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Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Wow nice

I love Kalyani mind voice scene

Thanks for writing

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Are wahhh bhagu...

Likhne k liye khup khup abhaar

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Scene -4

Malhar sitting in the hospital bed, holding his heavy head . He murmured .Yeh dhundla dhundla kiska chehera nazar ata hai mujhe . Mang mein sindur , gale mein mangslsutra , patang ura rahi hain, lal sari mein Barish mein vigti hui , nawari mein pooja karti hui ...Sampada toh nhi thi... Aur yeh baba ki dusri patni , Yeh naxal, terrorist attack...yeh sab...Yeh ....he winced in pain . He was feeling dizzy . The nurse who was passing by rushes to him and said -" Acp sahab ....keya hua ap ko! Kya pareshani hai.. Ap apni dimag ko stress mat dijiye .... Pls rest kijiye....

Malhar nooded his head and said - " Meri biwi ko bulaiye ! I need my answers . Buliyein use. He tried to get up off the bed . The nurse somehow stopped her and rushes outside. She informed the doctor and his wife. Malhar was still holding his head and his eyes were closed. Suddenly he felt that a soft hand has touched his head . He felt it very soothing . He murmured - Kalyani!! and suddenly open his eyes . He saw kalyani standing near him. He murmered - " Mujhe iski sparsh kaise pata...Aisa laga kahi bar is hath ne mujhe chuan hai.. The doctor along with the nurse arrived and Malhar angrily said -Meine apko meri wife ko bulane k liye kaha tha...I mean Mrs Sampada Rane ko bulane k liye kaha tha....Kalyani ko nhi! Itni choti details vi yad nhi rehti hai ap logo ko? Agar pata nhi hai toh Puch liye meri kisi family member se! Kalyani ' s heart withered with pain when he said sampada is his wife. She controlled her tears and cleared her voice- Sam ...Sampada Sandhya maushi ki ghar gayi hai .... Kal tak a jayegi.... Doctor made his regular check up and said- Zyada stress mat lijiye Mr Rane ! Its not good for u. Ap ek strong police officer hai...u will recover soon. Bas pichle batien aur kuch yaadien mit gayi hai...Par u soon will recover it. Ap ko aj do peher tak discharge kar denge. Spent time with family . U need complete bed rest. Swara came there along with Anu and Rachit . Moksh was in Rachit ' s arm. He was crying . He streched his hands towards Malhar. Kalyani whispers to Malhar - " Ap ka moksh ! Ap ka beta moksh. Malhar "s eyes got teary and he move his hand to take him in his arms. Moksh jumped into his arms . He tries to touch his father 's face with tiny fingers. Malhar kissed his cheeks and cuddle him in his lap.He said -" I am so sorry Moksh. Mujhe maf ksr dena beta ! Tere janam k waqt , mein tere sath nhi tha ...par ab ek pal.vi akela nhi hone dunga mein tujhe !! It was a blissful moment for all . All gets emotional. They play for a while. Malhar said-'Itne chote bacche ko gharwale ki hawale kar ke sampada masi ki ghar kyun chali gayi? He handed over moksh to Rachit .But moksh wanted his fathers company so he started crying . Everyone along with swara and Anu was facing difficulty to stop his hiccups and crying . Kalyani said-' Ayi mujhe do...' She take moksh and at once he stopped . She murmered -' Pillu ! Pillu nai nai mela babu ! Nai rote ! Baba ko alam kar ne do! Baba toh jald ghar a jayenge phir pillu baba k shat khelega ! Mashti karega ! Abhi piilu baba ko bye bye kal do ! Bye bye kar do ! Moksh waved his tiny hand making Malhar overwhlemed . He thought - " Itni kam umar mein kalyani ko baccha itni asani se samhalna kaise ata hai....? Smart kid !

Pls continue girlz .

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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Samhar ki romance kaunn likhega ?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#15

Scene 5

Malhar slept again

Kalyani worriedly heads towards AN

Rachit meets her and says - Main chodta hoon

instead_of heading towards AN, he takes her to restaurant

it is decorated

Kalyani - Ye sab kya hai

Rachit - Finally! Woh din aa gaya. Main tumhein apni feelings bataunga. I love you Deshmukh

Kalyani- Dekh main mazak ke mood mein bilkul nahi hoon! So please

Rachit- Deshmukh! Chill. It's true. Waise bhi Malhar sir ab tumhein bhul chuke hai. Aur wo unki first wife Sampada ko yaad kar rahe hai. That means you are free! But tum chinta mat karo! Main tumhein akela mehsoos nahi hone dunga. I am there for you baby. We are made for each other!

Kalyani- Dimag kharab hai tumhara! Mujhe tum mein koi interest nahi hai! Main tumhein sirf apna dost manti hoon. Aur ek baat kaan kholkar sun lo "I love one and only ACP Malhar Rane! My husband! Tumhein meri chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai! Woh bhale hi filhal ke liye mujhe bhul gaye ho lekin hum pati patni hai! Humara Raabta hai. There is no Kalyani without Malhar. So just shut up

Rachit - Deshmukh! Dil mat tod yaar mera. Tujhe paane ke liye kya kuch nahi kiya! Malhar sir ko bhi kidnap kiya. Aur waise bhi kya fayda tumhara uss rishtey mein rahke. Mujhe ek chance do!

Kalyani- Aaj tumhari wajah se Malhar ji ki ye haalat hai. Tumne unka kidnap karke bahut badi galti ki. Main tumhein chodungi nahi

Rachit gets aggressive and manhandle her

Anu comes there and push him

Kalyani slaps him and says stay away😲

Anu has recorded his confession

Pawar and Rao arrest him

Rachit is angry!

(Show mein Rachit jail nahi gaya, isliye yaha usse jail bhej diya!)

Kalyani is relieved

Anu- Kalyani! Sampada ka kya karenge

Kalyani- Aai uske liye gaav jaana padega

AnuYani reach there

Sampada- Oh! Kalyani yaha kaise aayi tum

Kalyani- Sampada! Please mujhpar ek ehsaan karo

Sampada- detail mein batana kya baat hai

Kalyani explains whole situation

Sampada laughs loud

Kalyani- kya hua? Tum has kyu rahi ho?

Sampada- Wow! Mujhe toh bina mange hi ye opportunity mil gayi. Main kabse wait kar rahi thi Malhar ke life mein wapas aaneka. Iss boring zindagi se frustrate ho gayi thi. Kam se kam ACP ki biwi hone ka auda toh tha jab mein uski patni thi! Thik hai! Karti hoon tumhari madad. Lekin main humesha humesha ke liye uski patni banke rahungi! Manzoor hai

Kalyani- Yaha main unki jaan bachane ki koshish kar rahi hoon taki unhe stress na ho! Aur tumhein in sab cheezon ki padi hai! Ek baat sunlo Sampada- Tum Malhar ji ki patni thi! Ab main unki patni hoon. Humari do baar shaadi hui hai! Hum dono ka janmo janmo ka naata hai. Unke naam ke sindoor aur Mangalsutra par sirf mera haq hai. Lekin Malhar ji se jyada chipkana mat aur Moksh ko haath bhi lagaya na toh uske consequences bhugtogi! Wo meri family hai! Aur main na Malhar ji se pyaar karti hoon! Toh unke liye kuch bhi karungi! I am Mrs Kalyani Malhar Rane! Par abhi haalat hi aise hai toh tumhari shart manzoor hai.

Sampada- Aww! Tumhein kya laga main tumhari ye filmy dialogues se darr jaungi. Shut up. Ye mera time hai. Aur isse main hi khelungi. Waise thanks mujhe meri position vapas dene ke liye.

Sampada wears MS and sindoor

Kalyani cries

they reach hospital

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Scene 5

Malhar slept again

Kalyani worriedly heads towards AN

Rachit meets her and says - Main chodta hoon

instead_of heading towards AN, he takes her to restaurant

it is decorated

Kalyani - Ye sab kya hai

Rachit - Finally! Woh din aa gaya. Main tumhein apni feelings bataunga. I love you Deshmukh

Kalyani- Dekh main mazak ke mood mein bilkul nahi hoon! So please

Rachit- Deshmukh! Chill. It's true. Waise bhi Malhar sir ab tumhein bhul chuke hai. Aur wo unki first wife Sampada ko yaad kar rahe hai. That means you are free! But tum chinta mat karo! Main tumhein akela mehsoos nahi hone dunga. I am there for you baby. We are made for each other!

Kalyani- Dimag kharab hai tumhara! Mujhe tum mein koi interest nahi hai! Main tumhein sirf apna dost manti hoon. Aur ek baat kaan kholkar sun lo "I love one and only ACP Malhar Rane! My husband! Tumhein meri chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai! Woh bhale hi filhal ke liye mujhe bhul gaye ho lekin hum pati patni hai! Humara Raabta hai. There is no Kalyani without Malhar. So just shut up

Rachit - Deshmukh! Dil mat tod yaar mera. Tujhe paane ke liye kya kuch nahi kiya! Malhar sir ko bhi kidnap kiya. Aur waise bhi kya fayda tumhara uss rishtey mein rahke. Mujhe ek chance do!

Kalyani- Aaj tumhari wajah se Malhar ji ki ye haalat hai. Tumne unka kidnap karke bahut badi galti ki. Main tumhein chodungi nahi

Rachit gets aggressive and manhandle her

Anu comes there and push him

Kalyani slaps him and says stay away😲

Anu has recorded his confession

Pawar and Rao arrest him

Rachit is angry!

(Show mein Rachit jail nahi gaya, isliye yaha usse jail bhej diya!)

Kalyani is relieved

Anu- Kalyani! Sampada ka kya karenge

Kalyani- Aai uske liye gaav jaana padega

AnuYani reach there

Sampada- Oh! Kalyani yaha kaise aayi tum

Kalyani- Sampada! Please mujhpar ek ehsaan karo

Sampada- detail mein batana kya baat hai

Kalyani explains whole situation

Sampada laughs loud

Kalyani- kya hua? Tum has kyu rahi ho?

Sampada- Wow! Mujhe toh bina mange hi ye opportunity mil gayi. Main kabse wait kar rahi thi Malhar ke life mein wapas aaneka. Iss boring zindagi se frustrate ho gayi thi. Kam se kam ACP ki biwi hone ka auda toh tha jab mein uski patni thi! Thik hai! Karti hoon tumhari madad. Lekin main humesha humesha ke liye uski patni banke rahungi! Manzoor hai

Kalyani- Yaha main unki jaan bachane ki koshish kar rahi hoon taki unhe stress na ho! Aur tumhein in sab cheezon ki padi hai! Ek baat sunlo Sampada- Tum Malhar ji ki patni thi! Ab main unki patni hoon. Humari do baar shaadi hui hai! Hum dono ka janmo janmo ka naata hai. Unke naam ke sindoor aur Mangalsutra par sirf mera haq hai. Lekin Malhar ji se jyada chipkana mat aur Moksh ko haath bhi lagaya na toh uske consequences bhugtogi! Wo meri family hai! Aur main na Malhar ji se pyaar karti hoon! Toh unke liye kuch bhi karungi! I am Mrs Kalyani Malhar Rane! Par abhi haalat hi aise hai toh tumhari shart manzoor hai.

Sampada- Aww! Tumhein kya laga main tumhari ye filmy dialogues se darr jaungi. Shut up. Ye mera time hai. Aur isse main hi khelungi. Waise thanks mujhe meri position vapas dene ke liye.

Sampada wears MS and sindoor

Kalyani cries

they reach hospital

ek scn mein itna kuch ! Oh god ! Rachit ko ekbar mein hi jail bhej diya. Malhar se mar khilana tha use! Chalo Samhar romance likho ab tum. And todha bada likhns . Sab kaha hai ? Where are other writers !
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: pyaar2012

ek scn mein itna kuch ! Oh god ! Rachit ko ekbar mein hi jail bhej diya. Malhar se mar khilana tha use! Chalo Samhar romance likho ab tum. And todha bada likhns . Sab kaha hai ? Where are other writers !

Rachit ji ko jail bhej diya because he did wrong by kidnapping

Malhar thik hoga tab jail jaake marega🤣

SamHar romance

mujhse nahi hoga

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I am very happy guys

U are writing stories again

Thank you

Do write more

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Scene 6

Kalyani came back home and poured her heart out to Anu. "Aayi mujse nahin hoga. Main Sampada ki Malharji ke saath nahin dekh sakthi."

Anu consoled her, "hamare pass Aur koi raasta nahin hai." Looking upwards she said "Bappa, Malhar ki yaadash jaldi vaapas aajaye aur meri baachi ko uski khoyi hui khushi. Mujhse uski yeh haalat bardash nahin hoti. Madad kijiye bappa."

After a few hours, Sampada was standing in AN with her bags. She smirked at all of them and directly went into Malhar's bedroom. She couldn't believe her luck, an easy entry into Malhar's life again. Not that she had any feelings for him but she could utilise his feelings which were now fresh due to his lost memory. She would have to act carefully otherwise Malhar would sense something amiss. He had just lost memories of a year, his brain was functioning as alert as before.

These thoughts in mind Sampada threw out Kalyani's clothes from the cupboard and placed hers next to Malhar's. As Kalyani tearfully collected her clothes, Sampada haughtily said "Malhar ne apne dimaag se bhi aise hi phek diya hain tumhein".

Kalyani did not retaliate as she did not want to create any scene. Sarthak Kaka was on the way back from the hospital with Malhar. They would reach anytime and she did not want her Malharji to have any stress.

Soon Sarthak reached home with Malhar and made him lie down comfortably on the bed. Malhar smiled seeing Sampada there. "Aagayi wapas masi ke ghar se. Itna zaroori tha kya ki tumhein itne chote bache ko chodke jaana pada?"

Sampada's smile faded a little and she floundered for an answer. Somehow she managed saying, "Haan Malhar masi ko thodi madad ki zaroorat thi. Moksh Aur tumhara khayal rakhne ke liye tho itne saare log hain na ghar pe, lekin unke paas koi nahin tha. Isliye gayi mein, Sorry! Ab tum aaram karona, kyun baat kar rahe ho. Main yahin hun tumhare paas".

Kalyani was staring daggers at her but she couldn't say anything. The evil Sampada mocked her at saying, "Kalyani, Moksh ka khayal rakhne ke liye thank you. Ab main aa gayi hoon apne pati Aur bache ka dhyan rakhne ke liye."

Kalyani hid her anguish and whispered in her baby's ears, "Pillu, main Malharji ko Tumhare barose chodke jaa rahi hoon. Us Sampada ko unke Kareeb mat aane do thik hai. Apne aai ke liye karega na Mera baby? " Moksh just nodded his head and smiled at her. She kissed his cheek, handed him to Sampada and left the room.

Malhar slept for a while. When he woke up, he saw Moksh playing on the bed alone, Sampada was not there. Seeing him awake, Moksh went to him calling "Baba". Malhar was playing happily with his son when Sampada walked in with a tray of food for Malhar.

"Are ut gaye Malhar .main Tumhare liye khana layi hoon… Chalo Malhar main apne hathon se tumhe khilaaongi. Aaram se baith jao." She made him sit and sat down close to him and tried to feed him.

Kalyani who was watching all this hiding in the balcony was feeling irritated and sad. Sensing his mother's presence and remembering her words earlier Moksh began to cry loudly distracting Malhar and Sampada. Sampada tried her best to console him but he was adamant that he wanted his Baba. He quietened down only after he went to his Baba's lap.

"Sampada Moksh ko main hi sambhalta hun.. Mujhe bhi thoda better feel hoga. Bed pe lete lete bore ho gaya hun main. Tum jakar aaram kar lo."

Seeing Sampada's disappointed face, Kalyani jumped out of the balcony with immense satisfaction. In her mind she thought "Mera Pillu Hamesha Mera saath deta hai. Mujhe pata hai wo kabhi Sampada ko mere Malharji ke paas nahin aane dega." She blew a kiss in the direction of her husband and baby.

Edited by rekha1975 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Aww!

So cute Pillu

Sampada is evil as always🤣

but her plans failed😆

thanks for continuing 👍🏼

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