Dear God,I have a wish
Please give me a magic wand so that I can swap that sadist Udan scriptwriter with our fiery Nimmo.
Seriously Dear, I really really wish I could do that. How desperately I want to see a strong Suraj. What they are showing in the serial is beyond my tolerance level.
But that doesn't matter any more. you more than fulfilled my wish by writing this story. As if you reside in our hearts and know what we wish to see. The exact portrayal of Suraj as we all want. And not a one who is reduced to hand over the reigns of his fate to others.
This Suraj of your story is the epitome of inner strength and courage.
I fell in love with him in the first update itself. Now bring on the canons of hardships and torture. We are ready for the fight.
You always manage to capture the attention of the reader in the prologue itself and then we are like flies caught in a spider's web. The power you have in weaving and spinning such gripping stories!!!!. That now I won't be able to concentrate on work anymore and keep thinking about what is going to happen next.š
I wrote this poem for another character but thought that it would fit for Your Suraj as well.
My life burnt down around my ears,
My pain was a bright flame that seared.
I endured a great despair, and did it alone.
Everything burnt down to ashes and scattered all around the ground.
No way forward could I see,
As the world arrayed against me.
I was cast into the abyss and felt like there is no justice.
My reality has become my darkest fear,
Coz, I scream, but no one can hear.
I feel as if I am adrift at sea, so far from my apogee.
Getting the strength from the fire
Picking the scatters of my heart,
Powdering my sorrows and covering them with a blanket;
Up from the ashes,I will saunter from beneath the flames,
Divine and majestic, I shall soar
And pain and sorrow will be no more.
I shall rise, for I am the PHOENIX.
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