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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Thanks Smita for your dedicated comment

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Part 3B:

It's fabulous update Sumi, indescribable by words, full of thrill & action 👌👌👏👏. Suraj's plan to get in the lodge in disguise was commendable👏👏. Loved that Suraj too couldn't resist of thinking of Chakor. Even in the midst of so much complexity😍😍 , Suraj was remembering Chakor & her fearless attitude, quite strange😳😳, specially the book mark & non use of her surname made him contemplated. But Suraj's hidden feelings towards Chakor didn't escape of Ajay's eyes but he denied it😀😀, so obvious but Suraj's standing below her room to protect her was quite surprising😳😳😍😍. Loved he's asking about Chakor & her going alone made him agitated😁😁.

I am anxious to know what has been inflicted on Asha's friends 😔 😔. The Mall sequence was just excellent, superbly written👏👏 ,what a redoubtable entry of Suraj, the irrepressible encounter specialist😎😎😍😍. The entire action sequences was extremely breathtaking 😇😇😮😮& her shocking & screaming at Suraj was quite justified as she unable to understand that he shot Ajay to save him.

Precap is quite intriguing, have no idea what happened to them in the past but they're being alone with each other & the phone's battery dead is auspicious for us😉😉. May be in that situation a new chapter of their relationship will begin & we will get some hot & sweet sukor romance😍😍😜😜. Even though I'm not so insatiable 😄😄but it's needless to ask na Sumi as you know very well that our answer will always be yes 😁😁😜😜 about the action & some.... but only togertheness!!!!??? Nothing more??? 😔 😔. Thanks Sumi ,so nice of you, mentioning my name as winner, great, love you & thank you 😍 😍.

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Uff first i must get them off their attitudes na.

Then they should talk properly

Then they should get to break their walls

Then they should believe in love

Then

Then

😜😜😜🙈🙈🙈 Romance haha woh tho bada picture hai, ab tho only newsreel chaltha hai

Thanks deary let's hope something gets to happen😜

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I am taking you all through few flashbacks which is very necessary to proceed further.

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Chapter 4 (A)

The Saplings..

She threw the water….. crying sitting on the stone…shouting at him…she cried and suddenly raises her voice. Anger, hate, shock all were just encircling her…

He just stood like a rock…

She was on and on… How can you do this…. … do you know what is being all alone…. You are a devil, Yes you are stone hearted..He was your responsibility…. You are a man, men have no heart…. No wonder I hate men…Do you know how hard it is to see a person dying and you just saw without any emotions…. Wah Police Officer you are amazing . she felt disgusted. I hate you not that I ever liked you….

He came trusting you? How can you take his life… Do you know the life’s worth, these words were resounding in him….

He could not take it further… he had been accused by many as being hard but he never felt bad or even gave a hoot but, today he felt bad. Bad as she was shouting at him. His heart was feeling hurt for the first time after many many years.

Stooppp he shouted…Stopp now…. I know …………….he shouted… I know what is being alone… I haveseen someone dying….. leave alone dying,charred to death in my hands as he was my weakness…

They took his life in front of me and I could not do anything…. I was also immobilized… they burned him, charred him to death.

I have stayed away alone with all pains. I turned away lone to be with the criminals to weed them out of the society. I have none to worry about me. I don’t wish to have any too as I don’t want any weakness.

Grabbing her head behind he said……And I don’t care a dam you Arrogant Lady if you like me or hate me… I know what to do and I don’t shun my responsibility or break anyone’s trust.

Yes you don’t care about anyone……Do you, if so what about Ajay she said….

You will know in sometime…..he was firm…. He left her realizing he was grabbing her head.

He murmured they burnt him... bur.nttt....

She whimpered looking at him… w..h..oo.. got burnt…. What happened…and your that sword…pendant… pointing her fingers to his chain….

He cried for the first time in many years….. going down on his knees…. He kissed the sword…. My dad gave this to me…. He wanted me to de-weed this society… to be sharp like the sword… be a kshatriya….

He took the water bottle and drank the water… I don’t know why but want to tell this toyou.

Flashbacks……

His

Aligarh

Six years back

Papaaa……walked the young man, handsome, tall, well built, with sharp nose and shrewd eyes. His physic was one to fall for. Long legs and toned packs with close cut hair fit to call him the cadet who completed his Indian Police Service training after his professional engineering in mechatronix with flyingcolours. A rank holder. He was already trained in martial arts and No. in Rifle shooting for his perfect aim never fails. His smile was one to get lost into…..

Suraj Khatri, the only son of Mr. Pankaj Khatri. True the father brought up all alone showering his love as a father and mother to his only son who lost his mother at his very early age. As the norm for those wealthy ones there were many who wanted to marry the rich Khatri but had own restrictions to mother the young Khatri though did not reveal during the second marriage talks. He stopped everyone saying he is the father and the mother for his Son…and he need none. The Kshatriya as per his clan was a businessman with Lock Industry and good in making antique pieces for the rich, aesthetic families and Hotel industries. He was also supplying the most advanced locks to national and international markets. An agriculturist who was a staunch believer in education of the needy, helped many through his trust and other means.

He used to visit the capital city Delhi regularly and always halts at Gaziabad for a day or two to complete his business needs and approvals as he was a law abiding citizen and very popular with the Taj Groups of Hotel industry which had revived the palaces in the northern princely states. He was making them special antique pieces of the Rajputs and historical clans.

An avid agriculturist he was into cultivation but trusted it with his administrators who were taking care of the yields.

He helped many with regards to their needs and one person he helped personally without divulging the details or telling anyone even to his administrators and was priding in the success of the person. He waited for that person to complete the professional course when his Prince will also complete and walk in that starched Uniform with chin held high.

Everything was going fine and he had identified a princess for his prince though without both their knowledge.

He was returning after a major meeting with the agriculture department on his way to Aligarh with a very shocking news….He was returning in his car when he was overtaken and hit by a big container lorry, while the police jeep behind was speeding towards and hit the tree beside….

He got down the jeep, to see the car in front of him go up in flames and he ran.

Papaaa ……Surajjjjj shouted .... the father came down the car crawling slowly with flames on his back. Papa whats this ...what happened, First lets go to the hospital..... he continued....I heard that our lands have been confiscated for growing Marijuana… How is that even possible?? Who has done this…. Why did not you tell me. He was trying to call the ambulance. palpitating.

Suraj…he said listen..I trusted the administrators with the lands, but, for the greed of money they had subleased it to grow the poppy and other drug plants. I never knew till the agriculture dept told me. Knowing me they quickly found the culprits and nabbed them, but unfortunately as the lands are in my name they are being confiscated. They followed me and dropped something on the car.

Beta I am innocent he cried…. papa… lets go to the hospital he said but there was no vehicle to take him. He carried him on his shoulders when two of the thugs of the perpetrator came in a car and hit him and pierced his ribs with a rod. He shot them but they held him and asked him to sign the documents pertaining to the business and antique industry. They were holding his father who was already half burned, pouring more of petrol on him. He was about to sign as they knew that his father was his weakness. His father cried asking him not to sign the documents and asking him to come over his weakness and be strong. But he could not see his father suffer more and was about to sign the same when the police squad came there as his walkie talkie was giving out signals. They were caught but one of them in frustration threw a lighted matches on the father.

Due to the petrol he was again blazing… crying in pain…

Suraj listen to me Pankaj said. I have no time. All I have to say is you see your sword pendant. Be like that, Be sharp, don’t have any weakness, don’t fear, stay strong and if at all you fall for weakness turn that into your strength. The second team of police with the ambulance was on the way…. But….it was too late... He was breathing his last.

Suraj….My Son… be that Kshatriya…..before breathing last, he smiled… I want to say something… the person who has the sword is the one who can Lock you…I found that person for you… .that one without………….. his eyes stood still…..he was completely charred …. Charred in his hands.. he saw his life to leave the world…. Suraj’s hands also was getting hot due to the heat.

Noooo pappaaaa he cried and then he froze in shock… he lost his consciousness completely due to the blood loss and the grevious wound on his rib.

When he woke up in the hospital bed it was already two months. He identified his few friends and made them as CEOs of his various businesses with he as the prime one and created a Trust to continue the good deeds of his father.

He turned himself rigid and went ahead to specialize in commando training and turned into encounter specialist. He completely forgot about the sword or about the person without… as the years passed it was nearly 8 years he forgot everything. He was too busy to gear up himself to weed those parasites of the society ruthlessly. He forgot to smile, to love or even to talk with compassion as he was looking at everyone with the eye of the Devil. He became emotionless as he feared to show his emotions as he did not want any weakness. Every one was either a criminal or a victim. He had no ordinary person in his life

The only person whom he had was Ajay….

He bent his head and cried closing his face, he cried after years…. he was surprised as he felt a bit light. It was the first time after the gruesome incident that he shed tears and he shared something with someone for he felt like sharing.

She cried…looking at him. she took the bottle and gave him the water. Drink please she said. she could not believe that she was soft to him.

He drank. He wanted to dissolve all his sorrow in that water and drink it off completely.

He looked at her…. unbelievable to his own ears he asked with compassion Why do you hate men….…??? Whose heart stopped!!! Why so many transfers?

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HER Story.......................................

to follow..........................

tomorrow

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fantafab update indeed dear👏👏👏👏

I went fida just on the description of suraj khatri, the cadet😍😍😍👍👍

A little cruel, gruesome flashback but nonetheless we all know money makes people do all kinds of stuff.... so Senior Khatri had already decided the sword waali....hmmm... interesting, intriguing...

Don't you think it's pretty mean to stop at her flashback😜😜😜now my brain will be uneasy till tomorrow😡

Chalo chalo do it fast😘😘😘

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Posted: 6 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Fantafab update indeed dear👏👏👏👏

I went fida just on the description of suraj khatri, the cadet😍😍😍👍👍

A little cruel, gruesome flashback but nonetheless we all know money makes people do all kinds of stuff.... so Senior Khatri had already decided the sword waali....hmmm... interesting, intriguing...

Don't you think it's pretty mean to stop at her flashback😜😜😜now my brain will be uneasy till tomorrow😡

Chalo chalo do it fast😘😘😘

Arey nikki, workaholic tuffy bossy 🤪🤪🤪

Me hiding under my workstation. 😜

Sumi gaayab

Jokes apart thanks for the quick response. Relieves my tension too.

Tommorrow?? Oh did i say... 😜 😜

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Dear its Awesome Pleaseeeeeee update soon as cannot wait till tom pleaseeeeeee

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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

Sumi dear🤗🤗

The story is going awesome👏 and first reaction reading your last two parts, its precap and the moment you stop the story is like

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😁😁😁

The previous one was just power packed with that mall sequence ..its just💥

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And entire story , the way you try to keep the suspense intact,way you weaved the subparts, main story link, intriguing factors with respect to sukor , that drugs, kids,village and another side of story, attitude wala sukor besides the story line..all in all

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👍👍👍👏

Sukor travel of scenes..their attitude ones, beside attitude and being Khadoos , their good heart, chakor being chakor putting others goodwill in priority, suraj being him, knowing what he does and what he wants, executing it onpoint...plus their profession related actions, i am loving all. besides this, sukor track indirectly happening.. he waiting down her room and feeling bad that she pointed fingers at him..suraj ..aww

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and the emotional breakdown, fb, her tears for him, trying to sooth him unknowingly and he asking her state subconsciously with compassion, their encounter , they hving a fb where his father chosen her for him and they not knowing, the word frm his father ,one hving sword can lock him, waiting for that moment :) that they start feeling for each other internally ..

I am sure ajay is fine. waiting to hear her story and how sukor journey starts from here.

All Going too good and In short

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks so much sritama for literally making me relive my story 🤗🤗🤗

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Terrific one Sumi di👏👏👏👏 u r acing it brilliantly👌👌I was eagerly waiting to know Sukor's background n past history..n finally d back story of Suraj Khatri is revealed..bt before that loved Sukor's tashan filled confrontation..d way Chakor's accusations provoked Suraj n he poured his heart out in front of her..how stunningly u represented d young cadet Suraj Kharti😍was completely bowled over by him🙈😍bt he has suffered a lot..such a tragic,ghastly past history..his father paid d ultimate price for trusting d wrong people..😥 by he has already selected d right one for Suraj..that was a real surprise..d girl who has d sword😍dis sword mystery is getting more n more interesting..Suraj's past story was so intriguing..he has seen so much brutality,such a traumatic past it was..can't wait to know Chakor's back story now..why she is repeatedly saying she hates men..waiting waiting for d next update Sumi di😍😍💖💖💖

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Umaaaa😘😘😘😘😍😍😍


Sumi can write essays ughhh🙄🙄 but you just sweeped me with those gifs and that too so many.

Sumi going bonkers 💃💃

Thank uuuuuu

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shar456

Dear its Awesome Pleaseeeeeee update soon as cannot wait till tom pleaseeeeeee

Thanks so much dear...

Will update soon. 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I know many were bit upset but thats the reality.... Here I update the next one not to hold you all too much.

But, as I mentioned I will be busy with my upcoming meetings and reviews so kindly bear with my delays... but.... for sure I will update the next parts maybe late nights or by the weekend. Thanks for understanding...............

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Chapter 4 B

Saplings contd….

Hers

Gaziabad….

This goes behind long years….

She was in her 8th std… wanted to study well, fly high…

Born in a poor family, her mother Ahalya worked in the Guest House which welcomed many rich and government officials during their holidays and business visits.

She was middle aged frail and used to take care of everything right from cooking till managing the rooms.

Her husband…… rather the father of her daughter a man who wanted her for his physical needs, seldom realized she was a living being, had a heart which was weak. He was after her earnings but never had a sweet talk or feelings to his daughter…..

Chakor… called her mom she was feeling very weak… holding her heart, she was palpitating… Maai… the little one ran she did not know much but all she knew was her mom is not well and the one fathered her did not bother about her. Chakor please can you just sweep the rooms today, kaaka has not come (he was there to do the top work) and I need to prepare the food for the guests.

Haan Maai,I will do that and go to school she said…. she ran she when she came across the father and she just ignored him though she did not understand much but knew he wanted mom’s earnings and scolded her for falling sick and was cursing that she gave birth to a daughter….

He shouted…what happened to you? Always falling sick? You are of no use to me…

Ahalya grined in pain holding her chest but quickly gulped some warm water with ajwain thinking it is gastric and coiled for sometime and got up to do her work. Her health was becoming weak…

It was the guesthouse which Pankaj Khatri stayed during his travel to Delhi. He was always taken care of by Ahalya. It was a rainy day when Pankaj was returning back when his car got punctured. He was walking towards the Guest House while his driver was trying to fix the car. The lights were so glaring that heskid over a stone and was about to fall on to the road which saw a speeding lorry coming towards him. Ahalya who was going out for errands saw him and quickly pulled him to the side of the road and in due course she got hurt in her hip.

They both managed to get up and she helped him while herself limped to the Guest House. The doctor was called who treated Pankaj and saw Ahalya. He was the local Dr and asked Ahalya how she was and why she has not come to the dispensary for checkups. She smiled. Pankaj thanked her for her selfless act in saving his life staking hers. She just smiled again and walked to mind her work.

Pankaj asked the dr. about Ahalya when he was given the shocking news that she is a severe heart patient and has terrible blocks and was not taking care due to her economical condition and her husband was too bad.

Pankaj called Ahalya and told that he will take care of her medical treatment while she refused saying that will add to the woes as her husband will suspect and harm her more. All she requested with folded hands was the following:

Saab I don’t want anything but if you feel like please help my daughter who wants to study… He immediately accepted and said he will take care of her studies personally and sponsored Chakor’s education and promised not to reveal himself due to the fear that the father might harm them both.

He went off to Aligarh and as there was no need he did not visit Ghaziabad after that as he was getting his work done over mails and phones with the advance of technology,least he realized that she was counting her last days. But, he ensured Chakor’s education was taken care and was very happy in monitoring her progress.

Chakor was sponsored privately and she never knew who it was though she would always get a bookmark every year at the end of the academics with a sword drawn on it and a small lock drawn below. The little girl was greedy to study but at the sametime was hit with the cruel reality of her ruthless father and the way her mother was ignored, treated badly. How are you making your daughter study?Where from you are getting the money? He would beat her. She would refuse saying anything other that an NGO from Delhi was sponsoring. He went there but could not get any info.

Ahalya’s health deteriorated terribly. She could not go to work nor get up from her bed and she was admitted to the local municipal hospital which seldom had any facility to treat her cardiac problem. The doctor there tried his best but could not help much.

Chakor passed her 12th in flying colours… she came running home to see her mother who had been discharged as there was no use being in the hospital. Maai I passed I have come first in the district. I want to become a Doctor. I will treat you Mai. I will save you mai…. The girl was all happy…Ahalya was in pain… she ran to her and took her in her arms, maai maai please look at me. She saw her mother in excruciating pain. She said Chakor please I am going to die but please promise me that you will study well, donot leave your studies. He will take care of your studies… for your sponsor is……. She could not talk more she held her chest, laying her head on Chakor’s lap. Maaaaaaai , she held in her hands her wrist, slowly realized the pulse was going down and finally stopped, completely..

She saw her mother’s heart stop beating, that heart which beat for her, which wanted her to fly high… stopped its rhythm as it succumbed to the pain.

She froze….Everything went past in a jiffy.. She went to her school office which asked her to sign the MBBS entrance form. She pleaded them to say who was her sponsor. They could not as the sponsor would pay the fees for the whole term in one shot and never gave any details. The father who had left them away and went off not to return but came back once after her death. Chakor refused to see him for she hated him, hated the only man she had known who was cruel to her mother, left her to die, shunned the responsibility to take care of them.

On knowing about Ahalya’s death through the Municipal doctor, Pankaj wanted to meet Chakor but he got the information that the estranged father was troubling the school to know about Chakor’s Sponsor.

Fearing he might trouble him and Chakor he refrained from coming in the forefront.

The school authorities too were not able to contact Pankaj, as they did not have his name but only the book mark which will be dropped in the school post box addressed to her.

She filled the form……

First name : Ms. Chakor

Sur Name: Not Applicable (Ms.Ahalya… the college refused initially so she gave her mothers name but still they debated as she said she has no father and does not want to have any surname…). After much deliberation, they accepted her without a surname as she had topped the district and the women rights groups raised flag.

Institution : AIIMS, Delhi

Course : MBBS.

Her college fees for the four years along with her hostel fees was paid in one shot by Pankaj.

She studied well, studied with a zeal, with that rage. She topped in every subject, raised a wall around her. Forgot social life and all she was friendly was with her books, her thesis, submitting papers…. End of every year she would get the chart paper bookmark with the sword drawn with a small lock beneath. (this was drawn personally by Pankaj)

It was her fourth year, she stood first in AIIMS. She wanted to pursue her MS in Cardiology and Cardiac surgery.

That time came that shock… her fees to enroll into her MS was not paid. That year she did not get her book mark too… She could not understand what happened to her sponsor. She did not know whom to approach too. The institution told that the sponsor has not sent any information or book mark.

She was shocked, frozen, somebody who was taking the responsibility of educating her has stopped suddenly without giving a reason. But, being the topper from the same institution and based on her credits she was offered scholarship and she started her classes and taking classes for her juniors in the evening to manage her living expense along with her specialization.

She qualified as a Cardiac Surgeon with flying colours.

It was a gala function with all the family members of the students to see their wards take that prestigious scroll of certificate, but for one. She was alone all alone….with no one to applaud her or smile when she took that certificate..

The college Registrar read the name.

Dr. Chakor…. Hereby conferred the Masters in Cardiology and Cardiac Surgery. Gold medalist.

She walked up to the stage with her plain face…. Holding the book mark to herself, talking to the sword… thank you for bringing me to this level. I don’t know who you are but I thank you from my heart for making me fly this high. I cannot blame you for not sponsoring me for this too but I would have been happy if you had made me knows the reason as to why you suddenly shunned the responsibility.

Holding the certificate she remembered her Mother, looked up with tears in her eyes and spoke to herself, Mai…I promise that I will do my best to serve those poor who are treated at the Govt.hospitals.. To the best of my service I will not allow a heart to stop for lack of medical care….

She was offered in many private hospitals but she choose to work in the district and municipal hospitals. It was not a bed of roses as she was tossed due to the political and bureaucratic pressures of resisting to manipulating reports, voicing out when she finds wrong doings or raise against wrong treatments. The result was her change of locations within four years to six places but she did not bother about anything.

She drew her walls around so that none could approach her, she never wanted to tag anybody’s name along with her. She was Dr. Chakor without any surname…….and wanted to remain that way…. The only person who was with her was Dr. Tanu…………………………..(but not even Tanu know about her past)

She cried….I don’t trust men, especially those who run away from responsibility…. Those who breaks the trust….

Both the hurt souls looked at each other……………..slowly realizing the past years of agony….

They both sat quiet trying to understand how they had been tangled into.

Coming to their senses, unknowingly both extended their hands when for the first time their hands met.

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The Sword around his neck………… the sword and the lock in her bookmark

Had destiny bookmarked them to lock ?

She saw his ruffled uniform to see that scar on his side in the ribs…

So its this she said…. the powder but how can they do this?

Its money and psychic pleasure that they will make anyone do anything?

He walked into the den …… while the two were getting their senses….. she opened her eyes…..

I am sorry he said……………. he smiled……..I trust you………when you trust someone you don’t question them!!!

They hugged.

Oh NO…………………The Devil is he the son……………………………

Bring him to us and the officer should bring him …………………..

She cried………. kill me…………I dont want to be your weakness…….

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