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Posted: 5 years ago
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we will use both ,thodu ruku zaoo !!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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part -2 (A)

i have treated rekha's scene as a fb scene but u will able to join the connect dots .

Three years later
Kalyani...popularly known as K, in the entertainment industry, the diva, a mere glance of her was enough to pull out the pants of the men. She had been the star and the show stopper for past two years in the international coverpage and different fashion magazines. She is beautiful and not the plump girl anymore. She was lifting either side of her bed and was thinking about the day... when Malhar returns back home at the night. Exactly three years back was an usual Friday.





Three years before (flashback )

Kalyani was standing near the window, she was watching the beaming moon in the clear sky.Malhar entered in the room silently. He glanced at her,she was standing quietly. He casually put the briefcase in the cupboard and went for a shower. He came out bare body. His male cologne and aroma of musk was tantlizing.But she was lost in her own thought . Kalyani was wearing a saree.Her plumpy but creamy waist inculcate a terrible hunger in him.He could never express that how much he craves her body. Did he love her? certainly Yes! He always bring luxurious and expensive gifts for her. He never ever have taken interest to any other woman and she always get what she desires of.If this is not called love what else it could be ? Gifting her in the first day of the first month had now been a ritual . He wrapped his arms around her body and murmur - raat ki 11-30 baj rahe hai ...this should be enough of a signal to tell her what he wants ! kalyani did not move from her place. She was feeling tired ... Is sex the onlything he wants from her ? Malhar again assumed her wrongly, He put a slick but beautiful diamond necklace around her neck and said -"this is specially made in London . kal party mein yeh pehenna dress ke sath. She would have jumped in joy if it would have some other day.but she was in her off mood. He asked him , "kya hua tabiyat thik nhi hai woh four days wala problem chalu hai tumhara?" he never forces for sex in her periods ,and he never ever forces if she is unwilling she has always been a good girl and he admits in his mind an excellent bed partner .foreplaying with her ,bathing with her , taking her in diffrent positions is worth of being married to her. Kalyani murmer -" agar kuch aur mangungi aap se , denge ap? He was buzy unfastening her blouse-string,he said- mmm! ha kaho ... iske sath matching earring lana tha kya? kalyani supress her tear and said - "jhumke nhi chahiye ,izazat chahiye" malhar was laving his tongue on her smooth back over her bra , he said in an equal unmindfulness -"kaisi izzzat ? orphanage jana hai toh chali jana ...puch kyun rahi ho, gari bhej dunga !kalyani gather her courage and said- "modelling karna hai...ap ki company mein ! he instantly stopped what he was doing . He looked at her for a while and start laughing crazily ...He never seen her like this . it was full of disbelief and mockery . she instantly was broken like a piece of glasses . why he is laughing ! malharji ?? her eyes brimmed with tears...ap has rahe hai ? Malhar amidst his laugh said- “Nhi toh aur kya karu ? then he noticed tears in her eyes , he murmured –“bat bat mein aise rona kyun a jata hai tumhe”? he then pulled her in his arms and lift her to bed . they lie down ,and he unfastened the last string of her bra and throw it away. Cupping her boob in her hand ,he said-“yeh modelling ka bhut kyun swar hai... yeh kya naya natak hai? Her eyes were filled with water ,she murmered –“mein natak nhi kar rahi hun...i am sorry ... mujhe yeh poochna hi nhi chahiye tha ap se she tried to turn other side but he stopped her and said- “accha kar lena ! meri company ki new face bana dunga tumhe...he did not want to spoil the mood of the night. Too innocent she was ... she turned to him and said- sacchi ? Malhar smirked –ha isme kya hai biwi aur company dono mere hai ...kar lenge .she readily give in by smiling . Soon they were buzy in their love making . Kalyani slept like a child in his arms . Malhar laughed – “ Do din bad bad naya naya

shauk chadta hai is larki ko ...ab model banna hai ise ! zaroor yeh sab swara ne bhara hai dimag mein !

Three years Later

Kalyani aka K sat on her bed and her eyes were still moist .. She murmured –“kyun aj vi is admi ke liye meri ankhon mein asoon aate hai ...kyun dard hota hai... mein nafrat karti hoon tumse Malhar Rane ...I HATE YOU ...tumhari company ki brand ambassador toh kya ,meri juti vi tumhare ghar mein ya company mein nhi padegi ... tum meri zindagi ki woh andhera ho jo mein apni life se mita ke rahungi ... I HATE YOU. She took out a picture of Malhar and throw it inthe dazzling fire place , shredding then into pieces.


WILL WRITE PART 2 (B) TOMORROW

Edited by pyaar2012 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#63

Even I don't want malhar rude

What I meant is he is not prepared he hasn't really realized the love and bliss of marital life and suddenly a baby he felt confused and even like this is not the time going by his cahrechter explained in the first chapter it will suit him . It's not the right time we are young a lot to look after like etc etc and by the time he digest understand ( from others experience or just a unexpected encounter with a small baby ) that how beautiful it is everything is lost. And yes his intial reluctance can make kalayni suspicious like he did purposefully

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Posted: 5 years ago
#64

Ok we will mix and match the scene. I will discuss to Rekha.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#65

Interesting part Titli di

Wow

Kalyani is successful

Flashback was little heart breaking

Present one - last scene 💔

Excited for next part

Thanks for update



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Posted: 5 years ago
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Actually neera had given this picture that he is rude. So confused and rude dono bana denge...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#67

Very interesting

Kalyani is very innocent

Last part is very sad

Thanks for the update

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Posted: 5 years ago
#68

Super update titu di please continue

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Posted: 5 years ago
#69

Ohh nice update.... titli...

So story got pace now....

Let’s see what happens next....

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Posted: 5 years ago
#70

Guys when you will update this story....

Waiting for it...

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