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Posted: 5 years ago
#31

Thanks Gayu and Priya

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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

today it is a movie or not as a null

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 8


In the night sampada was forced to sleep in out house.


Malhar slept in other room


Kalyani slept with Pillu in other room.

Malhar had a dream.

He was in a room.


Malhar :: Sampada kaha Ho tum. Mujhe kyun chodkar chali gayi. Kyun dokha diya. Kyun us nalayak ke saath bhag gayi . Jindagi ki pehli mohbbat tum thi. Tumhare saath aur hamare bacche ke saath puri jindagi nibhana chahta tha. Har raat sirf tumhe Dekhna chahta tha. Vo khane ka pehla niwala tumhare saath khana chahta tha. Mujhe toh Mujhe hamare bacche se uski maa ka hak bhi cheen liya tumne.

He was crying mercilessly.

Then he saw sampada blurring into darkness with a man whose face was hidden in darkness.

Moon :: Mat jaao sampada. Mujhe chodkar.

He cried for like eternity then.

But then a girl in white dress appeared in lit of moon.


Malhar ' s sleep broke up.


He woke up and started crying in his sleep only. Tears were shedding down through his cold eyes. May be they can smother his burning heart. But they can't.


Kalyani on the other hand felt a aching heart beat. She just got afraid whether malhar is alright or not.


Just to check him. She jumped his balcony.


What she saw next moment literally tore up her heart. Malhar was still as a corpse. His hands , legs were frozen like ice. His eyes were opened. But they seemed to be lifeless. They are dried up but cold tears of acute pain was falling continuously though his eyes.. His face was grey and lifeless like ash.

Malhar :: Don't go sampada


Malhar was under heavy medication so he himself don't know what was happening to him. It's like her heart and soul took over his mind and body.


Today Kalyani can really feel what he was like when sampada abandoned him. The extremely weak soul behind that cold and harsh malhar rane.


Today she felt pitiful that why didn't she just hugged her when he was under this bizarre pain despite of just being scared of him all time.

She don't know why but she just wants to hold him up and make him feel safe .


Kalyani holds him up in her arms and hugged him as tight she could. It's not suffocating them but it's a more lively moment for them.


Kalyani :: Malhar ji I am really sorry that you have to suffered from this heartbreak. I just hope I could met you before your first marriage. Then may be you never had to carry these deep discontent in your heart. Today don't say any words. Just let your all grievances pass down through these tears.


Kalyani herself couldn't stop her tears. They are one soul two bodies. It's like how sky hold up the loneliest moon. This sky made this moon to shine bright and be serene.


Malhar was a distressed soul who found himself to be strangely blissful in Kalyani's warmth..


Kalyani :: Malhar ji may be our memories can be wiped out. But our love can never be wiped out. Your feelings for me would always be there in your heart and soul. We will fall in love with again. May be you can forget me. May be you can leave me. May be you can disappear out of the blue. But I will always be by your side and I will always find my malhar ji. Just today only. Burn all these thorns piercing your heart again and again in fire of our love.

When you wake up again in morning. You should feel light.

I love you malhar ji.


Kalyani and malhar slept in each other embrace for nearly two hours.


Kalyani covered him in his blanket. This time malhar really stopped crying. His eyes were closed now. He looks like he got new birth again. His whole face felt warm again. His body was lively again.

Kalyani went back to sleeping Pillu.

In morning when malhar woke up.


Malhar POV.


Today my heart is feeling light. My head is also not pounding. This is really a good morning. I don't know I think many things happened last night but I don't remember. Does someone hugged me ?? . Yes someone hugged me. But it was not sampada. So who was her. But that touch felt so familiar . And that dream. Did sampada cheated me with other man. Oh gosh I can't remember anything. But anyway. My health is better now.

Malhar called sampada in his room.


Malhar :: Sampada dont mind I am thinking something had changed in past 1 year. Something in between us. I am not feeling that previous trust with you . just For a small time can we be just friends. You have to win my trust back . Otherwise our relationship wouldn't work out. If nothing had happened then you will don't any problems.


Sampada was amazed , baffled, scared and dumbstrucked.

Malhar took his towel and leaved to washroom.

Kalyani heard this. She was very happy.

So malhar knew that something is wrong with sampu but not about his Kalyani.


Edited by Vermilion - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Scene 8

Sampada fumes

but gives peck on his cheek as goodbye kiss

Kalyani is extremely jealous and almost drags her out

Kalyani - Kaha tha na maine Malhar ji se dur raho

Sampada - Oh! Tumhein kya laga tumhara ye plan successful hoga? I am Sampada. Main kuch bhi karungi. Ek mahina toh dur rakhogi, but uske baad tum kuch bhi nahi kar paogi

Kalyani- Just shut up! Aur alag se sona

It's dinner time

Swara feeds him

Sampada fumes

at night

Sampada comes in his room and says

Sampada- Tum chinta mat karo! Bass 1 mahine mein hum dono saath honge. Good night

Kalyani glares at her

Sampada- Oh! Kalyani. Malhar bahut romantic hai. Woh toh keh raha tha ki koi zaroorat nahi iss sab ki. He loves me

Kalyani- Tumhari in jhooti baton pe main vishwas nahi rakhungi. Chup chap so jao

But at night she cries with the thought that he currently don't remember her

At night

Moksh suddenly starts crying

Sarthak kaka sleeping beside Malhar

he takes Moksh to Kalyani

Moksh stops crying

In morning

Kalyani bring breakfast

Malhar- College ko chutti hai kya tumhari? Nahi lekin abhi abhi toh diwali hui thi. Itna flexible college hai?

Kalyani- Aap mere college pe kyu dhyan rakhte hai. Main jau ya na jau

Malhar- Bunk marna bahut accha lagta hai na tumhein. Kam se kam Mai ke liye jao college

Kalyani- Ha! Thik hai. Aap aapka dhyan rakhna

Days pass

Malhar recovers

All AN wasis keep Sampada away from him

it's 26 january

Malhar receives bravery award

he gets some flashes of last year

suddenly gets dizzy

Kalyani holds him

they come home

Sampada fumes and pushes Kalyani and takes him to room

she deliberately hugs him to make Kalyani jealous

Kalyani is irked

he comes to senses

Kalyani- Malhar ji! Aap thik toh hai na. Kya hua achanak

Malhar- Peechle saal maine tumhein bachaya tha kya 26 january ko

Kalyani - (gets happy) Ha! Terrorist attack tha

Malhar- Safe rehna

Kalyani looks at Sampada

Sampada is irritated

Kalyani thanks Ganpati Bappa that Malhar could at_least remember something

Next day

it's Rickshaw strike

Kalyani- Aai! Aaj rehne dete hai. Nahi jaate college

Anu- Kuch bhi kya Kalyani. College bunk nahi karna

Malhar- Accha! Madam ko aur ek bahana mil gaya. I will drop you both

They go together

Kalyani is very happy

they reach college and Kalyani's friend tease her

she blushes

Sampada on the other hand is busy in her stupid plans but Malhar mostly ignore her

he also somehow feels hesitation by her closeness

he is shocked

but thinks that it may be due to all this hospital thing

One day

Anu tensed and says kal humari exam hai aur hum dono ko kuch nahi aata

Malhar- Main padhata hoon

He teaches her

Kalyani lost in him!

Malhar- dhyan kaha hai tumhara? Padhsi karo

he again gets some flashes

but ignores it

AnuYani's exams go well

KalMa bobding slowly and are great friends

now one month is over

Sampada- Ab kya karogi tum?

Kalyani gives her sleeping tablets and make her sleep

She goes to Malhar's room

Kalyani carasses him and says-

Bahut miss kar rahi hoon apko! Humari iss room ko. Chote chote palon ko. Sabko. Pehle aapka woh padhai ke peeche padna irritating lagta tha, aapki daant acchi nahi lagti thi. But aaj woh sab miss kar rahi hoon. Yaddasht khone ke baad bhi aap mera dhyan rakhte hai, mujhe padhaya. Aap great hai. Aaj 2 months ho gaye iss halat ko. I trust Bappa. Sab thik hoga. I love you and kiss him!

Bhagu I wrote down in continuation of part 8 . And I posted it also. Kya karu ab mai. Should I remove it 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Bhagu I wrote down in continuation of part 8 . And I posted it also. Kya karu ab mai. Should I remove it 😳

ek kaam karti hoon

main mera part tere part ke aage post karti hoon

ye wala post edit karti hoon

ok?

is it in continuation

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Nu am de gând să văd acel film pe voot goală dc pe ceea ce nu am văzut niciodată

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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

Tujhe vula diya


Ok guyz I am just making a recap of the story so far and then we will continue

. Tell me if i have missed anything

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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

dc is no longer filmu.azi what happened?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

ek kaam karti hoon

main mera part tere part ke aage post karti hoon

ye wala post edit karti hoon

ok?

is it in continuation

It's in continuation with part 8 . I ended it such that malhar started to feel something is wrong with sampu but not about Kalyani. I think your part can continue after mine.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Nicoletadavid

dc is no longer filmu.azi what happened?

Lockdown situation ,noshooting . u will b able to watch it again from 15th april probably.

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