Uma and the female patient, Final part updated ( 15th jan) - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhaana

Nice update, kanum returns from village, I too miss nanisa, grandma n Lakshmi.what next?

Update soon dear

Hai bhaana.
Thanks for reading and commentings
Yes, i too miss them,
Next will be, 😳SR part.
By this evening, i will update part


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DivyaBujji

Wowww geetu super update nxt part soon

Hai divya.
Sorry for my late update.
Thanks for commenting.
By this evening , i will update the next part, dear
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanum1

Nice part geetha,

Loved the dialogues ,enjoyed reading..
Thanks for this part 😊
Health ok now??,take care dear..

Hai kanum.
Thanks for reading the story.
Thanks for the lovely comments.
Now i am feeling better dear,
Thanks for ur love and affection towards me
By this evening, i will update the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
Please don't make us wait too long on next part! I have been thinking what are Kanak's reservations towards Uma and now I'm thinking what was she about to say to him?
Edited by Iceblue - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
You know what I read whole part in one go bcoz I was so busy and ill in last few days so don't get a time to read but now I read it and it's amazing love it. Pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part- 25


Uma and kanak on their way to ladnoo. Uma drives the car, kanak was sitting in the side seat, kanak admires uma, smiling at him, uma concentrates on the road.
Kanak was filled with joy and pleasure, and her lips was waiting to tell uma about her words of heart.
On thinking that she feels sweet, and her thinking wandering around to share her feelings to him. Uma drives and a moment he saw kanak, that killer look kills her for a moment.
Kanak feels burden in her heart, and struggling to say those magical words to him.
Uma looks at kanak.
Uma: kanak, what r u thinking?
His words pull her soul out, kanak says to her, i was thinking about u.
Kanak: nothing, i was thinking about nanisa, grandma, and lakshmi.
Uma: u miss them.
Kanak: i really miss them, because of them, i found out myself...
Uma: what!!!
Kanak realises her words.
Kanak: yes, i miss them.
Uma: mmm
Kanak says to herself, i was deeply thinking about u. How i going to bear this feeling.
Kanak:uma, i want to tell u something.
Uma : yes, tell
Kanak's heart starting beating fast.
Kanak: that i want to tell...tell...
She can hear her own heart beat.
Kanak : i...
Uma: yes!!!
Kanak: what??
Uma: ur asking about y we r going in this road,
Kanak gets confused. And notices the road. That is not the road for ladnoo.
Kanak: where we r going.
Uma: i know, u will get shocked.
Kanak gets excited that, uma is taking her to some special place.
Kanak: i know, u love to give surprise, right.
Uma: surprise.
Uma laughs.
Kanak blinks,
Uma: krishna ask me to come here to collect the herbs.
Kanak: what!!!
Uma: morning, krishna came and informed to get the herb, so we r going to get the herb and then we r returning to home.
Kanak exhales. Kanak beta, ur uma is...
Kanak says herself, i think should tell him, before reaching the home.
Kanak was about tell him. Uma stops the car.
Kanak: now, what happen?
Uma: look krishna is standing there. U wait here itself, i shall go and collect the herb.
Uma gets out of the car. Kanak was about says, before she could tell uma goes, kanak gets out.
God, what on earth is going!!
Kanak see uma going towards the road opposite to the jungle,
Kanak: when i am going tell him.
Out of nowhere, a truck comes into the road, uma didn't see the truck, kanak turns and looks, and immediately runs towards uma, kanak shouts.
Kanak: uma...
Kanak ran fast, uma finally looks at the truck, the truck driver gets panic, uma was stand still in the shock. Within fraction of second, kanak reaches uma, and pull him and dragged him out of the road. Truck driver lost his soul, and stops the truck, and got his back hurt.
Kanak hugging uma, uma was blinking, and don't know what is happening around him. Kanak cries. And hugs him tightly, and presses lot of kisses in his face, she holds him tightly.
Kanak's heart says i won't let u go.
Uma holding her. Finally kanak release herself from his holds, and beats him.
Kanak: how can u be this careless,
Kanak beats him, she beats his chest, uma holds her hand.
Uma: i am sorry, kanak, i am careless.
Kanak cries , and burried her head in his chest.
Kanak: i thought, i lost u.
Kanak: i won't let u go. I won't let u go
Uma smiles and nods his head.
Kanak: i won't let u go. I love u uma.
Uma's world was stopped after hearing that words. And only her i love u was ringing in his ears.
Kanak: i love u uma. I fall in love with u. My heart is not with me.
I fall in love with this daku singh.
Uma hugs kanak, uma cries and smiles,
Uma: i love u kanak.
Hello, bhaiya a voice disturbed them. Kanak and uma loks around, the truck driver was staring at them.
Truck driver: hello bhaiyaji, if u r loving ur wife this much. Then y u want death wish.
Kanak: sorry, bhaiya.
Uma: did u get hurt anywhere, i will treat u.
Truck driver: no need for that, pls have some attention on the road while u crossing.
Uma: i am sorry.
Truck driver: save ur sorry with urself. I am going,
Truck driver leaves the place.
Kanak hugs uma, and says idiot.











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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Iceblue

Please don't make us wait too long on next part! I have been thinking what are Kanak's reservations towards Uma and now I'm thinking what was she about to say to him?

Hai ice,
Sorry for my late update.
Thanks for the lovely comments.
I updated the next part, i hope u will like it.
By this night, i will update the next part.
Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CutestGirl

You know what I read whole part in one go bcoz I was so busy and ill in last few days so don't get a time to read but now I read it and it's amazing love it. Pls update soon

Hai cutestgirl.
How r u dear.
Take good care of ur health dear. And i miss u so much
Thank u so much for reading the story.
Thanks for the lovely comments.
I updated the next part, i hope u will enjoy it.
By this night, i will update the next part dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh geetha...such a lovely update yaar!
Loved it! Update soon... :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _Asfii_

Oh geetha...such a lovely update yaar!
Loved it! Update soon... :)

Hai asfia.
Thank u so much dear.
Thanks for the lovely comments.
By this night, i will update the next part dear

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