ON THE DANCE FLOOR#2 UPDATED LAST PART,EPI@81 ON 13/2/15

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Edited by crazy_sweta - 9 years ago

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As i promised here I m with a long long update..

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PART 16

Next morning maan went to naina's room as they had to leave for studio...and to his surprise  geet unbolted the door...

Maan smiled at her and rushed inside..

Who...Naina called me up..here for breakfast..geet said staring his confused face...

Ohh...maan uttered..

Hey champ...maan ruffled his hiars and ayan smiled at him..hi fiving him..

Hey maan..woh ...I was thinking y don't we take geet and ayan along with us to the studio...waise bhi they'll get bored here..alone..

No..its alright..naina..Geet tried to protest

Maan was on cloud nine..hearing this..He wanted to hug naina  and thank her...last night he was contemplating how to make geet..spend her time with him...and here naina gives him all he wants. But in fornt of geet he simply muttered

Yea..sure that's a good idea...

No..guys I dont wan create any form trouble..mai  aur ayan..yehi par rahenge

No..geet aisa kuch nahi..hai..i mean koi problem nahi hogi..cmon ayan..u wana come with me to the studio..

Ayan nodded..happily and clapped his hands..

Ha mommy ayan wants to go to the studio..with DD

Naina grinned...ha ha maan problem kaise hogi...She sniggered looking at him.

Ya..geet common..Naina insisted

Um..okay..ill get ayan ready..

Okay sure..u meet us downstairs in lobby in 10...

Okay...chalo ayan...geet held ayan finger and led him...towards the door.

Maan gazed her walking...with a ghost of smile playing on her lips..we r gona spend  lovely time..all 3 of us..m soo excited thank u geet...he mumbled to himself

Like she heard him...geet paused at the door step...and looked over her shoulder..

Maan blinked his eyes in astonishment..

She creased her brow...looking him.

He shook his head..and smiled sheepishly..scratching his head..Geet smiled at him..and resumed her walking..

Maan sighed as she left the room..smiling he turned behind..to find naina..staring him with narrowed brows..

What?? He spat totally flabbergasted with her staring session

U agreed so easily..u usually don't even allow me to come with u to the studio..phir use kyu??

Are..so that we could spend some..time...alone..he said in flow..

Naina widen her eyes..perking her brows

He bit his tongue,..i..i mean...so that we could be alone and discuss our next act.on the dance floor he mumbled..

Chalo...ill see u down..He hurriedly..left

Naina chuckled widly..she giggled..awe both of them are soo adorable...such a cute family..aweee ..

They drove to studio..in complete hurry. They had to finish this song by today and start practising their songs for the live concert. Composers ring  naina...who was  having a tough time handling them..

they strolled inside the studio ..and maan went in for recording!

He took the sheet in his hand read the lyrics..and closed his eyes...taking a deep breath he opened them again..gazing geet. She smiled softly at him .. giving him thumbs up... Maan smiled widely...and  sang the whole song on one go..no mistakes..at all. The composers were little surprised at this..but nevertheless appreciated him. Geet for the first time felt his voice striking her heart.His voice came out beautifully and she was lost in that..until naina bought her back.

maan came out excitedly ...

did u guys like my song...?? he asked geet and ayan

yep..dd we love it...!!haina mommy ayan said poking her..

yep..baby we loved ur song..

maan s smile widen ...thanks he said slowly

naina was standing there observing all of these..

o god the great.msk who is so fast..when it comes to flriting with girls..is fumbling .in front of geet.

aise kaam kaise chalega..mujhe hi kuch karna padega..

she interrupted their...moment...

hey guys..lets go and hog something I m feeling hungry..!!!

maan rolled his eyes at her..

while naina gave him..what -did-I-do look..

they all settled themselves in car...and drove to a posh restaurant.

 

the place was new one hence there weren't many people around. they all took their seats...and ordered food.

since it was nearly lunch time..there was rush of people inside the restaurant ..

many of them recognized maan..and came to him.

He politely spoke to them and gave them his autoprapgh..

Ayan watched everything carefully ..

the manager made an announcement making all the guest aware of this MSK ..

we have the great singing sensation msk with us...we r obliged to have him here..sir..we want to grab this opportunity ...ans would want u to sing a song for us

maan stood ..up and waved all..cursing naina inwardly ..he wished to have a simple lunch without any fuss..but she dragged them here...

heyy guys..no..m with frnds..some other time..maybe..

sir plz..manager requested him..all his fans too joined him..and cheered for him...

maan sighed...and glared naina..who made a sorry face

maan just one song..they really want u to sing...naina pleaded..

maan huffed angrily .

maan..plz..just a song..geet said patting his hand and making a  cute face

How could he deny her...her request was his command..!!

.okay....he uttered ..smiling at her.

geet smiled uncomfortablly..realizing what she did...and quickly pulled her  hand back..awkwardly

 

maan stood up..and walked up to the podium..where there was guitar and mike arranged for him..

he took the guitar and adjusted the mike...slolwy striking the strings..he sang..

 

this was his romantic no. ..which most of them loved..but today he sang not for his fans..but for someone special..

Mere bina rehne laga hoo

Teri hawaon me behne laga hoo

Jaane main kaise tera hua hoo

 

Mujhe to lagta hai main shayad tere dil ki dua hoo

Tujhko jo paaya ahan to jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye

Bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan

 

geet felt heat flooding to her cheeks..as maan gazed her intently ...

his lyrics...gave her goosebumbs..

she dipped her head..blushing...

 

Mujhe to lagta hai main shayad tere dil ki dua hoo

Tujhko jo paaya ahan to jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye

Bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan

 

Tu meri manzil hai tere kadmon pe bas rukne laga hu

 

Tujhko jo paaya ahan to jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye

Bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan

 

Tujhko jo paaya ahan to jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye

Bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan

 

ayan clapped has maan sang...he too smiled sweetly eating his ice. cream ..

geet's expression dint go unnoticed by naina. she smirked as she came e up with a brillant plan..

She excused herself..and quitely went to manger..

as maan finished the song...the masses gave him a big round of applause...

thank you..all.he said..and climbed down the podium..

..MR.MSK one more request plz..

maan sighed and turned around...

we all know u r participating..in a very popular dance show...and so..plz..dance for us..we do have ur choreography present here..too..

I..

umm..dont...

..naina elbowed him..maan cmon dont say no to ur fans..geet wont mind at all..she is a dancer...go..for it..and winked at him..

maan gaped her dumbfounded and then thought ..why should I loose such a opportunity to dance with her.naina is right.and grinned..

next geet knew she was dragged on the dance floor..by naina..who asked her to dance with maan in pretext of protecting his image in public ...

The song was same one he sang a while ago...

Geet chewed her lip staring down...her heart was beating wildly..she was his choreographer ..never did she felt anything like this sort of for him..ever..but today her heart betrayed her..

Maan stepped ahead towards her ..slipped his hand on the waist pulling her closer ...

 

Mujhe to lagta hai main shayad tere dil ki dua hoo

Tujhko jo paaya ahan to jeena aaya

Geet gasped in surprise as his hand clasped her waist tightly... She raised her eyes to meet his... She shouldn't have done that. Her knees turned into jelly...She drowned in those chocolate brown eyes...

 

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye

Bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan

Maan held her hand and placed it on his shoulder ..geet blinked  her lashes as he once again pulled her close..her face merely few inches. away from hers..

He sunk his fingers in hers...griping them...as the moved according to the  music..

Tu meri manzil hai tere kadmon pe bas rukne laga hu

 

(Tujhko jo paaya ahan to jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye

Bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan) - 2

Teri nazar me nayi si adaa hai

Naya sa nasha bhhi ghula hai

 

Maan dint move his gaze from her beautiful hazels...while she kept falling more for him. He turned her performed a regal turn...and squeezing her waist..geet closed her eyes...as gush of feelings ran in her body..

Naya sa nasha bhhi ghula hai

 

Kayi dino se bandha tha baadal jo

Tere hi baalon me khula hai

Teri hadon me meri basar hai

Ab tujhe bhi janu kidhar hai

They both were lost in the moment..

They dance passionately forgetting everything around themselves...

Jahan rahe tu main wo jahan hu

Jise jiye tu main wo sama hun

Teri waja se naya naya hu

The swayed together..back and forth...dancing in sync...it was magical..

Pehle kaha na maine ab ye tumse kehne laga hun aaa

(Tujhko jo paaya ahan to jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye

Bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan) - 2

 

The sounds of clapps startled them from their world...

Geet pulled back immediately and looked down...panting

She shuddered thinking of the moment just passed...

What..did I just do..what is this feeling...

Maan smiled at  everyone...and winked at naina..who grinned happily.

 

Ayan too...cheered for them..

Partner..maan whispered to her...

Geet abruptly turned to face him...he raised his brows... looking at her asking what..

Um..nothing she responded..

She looked forward flashed a small smile at everyone...

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Edited by crazy_sweta - 9 years ago

Naina ka plan kam kar hi gayea maaneet dance together wow nice update

lovly.. superb update.. well done Naina  😉😆😳
Edited by nehakapoor7 - 9 years ago

congrats on the new thread
lovely update
loved it allot!!!!!!

haaye uch a cuta and romantic update I just loved it geet falling for maan update soon sweta

wow.. very lovely n romantic update
loved it

Congratulation for new thread

Edited by maaneetsangel - 9 years ago