Sukor ff : Better Half-part-5- pg 12,part-6 28/4/18 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Golden.dust

Krupy thanks buddy for the good piece of advice😊I will try to improve more

Hopefully next update may not be let down

Yup chakor is incomplete without yellow in her life😳

Hello everyone!

Here's the part-5😉

Part-5:

That evening

"Hey adi,it has been a long time"

"Hi jiju,how do you do"

"Well nothing much"

"How is di"

"She's is fine, actually I called you here to talk about her"

"Is everything fine jiju"

"First promise me that this matter will remain between us"

"Fine jiju, what's the matter"

"I want to know why she's so reticent, I.. I have failed to understand her in these 18 months"

"What do you mean"

Suraj explained him everything

Though Adi was hell shocked he tried to act maturely "Jiju,I get u but to be frank even I fail to understand her at times,yup she isnt like others,she's something different but on a serious note aapko unke bare me janne ke liye duniya bhar me research karne ki jarurat nahi hai bas unki duniya ki ek hissa banne ki koshih kijiye,"

"Huh"

"Have you ever tried of studying her paintings"

"No, I didnt wish to interfere in her personal space"

"once try doing so jiju aapko apne aap har sawal Ka jawab miljayenge"

"Hmm"he smiled gently

In Rajvanshi mansion

Suraj slowly sneaked into their room noticing chakor being busy in the kitchen he walked straightley to the study table,to his suprise there were numerous paintings messed up on the table,he was about to analyse them but his eyes fell on her latest painting which was covered with a cloth on the canvass,he slowly removed the cloth to find a beautiful painting which was even dominating the walls

"Wow! That's incredible"

"What are you upto Mr.Rajvanshi"came a voice from behind,he turned back to find chakor standing at the door crossing her hands over her chest and glaring at him,she started nearing him

"If you don't mind can I know what inspired this work" he somehow managed to ask her

"Kya aaj Suraj pashim se nikla hai"she murmured which didn't go unheard by him

"What"

"Well there's nothing special about it,it's just an another painting"she said covering the canvass with the same piece of cloth

"Well I too have my own ways to find about it"he smirked

He then settled on the couch with his laptop and started searching about the 'mind set of artists' and 'personality of artists',after studying the personalities of more than 500 artists he came into a conclusion that she neither belonged to any of those catogeries nor her paintings

"god how to know what's going on in her mind moreover I don't even have a bit of knowledge in art,I must somehow find a way out"

Next morning

Suraj managed to convince Sonal to take chakor to shopping along with her

Once chakor left, he gathered all paintings and started observing each one of them keenly but there was uniqueness in every sketch, every painting had its own essence,it became so hard for him to co-relate them,he was disheartened,but instantly something caught into his mind with the sudden moment of realization he desperately started examining them again, guess what all the unanswered questions were getting their answers!

Part-6: 11/2/18

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Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor

The suspense is growing. Loving it.

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Story took a interesting turn👍🏼
Waiting to know what Suraj concluded from Chakor paintings !!

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Glad that Suraj talked to Adi😊

So Chakor's paintings are reflection of her mind😊

Loved Suraj's effort to understand her paintings, finally he got his answers😊

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: ndivyateja

This part is my most favo..Loved every bit of it..Locking her heart in paintings is amazing..Im getting into Suraj's shoes now..Curiosly waiting for the answers..😳

Beautiful Update Mona..Waiting..waiting..for the next part 😃