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Posted: 7 years ago
Geetu update me and u soon I m waiting even I read tis its awesome has usual
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Wow Geethu what a emotional moment kanak atlast expressed her love to uma hugging and kissing 👏Pls update it soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow geetha...it was superb, I was waiting so long for this. Thank you so much. Love your writing it's apt and beautiful. Thanks!!
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Part - 26

Kanak hugs uma, he kisses in her head. Kanak says i love u so much. I cannot imagine the world without u.
Uma: i too. And finally u accepted me,
Kanak smiles, idiot
Krishna comes to them.
Uma looks at him.
Krishna: uma bhaiya,
Uma: krishna, where is the herb.
Krishna: today, that man didn't come, and he informed that he will come by tomorrow
Uma: oh...
Krishna: don't worry, i will come with herb tomorrow
Uma: k krishna, i shall see u tomorrow
Krishna leaves the place.
Kanak: uma, what is going!!
Uma: i want a herb for my medicine, that grows in this region, that is very rare herb, usually the people lives in this area, collect that herb for me. Today, that person was still in the mountain, i think so. So we have to wait for him to return.
Kanak: don't tell me that we r going to spend our night in this jungle.
Uma laughs.
Uma: kanak, we r not going to stay here. But we r going to stay in a hotel near by.
Kanak : thank god.
Uma goes near to the car.
Kanak: what u r going?
Uma: what!!!
Kanak: let me drive.
Uma: kanak...
Kanak: u have given heart attack already.
Kanak drives the car. Uma watches her driving.
Kanak: just direct me the way to hotel.
Uma directs the way. Uma and kanak reaches the hotel by night.
Uma and kanak gets into the hotel.
Receptionist: hello uma bhaiya, how r u.
Uma: hello, i am fine, how r u.
Receptionist: i am good
He looks at kanak.
Uma: this is my wife, kanak.
Receptionist: hello bhabhiji, uma bhaiya, u got married finally.
Kanak: got married finally, means
Receptionist: bhaiyaji, don't look at girls, if a girl speaks to him. He will call her as sister. I thought he is going take sanyasam
Kanak laughs.
Uma: kanak...
Receptionist: here, ur room key.
Uma and kanak goes, but receptionist stops,
Receptionist: the dinner is ready, i think u should eat first.
Kanak: after hearing the name of food, i feel hungry.
Uma shakes his head.
Uma: come, we shall finish our dinner.
After the dinner, uma and kanak enters into the room,
Kanak: wow uma, this room is so pretty.
Uma: u like it.
Kanak: i understand, y receptionist gave this particular key to u. Because, u usually stay in this room. Right.
Uma nods his head.
Kanak look around the room. And the view was beautiful, they can see the mountain from their window.
Kanak enjoys the view, she sees the moon and in the moonlight, only the silhouette of the mountain was seen.
Kanak: uma, look it was so beautiful.
Uma: hmmm
Uma keeps the suitcase, and opens it and removes his kutra,
Uma: kanak, go and change ur dress.
Kanak: uma...
Kanak removes her jewels and kept that in the dressing table. And frees her hair.
Kanak takes her clothes from the suitcase.
When she was about go to bathroom, suddenly the power goes, kanak shouts.
Kanak: uma...
Uma: don't get panic, i am here. Don't worry.
Uma searches for the match box,
Kanak: make it fast.
Uma lights the candle. There were two candles in the room, he kept one of the candle near by the bed and one in the corner of the room.
Uma kept the candle but wax dropped in his hand. Uma shouts, Kanak immediately runs towards him,
Kanak: show, ur hand
She pull his hand, and blows,
Uma: it is nothing.
Uma looks at her.
In the candle light, she looks so beautiful. Uma lost himself, kanak blows his hand, her hair flies in the air. Uma touches her hair. Finally kanak notices him, he looks at her and moves closer to her, kanak blush, and steps back, uma steps front, uma holds her, he hugs her, and kanak touches his bare back. Uma slowly kisses kanak's ears, kanak freak out. And release herself from his hold, but uma holds kanak's duputta in his hand, she turns and signal him to leave, but he signals no. Uma pull her dutuppa from her. Kanak gets shy and turns and run towards the window. Uma follows her, hugs her from the back, touches her hip and hold it by his both hands and kiss her neck, kanak bossoms, he kisses her cheeks from the back, and moves little to her lips, she tried to get away from his hold, when she tried to run, uma lifts her by her hip, and place her in his shoulder, kanak was placed perfectly in his shoulder, Uma kiss her in her stomach and kanak twist and turns around. Again he kisses and takes her to bed, and placed her in the bed. Uma moves closer to kanak, kanak closes her eyes, uma kisses her in the neck, kanak shivers, uma little by little kisses her face. Finally he kisses her in the lips. He goes further, the candle in the bedside blows, uma and kanak became man and wife. In the darkness, they found a new thing. A candle in the left corner of the room, still giving light to the room.
Middle of the night, kanak awakes up in the middle, sees uma holding her. And smiles at him, She was covered by bedsheet, only her bare chest shown, she sees her clothes where shattered in the floor, she notice that the power came,
And she saw a extra thinner bedsheet in the table. And she tried to take that, she stretches her hand to take that, but only her finger dances in the air, but she couldn't. She moves little further, then she finally, takes that,
That makes uma wakes from his sleep. He looks at kanak, she immediately cover herself with the thinner bedsheet without uma's notice, she pulls the bed sheet up, and not to show the bare neck, uma laughs.
Uma: y, do u cover urself.
Kanak: uma...
Uma: but i saw...
Kanak: uma
Uma comes closer to kanak.
Kanak jumped out of the bed, and she was covered by the bedsheet, immediately, she collects her clothes in the floor, and runs to the bathroom.
Uma smiles.
Kanak closes the bathroom door, gets shy and hide her face by the clothes.
After changing the clothes and she comes out the bathroom, and swift off the light, light on the night lamp. She notices uma asleep, and slowly lie down on the bed and cover herself by the bedsheet, suddenly uma hugs her,
Kanak: uma...
Uma: now, ur in my hands
Uma covers them fully by the bedsheet. And kanak shout
Kanak: uma... Again
That night was so long for them.







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Originally posted by: DivyaBujji

Geetu update me and u soon I m waiting even I read tis its awesome has usual

Hai divya
Thanks for the lovely comments.
By tomr morning, i will update the next part of me and u.
I promise dear
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Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Wow Geethu what a emotional moment kanak atlast expressed her love to uma hugging and kissing 👏Pls update it soon dear

Hai divya
Thank u so much for lovely comments.
I am so happy, that u like the story.
I have updated the next part, i hope u will like it.
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Originally posted by: Mansi_jg

Wow geetha...it was superb, I was waiting so long for this. Thank you so much. Love your writing it's apt and beautiful. Thanks!!

Hai mansi.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.
I am so happy to hear that.
I have updated the next part, i hope u will like it.
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Omg geetha beautiful!! Each and every moment write so beautifully...it will be awesome if we get to see this as their suhagraat. 😳 thanks a ton...very romantic, dil garden garden ho gays 😳👏👏
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I loved the way the story and Kanak evolved in these 26 parts of story! Loved every bit!
Thanks is a small thing to say for the effort you put in for us Geetha!
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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan


Part - 26

Kanak hugs uma, he kisses in her head. Kanak says i love u so much. I cannot imagine the world without u.
Uma: i too. And finally u accepted me,
Kanak smiles, idiot
Krishna comes to them.
Uma looks at him.
Krishna: uma bhaiya,
Uma: krishna, where is the herb.
Krishna: today, that man didn't come, and he informed that he will come by tomorrow
Uma: oh...
Krishna: don't worry, i will come with herb tomorrow
Uma: k krishna, i shall see u tomorrow
Krishna leaves the place.
Kanak: uma, what is going!!
Uma: i want a herb for my medicine, that grows in this region, that is very rare herb, usually the people lives in this area, collect that herb for me. Today, that person was still in the mountain, i think so. So we have to wait for him to return.
Kanak: don't tell me that we r going to spend our night in this jungle.
Uma laughs.
Uma: kanak, we r not going to stay here. But we r going to stay in a hotel near by.
Kanak : thank god.
Uma goes near to the car.
Kanak: what u r going?
Uma: what!!!
Kanak: let me drive.
Uma: kanak...
Kanak: u have given heart attack already.
Kanak drives the car. Uma watches her driving.
Kanak: just direct me the way to hotel.
Uma directs the way. Uma and kanak reaches the hotel by night.
Uma and kanak gets into the hotel.
Receptionist: hello uma bhaiya, how r u.
Uma: hello, i am fine, how r u.
Receptionist: i am good
He looks at kanak.
Uma: this is my wife, kanak.
Receptionist: hello bhabhiji, uma bhaiya, u got married finally.
Kanak: got married finally, means
Receptionist: bhaiyaji, don't look at girls, if a girl speaks to him. He will call her as sister. I thought he is going take sanyasam
Kanak laughs.
Uma: kanak...
Receptionist: here, ur room key.
Uma and kanak goes, but receptionist stops,
Receptionist: the dinner is ready, i think u should eat first.
Kanak: after hearing the name of food, i feel hungry.
Uma shakes his head.
Uma: come, we shall finish our dinner.
After the dinner, uma and kanak enters into the room,
Kanak: wow uma, this room is so pretty.
Uma: u like it.
Kanak: i understand, y receptionist gave this particular key to u. Because, u usually stay in this room. Right.
Uma nods his head.
Kanak look around the room. And the view was beautiful, they can see the mountain from their window.
Kanak enjoys the view, she sees the moon and in the moonlight, only the silhouette of the mountain was seen.
Kanak: uma, look it was so beautiful.
Uma: hmmm
Uma keeps the suitcase, and opens it and removes his kutra,
Uma: kanak, go and change ur dress.
Kanak: uma...
Kanak removes her jewels and kept that in the dressing table. And frees her hair.
Kanak takes her clothes from the suitcase.
When she was about go to bathroom, suddenly the power goes, kanak shouts.
Kanak: uma...
Uma: don't get panic, i am here. Don't worry.
Uma searches for the match box,
Kanak: make it fast.
Uma lights the candle. There were two candles in the room, he kept one of the candle near by the bed and one in the corner of the room.
Uma kept the candle but wax dropped in his hand. Uma shouts, Kanak immediately runs towards him,
Kanak: show, ur hand
She pull his hand, and blows,
Uma: it is nothing.
Uma looks at her.
In the candle light, she looks so beautiful. Uma lost himself, kanak blows his hand, her hair flies in the air. Uma touches her hair. Finally kanak notices him, he looks at her and moves closer to her, kanak blush, and steps back, uma steps front, uma holds her, he hugs her, and kanak touches his bare back. Uma slowly kisses kanak's ears, kanak freak out. And release herself from his hold, but uma holds kanak's duputta in his hand, she turns and signal him to leave, but he signals no. Uma pull her dutuppa from her. Kanak gets shy and turns and run towards the window. Uma follows her, hugs her from the back, touches her hip and hold it by his both hands and kiss her neck, kanak bossoms, he kisses her cheeks from the back, and moves little to her lips, she tried to get away from his hold, when she tried to run, uma lifts her by her hip, and place her in his shoulder, kanak was placed perfectly in his shoulder, Uma kiss her in her stomach and kanak twist and turns around. Again he kisses and takes her to bed, and placed her in the bed. Uma moves closer to kanak, kanak closes her eyes, uma kisses her in the neck, kanak shivers, uma little by little kisses her face. Finally he kisses her in the lips. He goes further, the candle in the bedside blows, uma and kanak became man and wife. In the darkness, they found a new thing. A candle in the left corner of the room, still giving light to the room.
Middle of the night, kanak awakes up in the middle, sees uma holding her. And smiles at him, She was covered by bedsheet, only her bare chest shown, she sees her clothes where shattered in the floor, she notice that the power came,
And she saw a extra thinner bedsheet in the table. And she tried to take that, she stretches her hand to take that, but only her finger dances in the air, but she couldn't. She moves little further, then she finally, takes that,
That makes uma wakes from his sleep. He looks at kanak, she immediately cover herself with the thinner bedsheet without uma's notice, she pulls the bed sheet up, and not to show the bare neck, uma laughs.
Uma: y, do u cover urself.
Kanak: uma...
Uma: but i saw...
Kanak: uma
Uma comes closer to kanak.
Kanak jumped out of the bed, and she was covered by the bedsheet, immediately, she collects her clothes in the floor, and runs to the bathroom.
Uma smiles.
Kanak closes the bathroom door, gets shy and hide her face by the clothes.
After changing the clothes and she comes out the bathroom, and swift off the light, light on the night lamp. She notices uma asleep, and slowly lie down on the bed and cover herself by the bedsheet, suddenly uma hugs her,
Kanak: uma...
Uma: now, ur in my hands
Uma covers them fully by the bedsheet. And kanak shout
Kanak: uma... Again
That night was so long for them.



Unbelievable Geethu you have given a bold and beautiful update of kanum consummation. Very sensuous too romantic perfect ambience uma too naughty and mischievous Each part u described beautifully kanak blushing uma initiating the next step of their relationship bold uma but so cute. That darkness with candle light made them one. Thank u geethu 😳
Edited by Divyaamurali - 7 years ago

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