yes and I don’t care about any body

Then why where you down every night below her room

For the first time after many years he teared…..

Can a stone be farmed?????

Find out ...he should have a weakness…………….Bhero shouted….

I cant he turned……

Don’t she turned …. I don’t want to be your weakness….

But can a weakness be turned into ones thaakath?

And again any guess what is a K Jodi…..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: nemo316

Thank you so much Sumi for the dedication 🤗, it means a lot and it's very sweet of you ❤️

Love the start their jobs fit them so well and already there are some fiery clashes. Suraj is already known among the ward boys and is a thorn in the side of wrong people. Chakor is also a thorn in the side of the bad guys and has paid the price many times.

I wonder who's the injured girl.

Have no idea what K stands for but eagerly waiting for next.

thanks Mai always for you 🤗

K well its quite simple though...... just think through😉

Happy you are liking the story. Am so so scared too as I am writing something not my cuppa a new genre nothing related to the show but all your encouragement is making me sail...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ankita38

Finally u r writing a sukor story ❤️.waiting! Waiting!

🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Im loving this start Sumi 🤗🤗🤗

Professions fit right to our SuKor. Your sneak peak took me back to Suraj's intro scene, where he dons a uniform

Chakor as Doctor suits her helping nature 👍🏼 She probably looks cute too in the apron 😳

Your story already got me excited. Waiting for coming parts

All love & more power to your writing sweetheart ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear🤗

Wow.. I just read the sneak peak. And I am hell excited. super gripping one. well written intro of how leads are. they and their professions, attitude I am loving it.

Thanks to mesh too for this.

And honestly, I love ragkor but the spice Sukor has cant be there in any couple. loving this sukor story start to core. dont stop with few chapters dear😊.. if possible weave it into a long FF.

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