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Posted: 5 years ago
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why not we again start a new story game ? i will soon restart my own ffs .really busy with work . tabtak naayi game koi shuru karo na ?? isbar topic aur part 1 koi aur likho ...we will soon join afterwards

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Yes please. Someone suggest the topic. I will join in later too. From Tuesday I'll be back in the office, WFH is over for me.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I have a plot in my mind. I will start from tomorrow.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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@Vermilliion ji ap kuch naya plot start karne wale the.... Kya hua uska. It is so sad and gloomy. Kuch toh start karo. I will join u soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Okay , so remember the scene where malhar screamed at kalyani and blamed her for trying to kill swara .

This time kalyani really stood up for herself and unlike in the show she is really mad and he really has to do alot of mehnat to pacify his angry wife.

I may turn this into an os..i imagine malhar holding his ears..getting a thorough scolding and almost a pitai because of smth he said.

And realizing how he should confess and not call kalyani a bachi anymore to deny his feelings

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishaku

Okay , so remember the scene where malhar screamed at kalyani and blamed her for trying to kill swara .

This time kalyani really stood up for herself and unlike in the show she is really mad and he really has to do alot of mehnat to pacify his angry wife.

I may turn this into an os..i imagine malhar holding his ears..getting a thorough scolding and almost a pitai because of smth he said.

And realizing how he should confess and not call kalyani a bachi anymore to deny his feelings

It's really very nice

Please continue

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: pyaar2012

@Vermilliion ji ap kuch naya plot start karne wale the.... Kya hua uska. It is so sad and gloomy. Kuch toh start karo. I will join u soon.

Read pm I am sending you.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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neera has given a beautiful plot to us. Shall we use it. She had pm me the plot as she will b off from IF for her studies. I think we must use her idea.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: pyaar2012

neera has given a beautiful plot to us. Shall we use it. She had pm me the plot as she will b off from IF for her studies. I think we must use her idea.

Sure... We should use it

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Plot idea -Vermillion


Kalyani is simple college going girl. She had a crush over her senior malhar. Malhar is the son of a automobiles business owner. They were quite rich. Malhar was mostly away from the girls and immersed in studies and games. After graduating from college, his grandfather was critical and he had to marry someone for his grandfather last wish . By chance matchmaker woman shows Kalyani photo for wedding candidates among other photos. He remembered her as her junior girl who was pretty nerdy type and topper of her batch. He assumed her to be simple girl who will marry her and take care of his family and nothing else. On a college reunion after six months of college, malhar proposed Kalyani out of the blue. Kalyani was flattered already from proposal of her crush. She accepted to be his gf. Malhar agreed Kalyani to marry her in next month by pointing out his 6 month trips to London. She was just very much impressed and flattered that she agreed to everything.

Kalyani was 19 or 20 ( child prodigy) . Malhar was 24 or 25 . Kalyani was in her teenage and knows nothing about actual love and importance of career. They married and Kalyani become just a lady of house. She left her studies and just became a couch potato. She don't know anything about house chores as there maid in their homes. She become plump up.

There was no love between them but their sexual life is active. For Kalyani, sex with malhar and gift from him are love. For malhar Kalyani was just a bait for his parents and someone who fulfil his sexual needs. Malhar always choose work over her.

Kalyani was in infatuation with him only . After 3 yrs of marriage Kalyani realized that she is not doing anything with her life. She studied and graduated. They fought a lot because Kalyani his behavior towards her. That was so rude and disrespectful. She wanted love from his side also. But malhar was actually thought he was giving everything to her she needs. But their was lack of communication between them.

One day when she couldn't keep amount of anxiety within her she left him and flew to Italy.

Malhar never divorce her really but never tried to search her either. Slowly he recognized her value in his life. The way he killed her expectations .

He became lean .

Kalyani became a fit model in Italy. After some years Kalyani was approached by a automobiles company to be their brand ambassador. Her assistant agreed. This company was of malhar. He doesn't know about her. Basically advertisement department of company approached her. They met. They fought . Love blossomed . They forgive each other . They remained forever together.

I know this is cliche and cringe. But if you like it you can continue this. I mean elaborate the story on your will. Everyone can write Kalyani college crush life, malhar perfection, his love for work, their party, Kalyani feelings in starting, Kalyani dilemma, after divorce dilemma of both, how they felt when they first met, confusion, then overpowering feelings, marriage, kids, some mature enough scenes. Take scenes slow If you do. I think this story can be continued for 70-80 parts I think.

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