FanFic- Lovestruck-ViTharv

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello friends ,

My love for this show and ViTharv is known to everybody but I am on I-F since long and some 8 years ago I read one FanFic by my friend Leena. The Fanfic is about a girl and a boy but I think Vitharv are apt for that role so here it the fanfic by my friend Leena. Please all the praise give it to her and I will ask her to come here to post and continue this fanfic herself.


LOVESTRUCK


let's start with the character introduction.

Atharv as Atharv

Vividha as Vividha

I will be introducing other characters soon.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER ONE


Atharv was a small town gangster. all his life he had been living in the slums & living in awe of his big brother James. James had taken Atharv in when he was just a 5 year old boy. Atharv's parents had died in a plane crash & his heartless relatives had driven him out.
begging on the streets & sometimes even starving through the night, Atharv had a rough childhood. shop keepers poured hot water on him to chase him away from their shop & Atharv even learned how to steal at the tender age of five.
james had found him fighting with a dog for a piece of bun & he took pity on him. Atharv refused at first but hunger drove him to join the gang. james was fond was Atharv & pampered him endlessly. even though james was 5 years his senior and could be rather serious at times, Atharv had a sense of attachment to him. like he was a close friend whom he could always trust.
15 years had passed quickly & now james had a huge underworld network with his ever reliable Atharv with him. Atharv had grown into a handsome, rugged young man. he was agile & quick witted. james was aging & he needed someone to take over his business, he found a ray of hope in Atharv . but Atharv always told him that only james could be the leader of the group, without him there won't be him.
drugs, smuggling & killing, Atharv did that all with ease until he met her. it happened that night when Atharv was about to assassinate one of his gang's rival. sitting in a Toyota with a loaded gun, Athsrv waited for the right moment to spring into action. the night was wet as rain drizzled down relentlessly.
the area chosen for the assassination was dark, dingy & filthy. it seemed that his target ahmed revelled in those sort of places. "it's not like ahmed to bother about cleanliness." Atharv cracked a joke with one of his gang friends. they laughed about it for a while but Atharv spotted movement in one of ahmed's house windows. he silenced his partner & drew his gun. it was time to spring into action.
Atharv acted alone. he didn't like to work in groups. they were distracting & time consuming. holding his weapon close to him, Atharv nudged open the front door. shocked that a cautious gangster like ahmed had left his front door unlocked, Atharv proceeded upstairs. he heard noises coming from the only lighted bedroom.
as he neared it, Atharv heard sounds of struggle. it seemed that a woman was forcibly been taken advantage of. "come on baby!" Atharv clearly heard ahmed's heavily accented drawl. the woman's voice was too muffled to be heard but Atharv was sure he heard her plead with ahmed.

having heard enough, Atharv kicked open the bedroom door to find ahmed forcing himself on a woman. "what are you doing here?" ahemed spat angrily reaching for the revolver in his pant pocket but Atharv was too quick. he fired a single shot at ahmed. it hit him right in the heart & finished his life story in a moment.
the woman screamed in fright & ran towards the door as if to escape. Atharv caught hold of her & carried her to the bed. he wanted to give this woman a less painful death. he couldn't take the risk of having a witness to the murder he had just commited.
the woman screamed & thrashed out at him but Atharv held onto her. her hair was all over her face & he couldn't even see her eyes. pushing back her tangled tresses, Atharv pointed the gun at her temple. his breath caught in his heart when he realised that the woman he was going to shoot looked no older than him & simply was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. that marked the first, very different meeting of Atharv & Vividha.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res <3
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Wow! That's exactly the first word that came out of my mouth as I finished the last sentence! As I read the first line I knew this story will be one of the best I would read in a long time. Trust me when I say this I was a sucker for an intense FF on my fav tellywood couple! In a long time I didn't find anything worth following religiously; I was on a hunt for something to read in the FF world.. You sister have concluded my hunt with this masterpiece of yours! Thankyou lover for jotting this down; I hope we won't be deprived of the next part for long! 😳

I'm in love with Atharva already; maybe not the ideal guy to fall for but if it's Atharv I can't help myself! I do love a hardcore guy! 😳 I will give him the benefit of doubt owning to his limited childhood. A&V's meeting is not a very good one; Atharv seems to be a victim of love at first sight! I shall await Viv's turn!

I'm looking forward to reading the next part!! Come sooon! =))

Samm <3

P.S I once watched a KDrama; the male lead is so similar to Atharv! I'm glad I can visualise Atharv. The female lead wasn't my fav I hope Viv is better than her. 😆

Edited by llMinHoll - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I shall wait to hear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nishtha



I shall wait to hear


I haven't read it yet! Only the first line and I know it's gonna be banging!
Will read once I'm in bed; the only time my heads a bit clear! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: llMinHoll


I haven't read it yet! Only the first line and I know it's gonna be banging!
Will read once I'm in bed; the only time my heads a bit clear! 😆



That's a good one 😆
I will wait :)

Take your time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ouh la la sounds exciting
Thanks for the story
Look forward to more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Ouh la la sounds exciting
Thanks for the story
Look forward to more



Thank you so much for reading and liking it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay finally read it . All I have to say Ooo... . Am liking this . Now I want to see how he gets out of this one .
Edited by Africanqueenkel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept..
Looking forward to the story
Pl do continue soon

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