Tujhe Vula diya -open story game

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- Everyone was waiting eagerly waiting for the Doctor to arrive . Malhar was shot by Ahir . Though he was arrested,Malhar 's life condition was critical . The doctor said -"ACP Rane ki jan toh humne bacha liya Sarthakji , but sar pe goli lagi thi, internal blood clot hone ki 90% percentage ki chances vi the ! pat ab woh out of danger. Sarthak ,Anu and Madhav heaved a big sigh of relief , but the Doctor was not pleased. Swara too was there , she said - 'meine kaha tha na kaka, vahini ki prathanaye kavi khali nhi jayegi ! lagatar tin din bappa ki mandir mein padi rahi ,unki prathanayon ki asar hai ki dada bilkul thik hai . doctor uncle hum unhe ghar kab le ja sakte hai . The doctor said -" Mein ek din aur observation mein rakhna chahunga ! fir ap unhe ghar le ja sakte hai...magar...!! magar kya doctor sab ? Anu asked in a quviering voice as she had an hunch that even after Malhar is out of danger, troubles had not ended. The doctor coughed and declared in a sad tone ." Acp Rane ko head injury ke wajah se partial Dementia hui hai ... Aise cases mein these things are quite common . Humne cross check karwayie hai. humne jo photo album mangwaya tha , waha se woh ab sab ko pehechan pa rahe hai par swaraji , moksh ,Rachit aur Khas kar ke MRS RANE i mean kalyani ko woh nhi pehechan pa rahe hai....jaha tak mujhe lag raha hai ki woh pichle 1 sal ki sari yaadien vula chuke hai ... He has lost all the memories of past One year.

so guyz to twist ur brain and chew u up this the open story game u will have to play .

Rules- As many as u can participate but u just need to follow the cue. u will have to start where i have left and then so on so forth. pls write your IF ID .

try to elaborate the scene . and if u are writing anything bold and mature , use red as color.


All the story link will be added finally and will be enlisted in our story bank as a collavorative effort .


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pyaar2012 thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Guyz why no reeponse are kaha hai writers ? Koi kuch toh likho !

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful written please continue this

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Scene 2

Anu was shocked

she said meri hi beti ki naseeb mein ye sab kyun

then she thanked Bappa that Malhar ki jaan aur Kalyani ka suhag bach gaya

just then Kalyani entered

Kalyani- Aai! Mere Malhar ji kaise hai?

Anu- Wo thik hai. Lekin....

Kalyani- Aai! Bolo kya hua hai

Anu- Uska smritibransh hua hai. Usko peechle ek saal ka kuch bhi yaad nahi

Kalyani was shocked and she just sat down in disappointment

she was senseless

Anu tried to console her

after some time Kalyani was back to normal

Kalyani- Ok Aai! Kam se kam unki jaan bach gayi. Isimein mein khush hoon. Par wo mujhe pehchan nahi pa rahe hai ye sehna bahut mushkil hai😭.

She went to Bappa

Kalyani- Bappa! Shukriya. Aapne mere Malhar ji ki jaan bachayi. Aur unki yaddasht gayi hai lekin aapki kripa se wo bhi wapas aayegi.

Just then she remembered that Pillu is alone at home in this chaos

she ran to home

She found Pillu crying

she went and clutched him

Kalyani- E Pillu! Papa ka bahaddur baccha. Aishe lota hai kya koi. Tujhe ek good news batani hai, tele papa ab khatre she bahar hai. Wo jald ghar aayenge tere paas. Phir tu aur papa bahut mashti karenge. Pal Pillu, tere papa mujhe bhul gaye. Lekin koi baat nahi, main toh nahi bhul gayi na. Ek baar stable hone de, phir sab yaad dila dungi unhe. Tu shtrong rehna. Love you beta❤️

She went to outhouse

there was no one

finally she cried out loud and vented all her feelings

Abhi abhi to mile the aap Malhar ji. Aap mein mujhe mera sab kuch mila tha. Ek sukoon, safety, solace, love everything. Meri life track pe aa rahi thi. Aapke saath se padhai bhi puri karne lagi thi. Lekin ab zindagi ke iss raah par aapka saath chut gaya. Kaise jiungi kaise aapke bina. Aapse dur rahna college mein nahi ho pata, ab kya karu. Aapne mujhko sawara hai, khud ki pehchan banane ka mauka diya, aur ab aap hi........Aapne hi mujhe pyaar ka sahi matlab samjhaya. Janti nahi kab pyaar hua ya isse hi pyaar kehte hai ya nahi, lekin I Love you Malhar ji

she wipes tears and says ab maine bhi than li hai - Aapko puri tarah se thik karungi aur hum dono ka pyaar jeetega

she does shayari

Aap humein bhul jayenge ye humein nahi tha pata

Par iss baat ki koi nahi khata

Phir se hogi meri hi jeet

kehti hai hum dono ki preet

She praises herself- Wa Kalyani! Tu toh ab shayari bhi karne lagi

Edited by Bacillusbadius - 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: leelavathi845

Beautiful written please continue this

This is an open story game u can also participate
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wonderful. likhne ka talent nahi so all writers give me more

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I don't know how to write story so I only read story

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It’s beautiful...

Do write more....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow👏

Do write more please

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Scene 3

Kalyani is upset and worried for her Malhar ji

Anupriya comes there

Kalyani - Aai kaise bhi karke mujhe please Malhar ji se milne do! Main nahi reh sakti unke bagair.

Anu- Ha! Chalo mere saath

In hospital

AnuYani meets Malhar

Malhar- Mai! Ye kaun hai! Doctor iski tasveer dikhake bol rahe the ye Kalyani hai! Main isse nahi janta par

Anu- Ye Kalyani hai! Atul aur Madhuri ki beti. Iski maa gujar gayi, Atul bhi 15 august ke terrorist attack mein Sampada ke papa ke haatho mar gaye. Madhuri ki death ke baad ye yaha aakar rahne lagi. Hum dono ka raabta hai aur hum maa-beti hai. Bhale hi khoon se na ho, par dil se rishta hai. Ye 19 saal ki hai.

Malhar- Oh! Atul mama ki beti. Mai aapka dil bahut bada hai ki aapne isse apna liya. Waise ye ladki bhi good girl hai!

Anu- Ha! Bilkul hum sabke liye kuch bhi karne ke liye razi hoti hai.

Malhar- Iski padhai kaisi chal rahi hai? College chal raha hoga na iska

(Kalyani in mind - Memory loss ho gaya hai phir bhi padhai ko nahi chodte. Mujhe bhul gaye lekin iss ko nahi😕)

Kalyani - Ha! Ha! Malhar ji acchi padhai chal rahi hai. Aap tension mat lo

Malhar- Mai sab keh rahe hai ye Moksh mera aur Sampada ka baccha hai. Kitna cute hai!

Kalyani - Ha! Bilkul aap pe gaya hai

Malhar- Kalyani😲

Kalyani- Mere kehne ka matlab hai jaise pita waise beta

Malhar- college hours mein tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Attend college

Kalyani- Ha! Bass aapko dekh ne ke liye aayi thi! Aur aap aapke papa, behen se saalo baad mile. Aur aapke bhai aur papa ki dusri patni ne hi aapke saath ye dhoka kiya! Shukar hai aap thik hai

Malhar- itni choti umar mein itni badi baatein! But thanks! Humari pyaari mai ka khayal rakhne ke liye! Tum dono ka raabta aise hi bana rahe!

He sleeps due to medication

Kalyani kiss his forehead

Kalyani leaves

Kalyani is very happy

she runs to home

Kalyani - Bappa! Phir se shukriya Malhar ji se meri mulaqat karane ke liye!

She goes to their room

She cries- Kitne acche hai Malhar ji! Iss halat mein bhi aai ka khayal hai! Mujhe thank you kaha! Meri padhai ki chinta hai! Bass jaldi se thik ho jaaye.

Moksh cheers her up

Kalyani- Ale! Badmash baby! Tele baba ne kaha tu cute hai! Ab tu hi mera sahara hai!

Both play

Kalyani looks at her MS and says- Malhar ji! Thik ho jaiye aur mujhe ye pehnaiye! Ye meri suhag ki nishani hai! Waise symbolic chain pehni hai maine jo aapne di thi humare anniversary ko! Par phir bhi! I will wait

she looks at their photo wall and get lost in their memories

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