Uma and the female patient, Final part updated ( 15th jan) - Page 17

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanum1

Geeth ,amazing dear,

You took us to dreamland,perfect emotions ,romantic moments
Well written words,enjoyed fullyyy😳
Thanks a lot dear😊😊

Hai kanum
Thank u so much dear.
I am really happy to hear that,
Thanks for the lovely comments dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow wow wow... Geetha love this intimate sensuous update. It was very well written and very romantic 😳👏 thanks a lot!! Update the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hot n beautiful part, mirrored the reality😳
Thanks for the sunday treat geetha
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg

Wow wow wow... Geetha love this intimate sensuous update. It was very well written and very romantic 😳👏 thanks a lot!! Update the next part.

Hai mansi
Thank u so much dear.
I am so happy to hear that dear.
Thanks for the lovely comments,
By this evening, i will update the next part dear
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhaana

Hot n beautiful part, mirrored the reality😳

Thanks for the sunday treat geetha

Hai bhaana.
Thank u so much dear.
I am glad that u enjoyed the part
Thanks for the lovely comments.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I m blushing, very romantic and beautiful update .Love it,pls update next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice Kanum story, Geetha, I read it head to tail. All are good people in ur story, which is relaxing.👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CutestGirl

I m blushing, very romantic and beautiful update .Love it,pls update next part soon

Hai cutestgirl.
Thanks for reading.
I am happpy to hear that.
Thanks for the lovely comments.
Soon, i will update the next part dear
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: hindifan

Nice Kanum story, Geetha, I read it head to tail. All are good people in ur story, which is relaxing.👍🏼

Hai ligia
Thanks for reading.
I am so happy that u like the story.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.
Much appreciated
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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi Geetha😊,

Part 18: i love the way you describe the nature❤️.

Part 19: "kanak rathi, sandhya rathi's daughter was afraid of dogs."😆

Part 20: Gayathri's delivery, it's soo moving😭

Part 21-22: you detailed nicely KanUm's feeling❤️ (specifically, Uma's feeling❤️❤️)

"ur my sunlight who vanished my darkness"❤️❤️ it is too beautiful !

Part 25: Kanak's love declaration❤️, Kanum are very kissy-huggy😆

Part 26: It's romantic and sensual⭐️, it's very complicated to write an intimate scene, you wrote well without being vulgar👏, the words are prudently chosen, thank you for writing a cosummation scene in Maniratnam's style😆👍🏼.


Overall, it was superb⭐️, i just love the way you describe the emotion of the characters❤️.

Thank you for your realistic ff👍🏼.

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