SS: Udaan::The Flight of MoonBird & The Phoenix. (Discontinued). - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.



dearest Geet.
🤗.

wish i could reach and just hug you.
such a beautiful beautiful comment and words for me.
love you bas. you have been my Angel too so you must be knowing my Achilles heel. words bail out of me if i get too overwhelmed.
so all i say is... thank you.
and love love and love you.

and THAT is one absolutely AWESOME write up.
pray what is it doing hidden in here? it deserves to be on the main forum.
it deserves its own shining space.
you HAVE to post it in the forum geet. it is just so brilliantly written. suits Suraj to T. (who is the other character if you don't mind my asking? sounds great if he made you come up with this beauty).

not forcing you. but you should.
and if you don't want .. i am gonna out it in page one with your name as credit. call it surreal coincidence.. i kept a reserved space on page one of this story.
let me know.

what a beautiful piece geet. you should write more.
and share it girl.

and thank you so much once again for your wonderful comment.
love. and hugs.❤️.



And I love you too!!!!!!!!!!!! Sooo much🤗
You deserve all the praises and appreciations.
You liked the write up. 😲That is high praise coming from you. I will always treasure and cherish it😳.
I actually wrote for 'Atharv Sujata' of Jaana na dil se door coming on star plus. That character is one of a kind. Never seen anyone like him in real or reel. He is truly awe inspiring; especially in
the first phase of the story.
Anyways, you can do whatever you wish with the write up. Infact I would be just happy if it is of any use to you.

Read the third part . So our Suraj is also a devious one eh😉.
I am loving it. I absolutely love a grey shaded hero. Or should I say a badass hero.
My kind of a hero. Coming to life straight out of a romance novel. mmm Yummy!!!!!!!
Waiting for the next part quite eagerly.
❤️ Geet.

Edited by geetkumar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
@Nimmi, that was beautiful!!! I seriously hope the show goes your way at least how Suraj uses his brains. Love this guy so much.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Exciting...The game begins. Another superb update. Really liking how you're making Suraj use his brains. Waiting for the next...
Thank you for liking my name. I take no credit for it though 😊

Sagarika.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
I'm going to bookmark this for sure
I loved it sooo much...🤗
I loved your SS Suraj...
He is so determined, strong, clever, brave and he is my smart baba...😆 And your ss dialogues was awesome too 👏...All suraj's dialogues fabulous I love it...This one is my favourite " Mind has always been my favourite TOY to play with..."😉 so suraj leave with bastiwale as per his plan and he became friends with bandhua children's...He feels guilty so he helped them...chuttki the little chakor, she is so sweet...ragini ki to band baj gayi now she will tandav on KN's head 🤣

I'm surprised with chagan...ye kya hui gava I never thought about this he is smart...hmmm...Suraj never believe anyone now so easily jo bhi hua uske baad to nahii perhaps ...But chagan know how to convince suraj...uske paas ek magic wand hai jiss ka naam hai Chakor 😳...well well suraj agree and now see what next move from suraj...

Sab ko dikh raha why not suraj see he is in love with chakor...pakhandi...huhh

Naa main gira naa meri ummeedo k minaar gire..,
Per
Log muje girane main kai baar gire...!!!!

Edited by Khushi_Dillse - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
just now caught with the story
wow...awesome updates
loved it so much
i like this suraj very much
he really is a phoenix
waiting for next upt
cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Aradh_27

Nimmi 🤗

I missed you (and the other lovely chicas) too! And yes, I know how you are with PMs 😆 no apologies necessary.

And of course, I loved it. I edited my comment already! Go check it out 😈 I'm hoping it won't be a disappointment after the pothis you received for this already 😆



aradhana.
🤗

i suck in replying to pms. i am horrible in replying to comments.
and then i call myself a writer😆. laanat hai!

you are a sweetheart bas.

disappointment? heck no! always a pleasure to read any comment, post and words of yours. always.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: .SoulMates.



Don't worry Nimmi we will say "We are JUST friends" celebrity style & everyone will believe us 😆

I used to force my best friend into tagging along to every library or second hand book store near our college... after so many years she still hasn't forgotten about it poor thing. I am halfway to being ancient but it doesn't matter coz I'd probably be upto my silly antics as long as I live 😉
You lack THE CERTIFICATION OF STUPIDITY to be hired by these CVs Nimmi thank God 🤗
I almost always bail out some time after the confessions bcoz the male leads turn into "yes biwi no biwi, I'm your pairo ki jooti biwi" intolerable nonsense 😡 I am immensely happy that I tuned into Udaan finally, I would have hated missing out on VJ as Suraj.
I like IF for being able to write essays too but Birdie land has no Mods so I have the liberty of going completely crazy so me & my girl gang there have a blast talking like we did last night till 3, I'm soo sleepy today 😆
Please keep continuing with the violent thoughts, they are sooo damn hilarious 😆
Cool then CC it is 😆
jhappis to u too Nimmi ❤️

PS. Ms. Banjaaran. you need to go check the VM that I posted today. Its one of the VMs that I said is related to you 😆



bahhaaa..
you have got some kick ass sense of humour girl. and i so love it.

just friends sounds perfect! let's not let paps catch us.

only half way being ancient? - KID! 😆.
i am a true blue ancient old biddy. though i am going to remain a recycled teenager forever.
growing up ain't my forte!
and may you live long long and long just the way you are. you rock this way.

THE CERTIFICATION OF STUPIDITY! haaha 🤗. thanks jay. that is one certificate i won't want even if someone pays me to own it.

@bold. same pinch.
though you are being too generous here.
male lead turning into pairo ki jooti? naare! they will be reduced to pairo ki jooti ki dhul ka tuccha sa ek kan!
the curse of indian tele land.

missing VJ as Udaan would have been such a crying shame and crime. me too is so glad i stumbled upon Udaan.

your birdie land sounds fun. have loads and loads of fun dear girl. crazy is super fun!

only you could find my violent thoughts hilarious😆. and i thought i might need a shrink.

oh that VM of yours Ms. Soulmates is a perfection. what a pure bliss.
the fact that i look at the title and it gives a massive kick to my ego courtesy its awesome name - adds to the allure.😳.

the vms of yours are sheer poetry in motion. love❤️.
so when is the next one coming?
say soonest please!




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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Aradh_27

Resss!!

I'm first, yaayyy!!

Such a kid :P

Unres.

I'm seriously in love with this story...with this Suraj rather.

I was hoping KNR would be tricked into letting him stay in the basti on the show too because that would make for the occasional light hearted moment and some cute SuKor scenes.

Anyway, Suraj here is so smart. I love love love how he sees Chakor in the little kid. Kids in stories are my weakness. If they're written well, that is.
And I loved the Suraj-Ragini convo because I love my crazy characters too (you already know that).
I absolutely hate Chhagan though. Why did he have to be the first person to put Chakor and love in the same sentence while speaking with Suraj??

And I totally get wanting to write multiple stories simultaneously. I never managed to finish any though. But you better!!

Just kidding! Of course you'll have me reading whatever you find the time to write. And why just me? There are plenty more!!
And no pressure to alter the course of this story. If it wasn't supposed to be a romance, don't make it one. I'm loving it the way it is and I'm sure everyone else is too!



meri alpha.
🤗

oh i wish the same. i am sick of seeing the guy is chains and shackles being treated the way he is being treated in the serial now. i so miss the cute nok-jhoks..

geee! same pinch. i love the big guy being buddies with little kids bond. i usually try to add such bond in my stories if i could. something truly touching about that equation.
especially big guy and a little girl. purity!

oh i know your love for crazy characters. i am hoping you will learn to love Chagan😆. he is an integral part of the story. bromance. another bond i love and always incorporate.

i suck at multi-tasking re. to think of it.. i am no great shakes in single tasking either😆. but i will remember your err warning and will try to see the stories to the goal post.

AU is a difficult genre to sell. and since you already started 'Angel' you know how wild my AU tends to be. so not sure if it will sell here. but me thinks i am going for it.
Canon is too restrictive. dekhte hai! when it comes to me.. nothing is sure.

i told you you are a sweetheart right. will say it again.
loads of love.
jhappis.❤️



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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: geetkumar


And I love you too!!!!!!!!!!!! Sooo much🤗
You deserve all the praises and appreciations.
You liked the write up. 😲That is high praise coming from you. I will always treasure and cherish it😳.
I actually wrote for 'Atharv Sujata' of Jaana na dil se door coming on star plus. That character is one of a kind. Never seen anyone like him in real or reel. He is truly awe inspiring; especially in
the first phase of the story.
Anyways, you can do whatever you wish with the write up. Infact I would be just happy if it is of any use to you.

Read the third part . So our Suraj is also a devious one eh😉.
I am loving it. I absolutely love a grey shaded hero. Or should I say a badass hero.
My kind of a hero. Coming to life straight out of a romance novel. mmm Yummy!!!!!!!
Waiting for the next part quite eagerly.
❤️ Geet.



me loves you more.🤗.
and you deserve all the love and appreciation for your beautiful words.
the write up is just amazing.

Atharva Sujata.. read lot many good things about him. maybe i should check him out. he really sounds fascinating.

thank you so much for the permission love. gonna post it in the first page.

yeah i love my heroes devious.😈. brains always and brawn when needed.
same pinch. we love the same guys.
will post the next part soon. the serial is doing no favours to my inspiration😆 till now.

once again thank you geet
and love ya.



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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: -Namita-

@Nimmi, that was beautiful!!! I seriously hope the show goes your way at least how Suraj uses his brains. Love this guy so much.



thank you so much Nami.🤗.
oh i could give anything to have our old guy back in the serial. the one with razer sharp wit and guts.

thank you once again girl.
love.

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