Uma and the female patient, Final part updated ( 15th jan)

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Iceblue

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Posted: 7 years ago

#121

Thanks Geetha! Loved it and can't wait for more! Thanks for taking the time to treat us!

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Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Iceblue
Thanks Geetha! Loved it and can't wait for more! Thanks for taking the time to treat us!

Hai ice.

Thank u so much for the lovely comments.

Sorry for the late update

Soon, i will update the next part.

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Mansi_jg

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Posted: 7 years ago

#123

Hi Geetha,

Beautiful ff...plz update soon . Plz don't make us wait anymore this time. Thanks!!

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Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg
Hi Geetha,
Beautiful ff...plz update soon . Plz don't make us wait anymore this time. Thanks!!

Hai mansi.

Thank u so much for the lovely comments.

Sure,

Soon, i will post the next part.

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Kanum.fan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#125

Hi geetha, this is an amazing ff u r writing it's rlly good 👍🏼 Plz update soon

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Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Kanum.fan
Hi geetha, this is an amazing ff u r writing it's rlly good 👍🏼 Plz update soon

Hai kanum.fan

Thanks for reading the story.

I am so happy, that u like the story.

Thank u so much for the lovely comments.

By tomr, i will update the next part.

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Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#127

Sorry guys for my late update.

Part - 24

Kanak and uma was in the bed. Kanak wakes up from her sleep, she twist her body, and notice uma on the other side, who is sleeping peacefully. Kanak smiles at him.

And turns towards his side. And the remember the words of uma and again she gave a smile.

Then she moves her body closer to uma, without making noise, she takes her hand towards him. When she was about to touch his face, suddenly she stops,

Kanak speaks to herself, kanak! What u r doing?

Then she takes her hand, away from him. It is very little space btw them,

Uma opens his eye, and notices that kanak was so near to him. Kanak looks at him, and feels shy,

Uma gave a smile, kanak face becomes red, because of her shy.

She could not bear the situation, and jumped out of the bed goes to the bathroom

Uma could not understand the head and tail. He just rubs his eye and gets out of the bed.

After taking bath, kanak packs her items, lakshmi comes,

Lakshmi: bhabhisa, u have started packing,

Kanak: yes jiji, really i don't have a heart to go from here.

Lakshmi: i miss u.

Kanak: i too miss u.

Kanak hugs lakshmi, kanak packed the things in the suitcase. Uma comes to the hut, notices the things.

Uma: u have packed all the items,

Kanak nods her head.

Uma smiles

Kanak: uma, i want to tell a important...

Uma : yes.

Kanak inhales her breathe, and about to tell.

Kanak: that... I

Uma: mmm

Kanak: i...

Kanak closes her eye and tells

Uma bhaiya, a voice from outside, kanak opens her eye, turns, a man was standing in the doorstep.

Uma response.

Uma: yes, krishna.

Uma goes outside.

Kanak: kanak beta, ur useless.

the servants comes and takes the lugguage to the car.

Kanak goes to nanisa's room.

Nanisa: come, i was waiting for u.

Kanak sits besides to nanisa,

Nanisa: all ur marriage rituals r over, u have got the blessings also, from now on ur starting ur life. I wish u a happy married life.

Grandma: beta, marriage life is a long journey, so hold ur partner's hand, and walk together on the path.

Uma comes

Nanisa: take good care of ur wife.

Uma smiles.

Uma: i promise, nanisa

Grandma: uma, take care.

Uma nods, then both of them get blessings from nanisa and grandma.

Nanisa: uma, when u come next time here, u should come with my great grandchildren,

Kanak gets shy on hearing these words

Grandma: look at kanak, she gets shy.

Uma looks at kanak, and smiles

Lakshmi: dhadhusa, bhabhisa, i miss u both.

Uma and kanak hugs her.

Nanisa calls the servants to keep the gifts on the car.

Nanisa: i prepared some gifts for u.

Kanak: ur love is enough for us.

Nanisa: how can i, send u with empty hands.

After the farewell, Uma and kanak leaves the village

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Bhaana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#128

Nice update, kanum returns from village, I too miss nanisa, grandma n Lakshmi.what next?

Update soon dear

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DivyaBujji

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Posted: 7 years ago

#129

Wowww geetu super update nxt part soon

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Abc12345678

@Abc12345678

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#130

Nice part geetha,

Loved the dialogues ,enjoyed reading..

Thanks for this part 😊

Health ok now??,take care dear..

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