SS: Udaan::The Flight of MoonBird & The Phoenix. (Discontinued).

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-
amazingly written!

thank you so much GC.😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Zephyr8
Exciting...The game begins. Another superb update. Really liking how you're making Suraj use his brains. Waiting for the next...
Thank you for liking my name. I take no credit for it though 😊

Sagarika.

thank you so much Sagarika.😳.
hoping that you would love the further games too. our Suraj is going to play a few more.

your name is indeed beautiful.

thanks again dear.
and love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
I'm going to bookmark this for sure
I loved it sooo much...🤗
I loved your SS Suraj...
He is so determined, strong, clever, brave and he is my smart baba...😆 And your ss dialogues was awesome too 👏...All suraj's dialogues fabulous I love it...This one is my favourite " Mind has always been my favourite TOY to play with..."😉 so suraj leave with bastiwale as per his plan and he became friends with bandhua children's...He feels guilty so he helped them...chuttki the little chakor, she is so sweet...ragini ki to band baj gayi now she will tandav on KN's head 🤣

I'm surprised with chagan...ye kya hui gava I never thought about this he is smart...hmmm...Suraj never believe anyone now so easily jo bhi hua uske baad to nahii perhaps ...But chagan know how to convince suraj...uske paas ek magic wand hai jiss ka naam hai Chakor 😳...well well suraj agree and now see what next move from suraj...

Sab ko dikh raha why not suraj see he is in love with chakor...pakhandi...huhh

Naa main gira naa meri ummeedo k minaar gire..,
Per
Log muje girane main kai baar gire...!!!!

Khushi..
🤗.

always an absolute pleasure to read your comments dear one.
have i told you that i so love the little nuggets of beautiful shayaris you pen down?
they are really beautiful.
keep them coming.

Rangini and tandav.😆. more to come for her.
Chagan.. oh i love bromance. So needed a worthy fellow for our Suraj babu. hence chagan had to smart up.
itni jaldi nahi dikhega to our pakhandi. dum biryani. take it slow. let it simmer. i love my love story that way. and this is not even a love story😆. more of a war story.

thank you so much for reading, enjoying and loving the update Khushi.
and of course your lovely comment too.

lots of love.
and hugs.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: srividhya68
just now caught with the story
wow...awesome updates
loved it so much
i like this suraj very much
he really is a phoenix
waiting for next upt
cont soon

thank you so much Srividhya😳.
for reading the updates and liking them so much.

and for the sweet comment. i hope you will love the further updates too.
and love our Phoenix.

thank you once again.
and love.

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Sruti

@vs215blooms

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

"The writer is an explorer.. Every step is an advance into a new land"

Dear sissy, you made me to explore a miles and miles in suraj's battlefield. Mind is his toy to play games, his game is let to begin.. Mini chakor and gang is his friends...their bonding is nice... It is better that chagan don't change his colours often...

Already i caught the update bt now only i cauht time to comment and also reading your updates again and again and boosting myself... You are a unique writer sissy... Amazing updates... Love to read again and again... Portrayal of suraj is amazing...

Evil kamalnarayan and co, "you have seen his descent... Now watch his rising" like a phoenix.

- Sruthi

Edited by vs215blooms - 8 years ago

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Res! First again :P

Just woke up after staying up till 6AM reading Angel and I'm still not finished!!

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Sruti

@vs215blooms

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Fireworks...👏 am enjoying the fireworks... Fabulously written... Always whole heartedly loving your writing...

Seems like a mini chakor is helping suraj in upcoming episodes of udaan in some olv... Your writing is got into my mind... Cv s go through your updates i think so..👍🏼

Suraj is very smart... I always think he is ahead of chakor... Bt nowadays cv's forget to show his smartness in show... But here i enjoy baba suraj dev...

Awesome update... Eagerly Waiting for next one...

-sruthi

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Aradh_27
Res! First again :P
Just woke up after staying up till 6AM reading Angel and I'm still not finished!!

meri alpha.
🤗.

woah! 6 am? reading Angel.
aww... now you are making me feel so damn good for being his creator... if you found him this good.
love you bas.

thank you SO much for reading him and loving him. and reminding me of him my angel.

a big heartfelt thank you for being you.
and for your love.🤗.
and yes.. badiwaali jhappis.❤️.

p.s. have to say this.. your SS is going GREAT. All that intrigue, suspense and story and characters. perfecto!

Edited by Banjaaran. - 8 years ago

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: vs215blooms

Fireworks...👏 am enjoying the fireworks... Fabulously written... Always whole heartedly loving your writing...

Seems like a mini chakor is helping suraj in upcoming episodes of udaan in some olv... Your writing is got into my mind... Cv s go through your updates i think so..👍🏼

Suraj is very smart... I always think he is ahead of chakor... Bt nowadays cv's forget to show his smartness in show... But here i enjoy baba suraj dev...

Awesome update... Eagerly Waiting for next one...

-sruthi

Thank you so much Sruthi🤗.
your comments truly bring a happy smile on my face.

mini chakor.😆. even you thought the same. i thought i was the only one. thank you so much girl.
but could be coincidence. or something like that.

Suraj was lot many times 10 steps ahead of Chakor. he had a devilish mind of his own. Cvs are totally forgetting his core characteristics..

i am glad you enjoyed the Suraj version here.

thank you so very much once again sruthi.

lots of love.
and hugs.

p.s. i replied to your earlier beautiful message but something went wrong in IF i guess. will reply again.😳.

much love.

Edited by Banjaaran. - 8 years ago

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