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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: tarasuresh
Ohhh God...such a beautiful update
Such an amazing analysis of suraj's character
You made me fall in love with suraj again
Yes Suraj will rise..he will rise very soon

thank you so much Tara😳.

getting Suraj right is a lovely compliment. and saying you fell in love with him again ... even lovlier.
so a big thank you for this.

and i hope for the same.
may he rise and shine. and burn the ones who messed with him and his loved ones.

love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: geetkumar
Dear God,
I have a wish
Please give me a magic wand so that I can swap that sadist Udan scriptwriter with our fiery Nimmo.

Seriously Dear, I really really wish I could do that. How desperately I want to see a strong Suraj. What they are showing in the serial is beyond my tolerance level.

But that doesn't matter any more. you more than fulfilled my wish by writing this story. As if you reside in our hearts and know what we wish to see. The exact portrayal of Suraj as we all want. And not a one who is reduced to hand over the reigns of his fate to others.

This Suraj of your story is the epitome of inner strength and courage.
I fell in love with him in the first update itself. Now bring on the canons of hardships and torture. We are ready for the fight.

You always manage to capture the attention of the reader in the prologue itself and then we are like flies caught in a spider's web. The power you have in weaving and spinning such gripping stories!!!!. That now I won't be able to concentrate on work anymore and keep thinking about what is going to happen next.👏

I wrote this poem for another character but thought that it would fit for Your Suraj as well.
My life burnt down around my ears,
My pain was a bright flame that seared.
I endured a great despair, and did it alone.
Everything burnt down to ashes and scattered all around the ground.
No way forward could I see,
As the world arrayed against me.
I was cast into the abyss and felt like there is no justice.
My reality has become my darkest fear,
Coz, I scream, but no one can hear.
I feel as if I am adrift at sea, so far from my apogee.
Getting the strength from the fire
Picking the scatters of my heart,
Powdering my sorrows and covering them with a blanket;
Up from the ashes,I will saunter from beneath the flames,
Divine and majestic, I shall soar
And pain and sorrow will be no more.
I shall rise, for I am the PHOENIX.

❤️Geet.

dearest Geet.
🤗.

wish i could reach and just hug you.
such a beautiful beautiful comment and words for me.
love you bas. you have been my Angel too so you must be knowing my Achilles heel. words bail out of me if i get too overwhelmed.
so all i say is... thank you.
and love love and love you.

and THAT is one absolutely AWESOME write up.
pray what is it doing hidden in here? it deserves to be on the main forum.
it deserves its own shining space.
you HAVE to post it in the forum geet. it is just so brilliantly written. suits Suraj to T. (who is the other character if you don't mind my asking? sounds great if he made you come up with this beauty).

not forcing you. but you should.
and if you don't want .. i am gonna out it in page one with your name as credit. call it surreal coincidence.. i kept a reserved space on page one of this story.
let me know.

what a beautiful piece geet. you should write more.
and share it girl.

and thank you so much once again for your wonderful comment.
love. and hugs.❤️.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-
beautifully written!

thank you so much GC😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: .SoulMates.

jay.
🤗

i officially love you bas. the imagination you unleashed with that 'toofan hai' dialogue. i am visualizing VJ saying it in his all glory.
ahhh... haye! that would be some scene eh!

I am the storm is my favourite quote and it suits Suraj so perfectly.
imperfectly perfect. you said it girl. that's how i love my men!
same same pinch. great minds think alike. so big jhappis for this.

you are a sweetheart. let's do the kidnapping together. and write our own fantasies. i love the way you write too.
i love a girl (and guy) with a terrific sense of humour and yours is kickass. so as i said.. me officially loves you.

this is lame attempt.. but your toofan hai got me going.

Hum zara shant kya huey.. Sukha samandar samaz liya!
Chhed mat! Sailaab hu!

Me too, me too love you... officially & unofficially 🤗 Having inhaled romance novels since I was in college my imagination works overtime for free. Yep it would be the best scene actually this whole update of yours is like an episode in my mind with VJ as the hero & u get the highest TRPs Nimmi 😉 Tell me about it.. its so hard finding a male lead that retains his original attitude & personality till the end. They enter as alpha males & after they fall in love even the household rats are more alpha than them
It takes one sweetheart to know one 🤗 Ever ready for such kidnappings as its almost social service na. I am a rambler of the highest order hence I rarely get into discussions in forums as it all turns into long long essays for example this very post so kinda grateful for the 140 letter limit on twitter 😆 Love your sense of humor too, i burst out laughing every single time u threaten the creatives with the voodoo dolls 😆
That is so not a lame attempt 👍🏼 The sailaab named Suraj needs to destroy the evil in its path, now I don't know when we will get to see that in the show but I am sure you will give us something super awesome with your writing 🤗 Now I am gonna run away & keep quiet till the next update as I don't wanna turn this beautiful thread into a CC but had to reply to the love yous 😆

i love you and you love me. let's not let the world know about it. this is kinda of still illegal in my country. hurrmph!

jay.
🤗

oh same pinch. i begged, borrowed and stole all those cheesy romantic novels (would have killed too if i thought i could get away with it). now i am old enough to be ancient. but still love my angst waale edgy fairytales.
highest TRPS? you heard that Cvs? hint hint. hire me.

household rats. bahhahaa... you have pronounced the ultimate and the saddest truth of the tele land male leads. hence i usually bail out at the hammering of the first nail in his coffin. i am still holding on.. blame it solely on VJ. feels like crime to miss out his performance on screen. what an amazing actor!

team sweethearts. me likey.
kidnapping the cvs of most of the serials is the biggest social service we can do to the man(woman)kind. we might even get a medal for this noble deed.

hello fellow rambler. seen my posts?😆. long is my middle name. no wonder i didn't last in birdie land. 140 limit feels like shackles on my wrists. bigger than the one Suraj is sporting.

voodoo dolls. they are my mildest form of violent fantasy. in my novel that i wrote i fed a villain to piranhas. that should give you idea about my charmingly violent thoughts and fantasies.😈. cvs .. you reading this?

i said it before.. gonna say again.. i so love the way you write. feel free to CC away. infact i insist.
thank you so much for your lovely words for me. and for liking my words.

and badiwali jhappis.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Aradh_27
Reserved.
I whined before in our PMs but I'm gonna do it here too anyway. Majorly bummed I wasn't around earlier. Alpha commenting on the thread when it's 5 + pages is so not done LOL.

I will read, no devour this thing and get back. Beautiful title BTW ❤️

aradhana.
🤗

SO good to see you my girl.

*sheepish muh* i need to reply to the pm. but you know me. for personal messages... i need loads of time. hate to send a rushed reply. so showie about that.

so what if you are on page 5.. you are still my alpha girl.
studies and yes life comes first. so no worries. take you own time. this is your home too. walk in anytime you please.

thank you for loving the title. hopefully you will love the story too.

once again... happy to see you aradhana.
you were missed. really!

loads and loads of love.
and badisi jhappis.
and bestest wishes.

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Nimmi 🤗

I missed you (and the other lovely chicas) too! And yes, I know how you are with PMs 😆 no apologies necessary.

And of course, I loved it. I edited my comment already! Go check it out 😈 I'm hoping it won't be a disappointment after the pothis you received for this already 😆

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FatedSoulMates

@FatedSoulMates

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

i love you and you love me. let's not let the world know about it. this is kinda of still illegal in my country. hurrmph!

jay.
🤗

oh same pinch. i begged, borrowed and stole all those cheesy romantic novels (would have killed too if i thought i could get away with it). now i am old enough to be ancient. but still love my angst waale edgy fairytales.
highest TRPS? you heard that Cvs? hint hint. hire me.

household rats. bahhahaa... you have pronounced the ultimate and the saddest truth of the tele land male leads. hence i usually bail out at the hammering of the first nail in his coffin. i am still holding on.. blame it solely on VJ. feels like crime to miss out his performance on screen. what an amazing actor!

team sweethearts. me likey.
kidnapping the cvs of most of the serials is the biggest social service we can do to the man(woman)kind. we might even get a medal for this noble deed.

hello fellow rambler. seen my posts?😆. long is my middle name. no wonder i didn't last in birdie land. 140 limit feels like shackles on my wrists. bigger than the one Suraj is sporting.

voodoo dolls. they are my mildest form of violent fantasy. in my novel that i wrote i fed a villain to piranhas. that should give you idea about my charmingly violent thoughts and fantasies.😈. cvs .. you reading this?

i said it before.. gonna say again.. i so love the way you write. feel free to CC away. infact i insist.
thank you so much for your lovely words for me. and for liking my words.

and badiwali jhappis.

Don't worry Nimmi we will say "We are JUST friends" celebrity style & everyone will believe us 😆

I used to force my best friend into tagging along to every library or second hand book store near our college... after so many years she still hasn't forgotten about it poor thing. I am halfway to being ancient but it doesn't matter coz I'd probably be upto my silly antics as long as I live 😉
You lack THE CERTIFICATION OF STUPIDITY to be hired by these CVs Nimmi thank God 🤗
I almost always bail out some time after the confessions bcoz the male leads turn into "yes biwi no biwi, I'm your pairo ki jooti biwi" intolerable nonsense 😡 I am immensely happy that I tuned into Udaan finally, I would have hated missing out on VJ as Suraj.
I like IF for being able to write essays too but Birdie land has no Mods so I have the liberty of going completely crazy so me & my girl gang there have a blast talking like we did last night till 3, I'm soo sleepy today 😆
Please keep continuing with the violent thoughts, they are sooo damn hilarious 😆
Cool then CC it is 😆
jhappis to u too Nimmi ❤️

PS. Ms. Banjaaran. you need to go check the VM that I posted today. Its one of the VMs that I said is related to you 😆

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nimmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Aradh_27

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I'm frankly falling short of words. I thought the intro was absolutely brilliant and then came Suraj's monologue...the analogy with that little story. Gaaah, you slayed me, woman 😳 The bit about Suraj's love being legendary...damn I think I'm more excited about this than the show! Okay, IDK what else to say, I told you I'm absolutely horrid with compliments 😆

I'll say this. I'm a huge fanfic lover and for every fandom of mine, there's been this "one" fic that's stayed with me through the years although the series (or my obsession with it) ended. And I think for Udaan and SuKor, it'll be this one-the beginning of something I know will be EPIC.❤️

aradhana.
🤗

saying it again. SO happy to see ya my alpha girl.

thankh ku. thankh ku. thankh ku. you say you are horrid with compliments and they pay the lovely ones.

and now i am depressed. legendary love part and the epic one.
i was planning to stop this one with the war.
and may be pen down a sequel for love. because i am finding the Canon too restrictive. i prefer AU. heck i belong to AU. for OS and and small stories i can manage Canon. but i NEED my AU to make it epic.
atleast think about aiming for Epic.

tell you what. i am going for AU.
i know i will have one reader in you since we both love AU😆.

sounds so damn crazy going for another story with one already on the road. sailing in two boats and all that..
but.. hey what's life if not a little crazy.

what say?

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Resss!!

I'm first, yaayyy!!

Such a kid :P

Unres.

I'm seriously in love with this story...with this Suraj rather.

I was hoping KNR would be tricked into letting him stay in the basti on the show too because that would make for the occasional light hearted moment and some cute SuKor scenes.

Anyway, Suraj here is so smart. I love love love how he sees Chakor in the little kid. Kids in stories are my weakness. If they're written well, that is.

And I loved the Suraj-Ragini convo because I love my crazy characters too (you already know that).

I absolutely hate Chhagan though. Why did he have to be the first person to put Chakor and love in the same sentence while speaking with Suraj??

And I totally get wanting to write multiple stories simultaneously. I never managed to finish any though. But you better!!

Just kidding! Of course you'll have me reading whatever you find the time to write. And why just me? There are plenty more!!

And no pressure to alter the course of this story. If it wasn't supposed to be a romance, don't make it one. I'm loving it the way it is and I'm sure everyone else is too!

Edited by Aradh_27 - 8 years ago

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