Eagle ..Goal.. Finish Line - Completed page 16 added a missing para! - Page 9

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting & beautiful update🤗

Everything was perfect👏

Marathon runner 501 is back what a headline👏

The hospital part was emotional😭

Loved Raghav Rathod face off & the connection of Chakor with Rathod was a good thought😊

No words for Raghav from the preparation of marathon, zacuzi, inspiring her to run etc

Raghav don't want a male physio😆

The last part of birdie & lal was so symbolic👏

Loving the suspense

Waiting for next

PART VIII

PREPARATION

Hira Laal lifted the tea to drink, it was windy... flew the birdie with full force, gliding low and hit the tea cup spilling the hot tea down... he dropped the cup which broke into pieces. The birdie soared high high.

He was extremely mad, tried to shoot down the birdie. It soared high.

Kedar he shouted!!! She cannot run, she cannot she just cannot.

He called her, You are doing wrong! You don't know who I am! He shouted.

Aap ka naam pe Hira zarroor par aap tho ek kaala patthar!!! She spoke.

You cannot touch me! Cannot stop me. I am Chakor she shouted. I will make you pay for what you did to Rati and you tried to harm my son... she said...

Who is it came Raaghav ? the evil cut the call. Its HiraLaal she said!!!, he raged, what's he saying? How dare he speak to you. Calm down Raaghav she said.

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Rati was recouping but she could not even get up. Dr advised that she is out of danger but will take atleast 3 months for her to completely recover and then start the physio. She cried but thanked RagKor for taking care of her like their own kin.

The boys were visiting her very often and the girls also were too attached to her, calling her didi didi...

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Chakor was much into practice and she was timing good. It was ten days more for the D Day. Things were going fine but she was not feeling ok. Something was bothering.

The roses were indeed missing mummy very much but one afternoon she stayed behind and was playing with them and feeding them. She did not realize they were running too... she was enjoying... she was in their room while they were so excited to play with mumma. They were all over her. Raaghav was enjoying it... he was admiring her turning like a child with them.. she was playing hide and seek when she closed her eyes and the roses went and hid themselves behind daddy's broad shoulders... She smiled and opened her eyes.. False searched and acted as though not finding them and started to cry. The roses ran to mumma, hugged her no cry no cry kissing her... she hugged them. Raaghav was admiring the innocence in her, the cuteness in her... they ran to daddy... asking them to be lifted. He lifted and she hugged him. They are running Raaghav she clapped. What are you looking at me she asked... I am just wondering if my princesses are cute or my Queen is and kissed her on her forehead. She waved them and set off for her practice pecking them and her King. He played for a while and gave them to the babysitters.

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It was late evening when the boys were together at the Mansion. Sometimes the boys sleep overnight too.

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It was late night and Chakor was in the plantation grounds practicing. it was cold but the running kept her warm and sweating and Raaghav was in the plantation looking over the packagings as the day of the Marathon was their loading too. The plantation had geared up to finish off the loading a day before the marathon but they were not sure. Raaghav was at his office which was looking into the ground where Chakor was sprinting. She sprinted over her normal duration. She kept on running... Raaghav overlooked and Mohit was there, he said he would take care so Raaghav went to the grounds.

He called her but she was just running... when she completed the round he caught her. Maidam... she was sweating... and the sweat was glittering in the flood lights.. He wiped her sweat pulling her close. What are you thinking, now what's worrying he asked.

Chakor said, Raaghav after the call, I feel Laal is doing something. No maidam, he must have got scared but I am waiting for one thing to confirm else I will take his legs he said.

No Raaghav I am sure he will not sit idle. He must be planning something big. What will he do???

Lets go home he said don't worry he said. What are you waiting about she asked. He said Maidam

A small fb

Raghav was talking to Rathod when he got a call from Govind.

Yes Govind... he said Saab we have information about the guy who hit Rati. Lalit's father has been one of the walkers that morning and he had seen this guy who sped in the car. But he tried to take a pic but could not get it full he said. He has told Lalit about it but was scared. Lalit had told Govind. He got the pic.

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Raaghav why did you not tell me about this she said. Get the pic and give it to our AA he will definitely sketch it. Oh Maidam I completely forgot about it. How did I?. Ok I will tell AA. But Raaghav we need to be careful. Let me find out who it is , I promise I will run my Rover on his legs he said. Raaghavvv... Ok ok I will not do anything. Will tell you. Ab please chalen, its too late now.

They both reached the mansion, the boys had slept. She went up to have a shower.. It was too late, he did not want to wake Girija, so Raaghav heated the dinner and fed Chakor and ate. Maidam what are you thinking he asked again as they were at the rocking chair in their balcony. She was sitting on his lap. Let's sleep he said, hugging her from behind and kissing her nape.

He was giving her soothing kisses... Raaghav please listen. Hmm.. bolo hugging her close.

Laal cannot do any harm to me. He will not do anything openly. But he will not sit calm. What will he try to do?...We must be careful about our children and also you must be very very watchful about your packing too. she said.

Don't worry I have made all arrangements he said. Let's go sleep he said lifting her placing in the bed and hugging her warming. I love you he said!!, I too she said, turning smiling, going into his chest... hmmm wish and pray this marathon gets over fast he said... She thought to herself, Budda I know you are way too much working, taking care of the processing, all about me, the children, the house. I am sorry it's been too long since I gave my attention to you... she turned to him... she was terribly tired but she wanted to soothe him... she hugged him tight... He slept with a little snore. She slept immediately smiling. He opened his eyes kissed her on her forehead, smiled held her closer and slept.

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In the middle of the night...Raaghav she woke up sweating profusely, panting, Maidam what happened, they they she panted...they will try to harm Rati. She was jittering. Maidam calm down, she is in hospital.

No Raaghav, why I did not think about it. They will try to harm her. If she is harmed we both will be in trouble as all know that we are taking care and I am participating as she is out of the race too. There will be confusion and this will put me in trouble too. Lets go to the hospital she said. Okok let me call the nurse he said. She changed her night wear and was palpitating. He told the Mansion Security, switched on the alarms and left with her to the hospital. Hey Daak baba nothing should happen to Rati, Raaghav was calling but there was no response from Rati or the nurse.

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Kedar, we cannot sit idle, we cannot touch Chakor but we need to pull her away from the race. The only way is to create confusion, so ... Yes Laal saab said Kedar. He drove.

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Ragkor reached the hospital, they ran to Rati's room when they saw the nurse hit and fallen down. Chakor was in shock, they quickly ran inside the room when a man covered his face and was rising his knife to kill the sleeping Rati. He was about to stab when Raaghav held him tight from back. Rati woke up hearing the noise. Didi she shouted. Raaghav gave a hard thump on his hand and broke his wrist... the intruder quickly kicked Raaghv with his elbow where Raaghav lost his balance. He quickly jumped through the window and ran away. Raaghav chased him but he could not be caught. Rati was in fear trembling terribly. Chakor was hugging her calming her, you are ok, am there, nothing will happen to you. The hospital was shocked. They discharged Rati and took her to the Mansion immediately. One of the room in the Mansion was readied for Rati along with her medical needs.

Didi didi I told you, they will harm you, she said. Chakor looked firm, Nothing will happen, I will NOT LEAVE HIM she said. She asked Manju to stay with Rati.

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The boys were together and the pic was given to AA. Lalit and Rohan alongwith Ar was keenly watching at AA. He looked at profile view and started to sketch. As he sketched it Rohan jittered in panic. This was the guy who threatened my dad, threatened me.. What Ar asked as he was not aware. He was told about the nasty play of their innocent hates. Sorry Rohan and Lalit told again. Ar and AA said please no need sorry as I can understand. But Ar and Aa we need to be careful as he may try to harm Mam Lalit and Rohan told in single voice. Raaghav walked in took the sketch. He asked the boys not to worry and nothing will befall mumma as she is fighting for the good. He looked at the pic and quickly crossed checked with the CCTV footage in the hospital. He told Govind and the security team to be watchful. He told Chakor and informed the police. They were on search of him but he cleverly was absconding.

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The D Day was arriving...

The day before...

Walked the wicked with a box to the Plantation... it was the final loading... Nooo shouted Govind, running...

I want you to be there at the finish line she told him!!! I will!!!

Rohan look there, shouted Lalit.

He was holding him by his neck, his hand was bleeding...

I will put an end to all this, Raged the Lion

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Sumi dear...you indeed leave me amazed each and every single time I read your update... the flow of the story, the interwining of the events is so damn good...

Thoroughly enjoyed reading...the suspense..uff 👏

Loved the ragkor scene😳😳 missing MEEJAY big time!!!

Brainy chakor is a treat to imagine...👏

All in all fantafab... waitinggg for the next