Uma and the female patient, Final part updated ( 15th jan)

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

Uma and the female patient - part 1

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I just imagined,

Kanak and uma goes to uma's native. Because maasisa wants uma should do some rituals, as they were newly married couples. Maasisa knows that kanak won't be able fullfill the rituals and she will create some problems there. It will create some distance btw them. Like that she thought.

Uma and kanak was on the way to the vilage. Car got repaired in the middle of the way. They cannot ask for the help because their not having phone with them.

Uma says, kanak, we have to wait here, so we can seek help from the veliches passby.

Kanak: k uma we shall wait. Uma : kanak, do you remember our first meeting? Kanak : don't tell me that i don't know want to remember that.

Why? What is the problem in that, you came to me, and for the first time i was touched by a girl. And u dropped ur bangle, in that i felt chandan smell, as same in the garland. I don't know that a girl has her own fragance. I never felt like that before, ur fragance attracted me towards u. I was keep on thinking of u.

Enough, uma i don't want remember that, on that day how u rejected me, that time i was in pain. In such hours no hospitals also there. And u said, i won't accept the female patients. So, that's y i touched u. See what will happen? And when i touched u, i felt a current shock. I thought ur a current man.

Kanak r u telling me the truth?? I also felt the same.

Uma😡don't lie, i won't believe u.

Kanak... Really it is true. Believe me.

K k fine i trust you.

Kanak ur really a precious gift. My shiviji gave it for me.

Kanak aside (again he started his sankets, marrying me against my wishes, still now he didn't feel sry for my family members who were unable see my marriage. Enough Kanak, stop thinking about the past. Come to the present. He won't stop untill u agree kanak) yes uma, we are made for each other.

Uma gets close to kanak and lift her chin up. I know, ur my precious gift. You're mine... Only mine.

Guys sry the grammatical mistakes

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part- 2

Kanak and uma still waiting in the middle of the road. A truck comes in their ways. Uma stopped truck and seeks for the help.they accepted. Kanak and uma goes back side of the truck, and there were many old people seated in the truck.

Uma and kanak sits in the truck.

One of the grandma smiles at them and tells that they are cute couple.

And they smiles at kanak and kanak also smiles at them back.

One of the grandma says to uma, ur so lucky to have such a beautiful wife.

Uma says, thanks kakisa, i am very proud of my wife. She is so beautifull both inner and outer.

When did u get married??

Kanak: two months before.

So ur newly married couple. Any good news???

Kanak says yes it is a good news.

Everyone greets uma.

Uma pulled kanak, what are u saying? They are asking whether ur pregnant??

Uma says them, she is not pregnant

Sry guys for the grammatical mistakes

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Part- 3

Uma says she is not pregnant.

Don't worry betaji, soon u will become father. All the best.

Uma smiled at kanak.😛

Now kanak is annoyed😡 y r u keep on smiling at me.

Kanak, i really want to become a father. I want u to carry my child on ur womb, (he touches her stomach), i want to feel my child in ur womb. I am waiting for that moment to hold my child in my arms.

Uma please stop it.

Kanak don't feel shy

Ur making me feel uncomfortable. Please stop it.

I know, u also want become the mother and u love kids.

Yes, i agree with u. I want to become mother.but u told me that u will wait. And first, we should become friends, then lovers and finally husband and wife. But now u r talking about kids.

Kanak, i just said my wish. And it is also my dream. I will wait untill u open ur heart for me.

Thanks uma.

But don't let me wait for too long.

Kanak stares at uma.

Kanak aside( kanak beta u have to be very careful, because ur husband becoming romantic day by day)

Uma smiles at kanak. Again kanak aside ( this killer smile, don't fall for this smile. He is hot, but u should not melt in that. I should be very careful because uma is thinking about the babies. Kanak beta be strong). They both smiles at each other

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Abc12345678

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Posted: 7 years ago

Very nice geetha👏👏 wish this imagine to come in our serial..plz makers send our kanum to forest or anywhere out of home😆😉

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varsha79

@varsha79

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Posted: 7 years ago

Yes.. Good story Geetha.. Really wish to see this in serial

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Manasa Rekha

@manasa.123

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hope you will update it soon Geetha..

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Part- 4

Kanak and uma get down from the truck, because they reached the village. Uma thanked the driver. They keep on moving towards the village.

Kanak: uma, y u didn't tell me that, this is ur native place.

Uma: kanak, this is not my native. But it is my mother's birth place.

So it is maasa's parental house.

I used to come with maasa,

When was the last time u come with maasa?

At the age of 10, i came here with maasa. We used enjoy a lot here. After maasa became bedridden. I used to come with gabbasa.

Ur miss ur childhood days.

Yes, for the past twenty years i am coming here but i never felt the happiness, when i came with maasa.

Kanak keeps her hand in uma's shoulder to console him.

Sorry kanak, i made u to cry

U no need to say sry. I really care for u.

But i have to say sry because i never cared about ur feelings.

Uma its k.

kanak, i am sry. U also misses ur parents. But u never showed that, but u makes everyone happy.

Uma...

Kanak tell me about ur sorrows,

Uma, i am really happy.

Pls kanak, tell me

Uma, i miss my parents. I was too young, not even a year old. I lost my parents. I grew up by bhaboo's hatred. Meena chachi loved me like her own daughter. My brothers loved me a lot. But i was seperated from my family. For fiften years i stayed in the hostel. After completing my studies. I came home. And i came to know the reason behind my bhaboo's hatred. I couldn't bear the pain. I ran away from the house to commit suicide.

Uma pulled kanak and hugged her.kanak buried herself, in uma's chest. She keeps on crying.

I decided to commit suicide, i stands on the tower. I was about to fall. I was stopped by a voice. He gave my strenght. I didn't see him. But he saved my life.

Uma hugged kanak once again.

I am sry kanak. I am really kanak. I never felt about ur feelings.

Uma don't say sry. ( she cleaned her tears and try to smile) see i am very strong.

Yes ur very strong.

Uma how can u forgets this!

What?

It is already 12.30. U didn't feed me.

Uma laughed.

Come lets go and fine sth to eat.

Kanak teases uma. And they both laughes. And keep on moving towards the village.

Sry guys for the grammatical mistakes

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part- 5

Uma and kanak are in entrance of the village.

Uma: kanak, this is the place, where i used to play.

Kanak smiles .

Some old men comes to uma and greets him. Kanak and uma get blessings from everyone.

Uma and kanak moves further.

Village is full of huts and brick houses. Children played on the streets.

Kanak says, i think i should brought my camera with me. So that i can take some pictures.

Kanak, u know how to take photos.

Ofcourse, i love photography, in my college days, i won many prizes (regarding photography).

Kanak, u studied in kerela. Did u studied in co-education?

What?

U studied in co-education, with boys.

Why are asking this?

i want to know, because on the day of marriage, u told me that many guys courted u.

Kanak laughs

Kanak don't laugh, just tell me, i want to know.

Uma...

Kanak... Tell me

Yes i studied in co-education

What?

But i never interested in boys. It is true, that many guys followed me. But i never glances at them.

Uma smiles. Because ur only mine.

Again started.come lets go.

Uma comes to his mother's parental house.

Uma says this is my nanisa.

Kanak and uma touches the feet of nanisa.

Nanisa blesses them.

Nanisa sees kanak's face.

Wow, such as a beautiful face

sees her inch by inch, touches her hand and she places her hand in kanak's hip. Kanak moves away.uma looks at kanak.

Uma, ur wife is beautiful, having soft skin and have chandan fragrance in her body by naturally.

Kanak thinks, y this nani is saying like this.

What is her name?

Kanak says her name, kanak.

Immediately nanisa come close to kanak, and says wife should not open her mouth untill your husband gives u permission.Can u understand bhindinisa.

Again dharam 😭

Uma tell me

Her name is kanak.

What is her age?

20 nanisa.

Mmm. Y ur bhindini is in simple clothes and without jewels. What is the matter?

My wife don't like heavy jewels and ornaments.

Nanisa laughs. Kanak cannot understand what is happening.

A girl don't like jewels.

One minute, 😲 up to which standard she studied.

She completed her college. Nanisa.

Oh this is y her body is so smooth and soft.

Did u know any household.

Kanak was about to answer, but some one came called nanisa. Nanisa answers to that.

Uma take ur bhindini to ur room. I will come back afterwards.

Kanak thinks maasisa no 2.

Uma takes kanak to, one of the hut.

Kanak, we are going to stay here. Bathroom is in outside of the hut.

Uma tell me one thing everybody in your relations are like this.

Kanak, don't worry, nanisa is just like maasisa.

That i already know.

And one more thing u should not call me by my name, clear.

But, how will i call u?

Uma laughs, ur favourite dialogues swami or patidev

Kanak and uma laughed.

What are rituals, we are going to attent?

Wait and watch!

That means, it is a trap.

Trap? Don't worry. I will be with u.

That is the main tension for me.

Uma laughs. Kanak, what are all the things, nanisa says to u, pls follow that k. It will prove our relationship.

K swami, i will follow that.

They both laughed.

Sry for the grammatical mistakes.

R u guys like my story. Pls give ur comments.

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Abc12345678

@Abc12345678

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Posted: 7 years ago

Very nice geetha👏👏 kanak's swami patidev😆 super..waiting for next part..

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Mansi_jg

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Posted: 7 years ago

#10

Nice...plz continue...and update bigger version 😉

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