Sukor ff : Better Half-part-5- pg 12,part-6 28/4/18 - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
Yellow lehenga is intentional right😉
So Chakor remembered about anniversary ?!
Waiting for next part !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
Chakor's concern..😲
In yellow lehenga 😳
Suraj smiling and wanting to find out
Another interesting update..8th is soo far

Make it longer Mona..😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
So she cares for him! Interesting. I think it must have been huge surprise and shock for Suraj that she cares.
About anniversary... Loved his confusion. Loved that Chakor remembered. And I simply loved fact that she was wearing yellow lehenga. Only one thing, I wish there was more about their awkwardness during event. Like some more teasing from their friends and family, or Sukor forced to perform something together in front of everyone, or Suraj forced to say something about Chakor. But even without all this I could imagine Suraj's pov completely.

I have just one request. Please if you can, make it a little longer. You don't need to rush or hurry the story. Just dragg a little what you have already planned for chapter.

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Mona, it was awesome!
So Suraj was the only one who forgot about his anniversary 😆, he's fortunate that Chakor doesn't expect anything from him and didn't get angry.

Loved how she tended to his wound, a bond has grown between them although Chakor isn't ready to admit it.

Glad that Chakor has bonded well with Suraj's family.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor

Woah! I loved this sudden expression of concern. Wow!.

Looking forward to the next one

Thank you sreethi😳
Glad you are loving Sukor moments
Next update is the way!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Loved the caring nature of Chakor😊
Suraj must have got a heart attack😆
Waiting for next to know the mystery of Chakor
Waiting for next

Thanks ketheriene😳
Glad you found it interesting
Poor guy😆😆
Next update may give you a hint about chakor's behaviour😛

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Posted: 7 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Yellow lehenga is intentional right😉
So Chakor remembered about anniversary ?!
Waiting for next part !!

Ammu dhorikipoyanu😆
@bold I don't wanna reaveil about it😛,it's a bit suspense
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: ndivyateja

Chakor's concern..😲

In yellow lehenga 😳
Suraj smiling and wanting to find out
Another interesting update..8th is soo far

Make it longer Mona..😆

Divya🤗
Glad you found the update interesting
Chakor is incomplete without yellow in her life😳
Actually I hadn't start to write the next part,so I needed time dear😛

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Posted: 7 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Krupy

So she cares for him! Interesting. I think it must have been huge surprise and shock for Suraj that she cares.

About anniversary... Loved his confusion. Loved that Chakor remembered. And I simply loved fact that she was wearing yellow lehenga. Only one thing, I wish there was more about their awkwardness during event. Like some more teasing from their friends and family, or Sukor forced to perform something together in front of everyone, or Suraj forced to say something about Chakor. But even without all this I could imagine Suraj's pov completely.

I have just one request. Please if you can, make it a little longer. You don't need to rush or hurry the story. Just dragg a little what you have already planned for chapter.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Krupy thanks buddy for the good piece of advice😊I will try to improve more
Hopefully next update may not be let down

Yup chakor is incomplete without yellow in her life😳



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Posted: 7 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Mona, it was awesome!

So Suraj was the only one who forgot about his anniversary 😆, he's fortunate that Chakor doesn't expect anything from him and didn't get angry.

Loved how she tended to his wound, a bond has grown between them although Chakor isn't ready to admit it.

Glad that Chakor has bonded well with Suraj's family.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you so much mai🤗
Yup probably he's the only one who forgot about the anniversary,Can't blame him though😆

Glad that you are enjoying reading the updates
Next update is on the way!

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