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nimmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Esha Singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

OMG !!!!!
What an amazing piece of writing...its almost like a movie unfolding in front of our eyes
Well if the CVs of this show don't know what being creative means, they should damn well visit this forum and they will know
How it would be amazing to see such a scenario in the show...awesome!!!!
But no !!!! Instead they come up with only bullcrap to keep the trps going without any logic

Better to read your stories, coz they are hundred times better and interesting than what we get these days in the show
Plsss continue, cannot wait to know what happens next

Awesome, superb,excellent update...just wow !!!!

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Zephyr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

That was an amazing update. Brilliant writing. Will be really interesting to read how you take it forward.

Looking forward to the next one...

Sagarika.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: .SoulMates.
Loved loved loved reading your vision of what Suraj/SuKor could be.❤️ Eagerly waiting to see what happens next

thank you so much Jay🤗.
hopefully you will love the further updates too.

thanks again.
and love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: eshasrk
OMG !!!!!
What an amazing piece of writing...its almost like a movie unfolding in front of our eyes
Well if the CVs of this show don't know what being creative means, they should damn well visit this forum and they will know
How it would be amazing to see such a scenario in the show...awesome!!!!
But no !!!! Instead they come up with only bullcrap to keep the trps going without any logic

Better to read your stories, coz they are hundred times better and interesting than what we get these days in the show
Plsss continue, cannot wait to know what happens next

Awesome, superb,excellent update...just wow !!!!

so many compliments and sweet words in one comment.
esha..🤗.
thank you SO so much dearie. so touched and happy.

don't get me started on the cvs and track buddy. i am now terribly pissed off.
imli did this. Chakor did that. Vivaan too is blowing hot and cold. and looks like chipping in too.
with all due respect what is Suraj doing? this is supposed to be HIS track!

and what's with this hunger and thirst nonsense. lowering the dignity of the frigging male lead. a 7 years old showed more self worth.
i can spit acid if i speak more.

so i guess i will focus on writing this piece. my furious energy can be channelled here. since murder is still illegal or else..

not watching the serial till this nightmare is over.
bol diya bas.
will wake up and watch later if and only if Suraj stands. not counting on standing tall but stand atleast. not get buried six feet under. or streamrolled completely.

sorry about the rant. had to let that out.

thank you so very much once again for your beautiful words.
loads of love.❤️

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nimmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Zephyr8
That was an amazing update. Brilliant writing. Will be really interesting to read how you take it forward.
Looking forward to the next one...

Sagarika.

thank you so much Sagarika. (that's a beautiful name).
😳.

really hoping further story turns out well too.

thank you once again for finding the story so good and your lovely comment.
love.

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FatedSoulMates

@FatedSoulMates

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

thank you so much Jay🤗.
hopefully you will love the further updates too.

thanks again.
and love.

You are most welcome Nimmi 🤗
Now coming to your 2nd update that I just read... u had me at "I AM THE STORM" I literally squealed reading that coz I could actually envision VJ saying "Hum hi to woh toofan hai" or something like that with all the intensity that u put in your writing ❤️
Reading this makes me wanna kidnap the damn writer of Udaan & force you to take his/her place. This is all my TV dreams coming true watching a male lead on his journey to being imperfectly perfect
Oh I will definitely love everything you write

Thank YOU
Love

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

DAMN, what will I not give to see the exact same thing happening in the show?

That was amazing! Too real, too true. Loved the eagle story.The symbolism. The strength it gave Suraj to rise from the flames that had engulfed him. To not burn but be born again in those flames.

I am glad that whenever Chakor will be back, she will see the Suraj she loves, all fine and ok. Fighting and not getting or letting his soul killed.

The story of the two opposites who cannot be more same❤️

Update soon!

-Sanu

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: .SoulMates.

You are most welcome Nimmi 🤗
Now coming to your 2nd update that I just read... u had me at "I AM THE STORM" I literally squealed reading that coz I could actually envision VJ saying "Hum hi to woh toofan hai" or something like that with all the intensity that u put in your writing ❤️
Reading this makes me wanna kidnap the damn writer of Udaan & force you to take his/her place. This is all my TV dreams coming true watching a male lead on his journey to being imperfectly perfect
Oh I will definitely love everything you write

Thank YOU
Love

jay.
🤗

i officially love you bas. the imagination you unleashed with that 'toofan hai' dialogue. i am visualizing VJ saying it in his all glory.
ahhh... haye! that would be some scene eh!

I am the storm is my favourite quote and it suits Suraj so perfectly.
imperfectly perfect. you said it girl. that's how i love my men!
same same pinch. great minds think alike. so big jhappis for this.

you are a sweetheart. let's do the kidnapping together. and write our own fantasies. i love the way you write too.
i love a girl (and guy) with a terrific sense of humour and yours is kickass. so as i said.. me officially loves you.

this is lame attempt.. but your toofan hai got me going.

Hum zara shant kya huey.. Sukha samandar samaz liya!
Chhed mat! Sailaab hu!

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Sruti

@vs215blooms

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

The fabulous part... You are really a amazing writer... You have unique skill in writing... I feel suraj rajvanshi through your words... I expect the same from the show... You made my day... Am waiting for your update sissy...

I wish suraj to take his own flight in the show as well... Thnk u so much for wonderful story...

- suruthi