SS: Udaan::The Flight of MoonBird & The Phoenix. (Discontinued).

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Chakor:


A little bird truly and completely in love with the attainable... The moon.

Absolute love.

Legend says she waits patiently for the moon to adorn the sky and when he does.. she simply keep looking at him with longing.

And love.

Legend says Chakor and Chaand... an impossible story of love and longing... and the only one to pay the price for falling in love is.. the little bird. Chakor. But still she loves.

And keeps loving the way she does.

With absolute finality.

Complete, unconditional, total surrender.

Then there is this girl named after that little bird. Chakor. And she truly lives by her name. Only difference being... she is too fiery to settle for someone as serene as moon. Too timid to match her fire.

So she aims for Sun. The only one who can match her.

Fire for fire.

Intensity for intensity.

Passion for passion.

And love for love.

And so she loves. Not moon. Not stars. But a Supernova.

Sun himself.

With absolute finality.

Complete, unconditional, total surrender.

The only catch is .. she is yet to be cognizant of the fact that what she feels for her Sun is.. Love.

Yet she feels. Yet she cares. And yet she loves.


Phoenix:


I for reason, a ruling alone, is a force confining;

And passion, unattended, is a flame that burns to its own destruction.

Therefore let your soul exalt your reason to the height of passion, that it may sing;

And let it direct your passion with reason,

That your passion may live through its own daily resurrection.

And like the Phoenix rise above its own ashes. - Khalil Gibran.


You crash.

You crumble.

You break into pieces.

You burn.

You are reduced to nothing but ashes.

And then you shall rise. From your own ashes.

You shall be reborn.

And then you will fly.

For you are a Phoenix.

And Phoenix don't die... be it a death of humiliation. Death of destruction. Death of dignity. Death of life. Phoenix always rises.

From his own ashes.

Sooner or later.

And then he soars.

He is meant to rise again. He is meant to soar again. He is meant to rule again.

And so shall he. For he is the Phoenix.

He is Suraj Rajvanshi.

His life is indestructible.

He spirit is unbreakable.

He is immortal.

That's how he dies. That's how he rises again. And that's how he lives.

Imagine ... the way he is going to love then!

The way he shall love will be just like him... Legendary.



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::Index::

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ur way of writing is amazing !
Presentation of characters is interesting !
Waiting for the start so I can fall in love with SUKOR again with ur FF!

Great writing skills !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good heavens !!!!!
How do you write so well, so poetic????
You are a born writer and its always a great pleasure to read whatever you post...
So happy that I joined this forum and meet all the great writers here in this forum...

Have you ever thought of writing a book ????
Maybe you should try; I am sure you'll do great
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nimmi loved the association of Suraj to a Phoenix...the way his character is going - only this hope keeps me watching!
Loved Chakor going for the sun as opposed to the moon - as well!
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Me also hoping that Suraj rises like the Phoenix again...coz honestly seeing him in the state he is being shown in the show really irritates me to no end
I hope this stops somewhere !!!!
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OMG!! Nimmi, this is amazing. You've gotten SuKor down to a tee. Yes, Suraj will rise. I'm looking forward to the day when he rises. It will be epic.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nimmi, You Are Back!!!!!!!!!
Oh Boy!!! Am I super Happy!!!!
Missed you a lot. Eagerly waiting for your dose of Sukor. As I already know that this story is also going to be an epic as the rest of yours.
❤️ Geet.



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Originally posted by: maithu_

Ur way of writing is amazing !































































































































































































































































Presentation of characters is interesting !
Waiting for the start so I can fall in love with SUKOR again with ur FF!

Great writing skills !



maithu.
🤗

and you never fail bring smile upon my face.

thank you SO much for your lovely words. and for you love. means a lot.

fingers crossed for a good story ahead.
thank you once again.

lots of love.
and hugs.

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