Sukor ff : Better Half-part-5- pg 12,part-6 28/4/18 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello everyone!

Here is the part 3 😃

Part 3:

He was hurt by her gesture but he felt she might be tired,he put off the lights and layed beside her. Morning ringed and he was all messed up,to his surprise chakor was nowhere around until he saw her coming out of the washroom with wet hairs and wrapped in a saree,there was something that attracted him towards her,he started taking steps towards her and held her waist from behind chirping"good morning beautiful"

She hesitated which made him to leave her immediately,she rushed out of the room leaving him confused behind.
In the evening when chakor entered their room without another thought he questioned"Are you happy with this marriage?"

There was no reply

"Do you have any problem with me... "
There was no reply this time too either instead she walked towards her wardrobe

"...Or with my family?"

She was busy in choosing her night suit

"Excuse me"

She was about to leave when he held her wrist "Why on earth are you ignoring me"

She glared at him and said

" Mr.Rajvanshi firstly I feel I'm not vowed to give any explanation to you,secondly I think I need my space"saying so she left for there

Dumbstruck by her answer,he started thinking "how can she sound so rude to me,wait a second! oh no is she..." realizing his blunder

When she was back,he immediately apologized"I'm extremly sorry for not attending our date"

"What?"

"I was actually ..."only to get interuped by her

"Let me clear you one thing Mr.Rajvanshi,I'm neither interested in your dates nor was either"

"What do you mean"

She put off the lights and went to sleep,he took his pillow and settled on the couch,her words were still echoing in his ears

Next morning he enquired the hotel manager about the same when he confirmed that no one has awaited for him on the respective dates,it was the 3rd shock of his life since the marriage

That night,

"I feel you aren't happy with this marriage, are you"

He took a deep breath and said

"I think you should move on from a relationship in which you aren't meant to bound"

There was no response from her, she just left from there as nothing happened

Astoned suraj thinks "kiss mitti se bani hai yeh ladki,na samaj me athi hai aur nahi bath sidhi tarah se samjathi hai"

Months started to fly,at times thoughts of divorce knocked his mind as he never intended to bound her in this marriage, but he couldn't take this step either by keeping his family's happiness and his reputation at stake

So he used to keep himself more busy in work,but still somewhere down his heart he wanted to know why she's like that,why she isn't trying to cope up with him,why she's ignoring him,but he never wished to cross his line until she tries to open up with him!

Part 4 : Pg 11

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Edited by Golden.dust - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
Interesting update👏
Why Chakor is behaving like this😲
So she never turned up for dates😲
Poor Suraj he tried to understand her but Chakor is not bothered😕
Waiting to know Chakor's pov
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
Chakor didn't apeard on neither one date? But why?
Poor Suraj!
Looks like Sukor had really bad start.
Waiting to find out what is reason for Chakor's behavior.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
Great going!
More mysteries!
So Chakor wasn't interested right from the beginning! but why did she agree to the marriage?
And why is she acting so aloof and not opening up to Suraj?
Hope we know Chakor's POV soon.
Edited by meshmesh - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
mystery revolving around madam
but loved the dude who is so gentle and is going into details to unravel the puzzle around the closed book...

Hmm Madam and her vices!!!! she will soon open up I think

great going
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hope we get answers to this behaviour soon.
Btw, great update. Loved it .
Can you make it a bit longer?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
Wow very nice story plzzz continue it a bit long...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for tomorrow's update !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Why Chakor is behaving like this😲
So she never turned up for dates😲
Poor Suraj he tried to understand her but Chakor is not bothered😕
Waiting to know Chakor's pov
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear😃
Glad you found this intresting
U will come to know about chakor's pov in few updates😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krupy

Chakor didn't apeard on neither one date? But why?

Poor Suraj!
Looks like Sukor had really bad start.
Waiting to find out what is reason for Chakor's behavior.

Krupy🤗
U will soon come to about chakor's pov😊
she too has her own reasons!

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