Sukor ff : Better Half-part-5- pg 12,part-6 28/4/18

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Great going!
More mysteries!
So Chakor wasn't interested right from the beginning! but why did she agree to the marriage?
And why is she acting so aloof and not opening up to Suraj?
Hope we know Chakor's POV soon.

Thanks mai🤗

The mystery around her will be cleared soon😛

She too has her own reasons

Yup it will be known in the upcoming updates

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: sumsukor
mystery revolving around madam
but loved the dude who is so gentle and is going into details to unravel the puzzle around the closed book...

Hmm Madam and her vices!!!! she will soon open up I think

great going

Thank you so much sumi di🤗

The mystery around her will be reviled soon

@bold😆

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor
Hope we get answers to this behaviour soon.
Btw, great update. Loved it .
Can you make it a bit longer?

Thank you sreethi🤗

Glad u loved reading the update

Yup it will be revelied soon

Hmm...I will try to do so😊

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313
Wow very nice story plzzz continue it a bit long...😳

Thank you dear😃

Glad u are enjoying the story

I will try to do so😊

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Interesting👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for tomorrow's update !!

Thank you ammu🤗

Glad you found this interesting

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Divya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

WHat !? Chakor haven't shown up in any of the dates😲

Now this is getting me more curious to know the reason behind her reluctance..Update soon..😳

Enjoyed reading it Mona, make it longer..Its really interesting..😃

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: ndivyateja
WHat !? Chakor haven't shown up in any of the dates😲
Now this is getting me more curious to know the reason behind her reluctance..Update soon..😳

Enjoyed reading it Mona, make it longer..Its really interesting..😃

Thanks a lot divya🤗

So glad u that you have enjoyed reading this!

U will soon know the reason behind her reluctance,the day is not so far😉

Yup I tried making the next update a bit longer😊

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Hello everyone!

On your request I tried making this update a bit long😊 and Suraj's pov will be mentioned in brown

Here's the next part 😃

Part 4:

He still couldn't figure out how he spent one whole year with her,the only thing he got to know about 'his wife' was rather than her work she used to enjoy listening to vivaan and sonal's music

He even forgot about their 'first' anniversary and that day he was as usually getting ready for the office *sobs,man he is completely messed up😆*

"Bhai this is for you and bhabhi,hap..."

"huh" he was suprised

"gift hai koi bomb nahi"

"gift? But.."

"Vivaan! vivaan aap yeha ho, papa aap ko bula rahe hai,he is doing all the arrangements by himself,u shouldn't have left your papa alone" said teju making Vivaan to leave

"Arrangements ?"

She turned to suraj and said

"I hope you are on leave today if not then don't even think of making any excuses"

She added "aur jaldi se bahu ko lekar niche aajao"

"why are they behaving so weird today"

"chale" chakor patted him from behind

He was awestruck seeing her in a beautiful yellow lehanga

"she is so gorgeous"

"Hmm" he followed her

he was more than surprised to see the arrangements and guests

"Happy anniversary to the most beautiful couple" came a familiar voice from behind, they turned

"May the freshness of your love always remain" saying so she instantly pulled them into a tight hug,she was looking exited,yup it was none other than sonal

"anniversary ?? Oh shit "

"Th..Thank you sonal"he said

faking a smile on his face so did she and this continued till the end of the event

And once he was back to his room

"I swear nothing would have been so awkward than what happened today"

From the next day everything was normal, he left to the office early in the morning as always and returned back late in the night and soon the days started to fly,

"Ya Mr khanna, I will be there in 10 min" searching an important file

Chakor was busy in making her new sketch

In a hurry his hand hit the glass and on reaching the ground it broke into peices

"Oh god" he immediately sat down and was carefully picking them until

"Ahhh" he has cut his hand

"Suraj!" she came running

"Suraj ? did she call me suraj"

It was the first ever time she called him Suraj!

On seeing his hand she almost shouted "What was the need to pick them up,u must have been carefull" she made him to sit on the bed

She immediately rushed to cupboard and took the first aid box

and started applying the medicine on his hand

"Is it really chakor or I'm day dreaming"

After applying the medicine she was about to leave when he held her wrist

"Thank you"

she didn't turn back but somehow freed her hand and left from there

He was on the way to office and was remembering what happened few moments ago, unknowingly a smile peeked on his lips seeing his bandaged hand

"I need to know more about her,I definitely need to find out the reason behind her silence and her ignorance,if I'm not wrong she is not the one whom she pretends to be"

Part 5 : pg 12

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Edited by Golden.dust - 7 years ago