Sukor ff : Better Half-part-5- pg 12,part-6 28/4/18

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello buddies

This is my first ever attempt on writing ff, hope u all like it!

Better Half

Charecter Sketch :

Suraj Rajvanshi : One of the leading bussiness tycoons of the country yet a calm and composed man!

Chakor Rajvanshi: Wife of SR, an artist,an introvert by nature

Vivaan Rajvanshi: A fun loving guy, musician by profession and the baby brother of SR

Sonal mishra: Classmate and fiance of Vivaan

(P.s: She is richa mukarjee aka uttara from MB)

Updates:

Prologue pg 1

Part-1 pg 3

Part-2 pg 6

Part-3 pg 9

Part-4 pg 11

Part-5 pg 12

Edited by Golden.dust - 7 years ago

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 8 years ago

Prologue:

She is busy arranging the things in their room when he finally announced "I love you chakor"

She as usual ignored his presence and continued her work

He aporoched her to pull her into a back hug and chirpped "I love you so much Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi"and placed a kiss on her neck

she somehow freed herself and started arranging the wardobe until he clutched her shoulders and shouted "I love u damn it! don't you get it"

She glared at him and said "so?"

That's it he instantly left the room and we can hear the door banging aloud behind him!

Part 1 : pg 3

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sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is uber classy !!!

ha ha our sukor cannot start anything smooth...

loved the prologue

update soon

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor
This is uber classy !!!

ha ha our sukor cannot start anything smooth...

loved the prologue

update soon

Glad u lovedd the prologue sumi di😃

No ever will they start something smooth🤣

I will post the next update by tomorrow!

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nemo316

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Posted: 8 years ago

Great start Mona

Chakor as an artist, I like it, different from her usual fighter mode.

Looks like Chakor is angry with Suraj.

Loved the neck kiss, it reminded me of their on screen one.

Looking forward to your next update.

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Krupy

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Posted: 8 years ago

Seems so much interesting.

What caught my eyes is Suraj calm and composed man and Chakor introvert and artist.

Looking forward to know more about this version of Sukor.

Update soon.

P.S. You did excellent job with this character sketch and prologue. It's absolutely doesn't look like it's your first ff work. Keep it up.

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av131

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats to the emerging writer Mona😎
Looking forward to d story !!!

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sonali mishra

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting start & very different characterisation👏

Looking forward to the story

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Great start Mona
Chakor as an artist, I like it, different from her usual fighter mode.
Looks like Chakor is angry with Suraj.
Loved the neck kiss, it reminded me of their on screen one.

Looking forward to your next update.

Thanks mai😃

glad u enjoyed reading the prologue dear!

nope she isn't angry with suraj😛 U will come to know about it in next part

Next part will be posted by tomorrow!

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Golden.dust

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Krupy
Seems so much interesting.
What caught my eyes is Suraj calm and composed man and Chakor introvert and artist.
Looking forward to know more about this version of Sukor.
Update soon.

P.S. You did excellent job with this character sketch and prologue. It's absolutely doesn't look like it's your first ff work. Keep it up.

Thank you so much krupy 😃

Glad you found this interesting😳

I thought of skecting something new characters as I'm bored of agressive ML and submissive FL😆

Yup will update it by tomorrow!

Edited by Golden.dust - 8 years ago