ON THE DANCE FLOOR#2 UPDATED LAST PART,EPI@81 ON 13/2/15 - Page 18

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PART 19

Geet toddle in snails speed in maan's direction..all the way tripling..And ultimately bumped into a waiter..

Her waiter supported her arm..trying to maintain their balance along with the tray he was holding

Mam are u okay he asked her...when she dint respond..

She nodded smiling and then shook her head..

I mm not okay..mujhe maan k pass jana hai..she said pushing her bottom lip out..

The waiter looked side ways silently praying for help...

Thats when maan's eyes fell on her..

He excused himself and instantly jogged to her..

Kya hua..geet..are u okay...He said holding her arm and pulling her...

She dint reply just giggled..snuggling close to his chest..

Sir i guess maam is drunk..

Drunk??  Maan parted her from himself and  cupped her face in one hand while waist from the other..

Geet are u drunk..geet..

She cutely blinked her lashes finally registering his voice..and jumped  close to him...wounding her hands on his neck..

Maaannnuu...mai kab se tumhe dhund rai ti..[maaannnu.. i was searching u ]

Maan cringed with the pungent smell of alcohol..descending her mouth..

Just ask #@#@ limo to be park near the entrance we will arrive shortly.. he instructed the waiter..

He held geet's waist and dragged her outside the party..

Kaha leke jaa rahe ho...she uttered..in the crook of his neck..Maan shivered ..as her lips rubbed his neck..

Calming his erotic heart beats he pulled her away and gazed her

She gazed him with a small smile paying on her lips..

Geet u r drunk sweety we need to get back at the hotel..he whispered slowly tucking her curly hair behind her ear.

She pouted and shook her head adamantly..

Nahi mujhe nahi jana i wana talk to u...mujhe tumhare sath enjoy karma hai..she adorably stated playing with his shirt's buttons..

Maan swallowed thickly..

Geet..he shrugged her hands.. She glared him and once again pulled them back..he repeated his action..

She angrily pushed him and ran towards the garden..

Geeet where are u going..Maan followed her..

Both were unaware of the gaze that tracked them..

Geet...geet he called out ..and scanned the garden..But couldn't find her

A musical laughter echoed and he was drew in that route..

He chased the laughter and finally found her..

She was giggling..swaying her legs in the water..She was sitting by the pool side with her feet in water..

Maan was  lost in her beautiful smile...He walked to her..and sat besides..her..kicking off his shoes which now accompanied her sandals and dwelled his feet in the waiter joining her..

 Geet twisted her lips and looked away..

Kya hua...

She dint answer back

Geet...m talking to u Maan said patting her shoulder..i was searching u...and tum...yaha

She turned to face him..why were u searching me..tumhe toh  mujh se baate nahi karni hai na..[why were u searching me u dint wanted to talk to me na]

Lekin when did i say ..this??

She lurched away from him...sulking..

Maan smiled..

Gosh she can be so cute sometimes...i wish i could..he grinned...

He leaned towards her..and pinched her cheeks sweetly ..Since she was drunk he could use this to his advantage..he thought..

She shoved his hand..

Sorry..baaba mujhe toh tumse baat karna hai..bohot sari baate karenge hum okay

Really she beamed with happiness..

Maan smiled...yes..lekin hotel mai bate kareneg not here..okay..

She frowned and shook her head..nahi..mujhe yehi pe baate karni hai...bas she whined

Maan sighed impatiently..

Geet please..tum...

His voice trailed off..as he was hushed by her...finger..

She smiled naughtily rubbing.. her finger on his lips..

Tum na bohot bolte ho...

He blinked his eyes...she stared him lovingly , brushed his cheek and then slowly recoiled her hand back..

Maan pulled a face as she withdrew her hand wanting her touch more..

Tumhe pata hai..its after a long time i m enjoying...She blushed looking down..I m enjoying  with some one's

Maan slanted his neck to view her face...His heart swelled with pride watching her blush..

She raised her head staring the water...

Actually all these days i have just been working and working...trying to pull many things together...

Trying to manage all the stuffs alone..

Her voice turned cheerless..Maan s expressions...stiffen

Phele mai di k sath itna khush hua karti ti... She glimpsed him with tears pooling her eyes..

My di and jiju..my world...She whispered..

Maa and papa toh car accident mai...hume chod kar chale gaye the..all i had was di..

Maan just stared her...

She clasped her hand excitedly..

U know when di got married to jiju maine kitna dance  kiya tha...that time jiju advised me to became a professional dancer..I joined the academy..

Sab kitne ache se chal raha tha.. Life was perfect..and that day

Her eyes turned wide..in awe..

Di gave me the news...she was pregnant..mai maassi ban ne wali ti...I was so delighted with the news..jiju ne toh hume big party di ti...

Maan's hands grew cold..he knew she was not in her senses..but deep down  she was unleashing the burden...she carried all along..

Then ayan...came...in our lives..

He froze...his hold on her hand..loosen..he gaped her in shock...

Tears spilled out..

Ayan..my baby our angel... she turned to him..tighetning her hold..

U knw maan he was so mall when was born bilkul di par gaya tha woh..

She cuddled to him..and nested her head in his shoulder..Maan was stunned with this reality..he couldn't even imagine that ayan wasn't geet's son..he was blown away..

Ayan..was our sweetheart...he completed our family...I was soo contended with my life until that dreadful day..

She clutched him tightly..digging her nails in his palms..maan was too numb to feel anything

Di and jiju...plane crash..mai..She gasped..

Us din...sab khatam hogaay..they left me..they left ayan... she whimpered..

Maan shut his eyes with a sting of pain crushing his heart..

Maan di and jiju mujhe ayan k sath chodkar chale gaye... She cried...spilling tears..

Maan let his tear flow and..embraced her...hiding her from the world..

He was so small..just 3 yrs old..when this happened... she mumbled..in his shirt..

Maan nodded..Shsshhh geeet.. he couldn't hear this any more ...His love and respect for her grew 10 times..She was the strongest girl..he had met

They cried holding each other..consoling their hearts...

After a while when she wasn't responding...He parted her...

She had dozed of in his warmth..with trails of tears on her cheeks..

Maan wiped..those marks and kissed her forehead..

I promise geet mai tumhe kabhi chod kar nahi jaunga..u and ayan make a whole life.. he spoke softly grazing her cheek..

Her face glowed under the moonlight..

She sluggishly opened her eyes...and gave him a beautiful smile...which melted his heart..

Maan...She  said softly..

Hmm he hummed not removing his gaze..off her..

Kiss me.. she proclaimed..

What..? maan screeched..astonished...

Geet nodded cutely...winding her hands,...on his neck..

No way geet..u r not in ur senses Maan muttered trying to pry of her hands..

Tum meri baat kabhi nahi maante ho..huhh..she made a baby face while knotting her brows..

Look geet tumhe  samjh nahi raha hai what u are..his voice faded and eyes widen..As her lips landed on his..

She kissed him...leaning close to him..intertwining her fingers in his..

Her eyes were close...he could see them with his open ones..She dint deepen the kiss...just rubbed them sensuously on his...which certainly set free the demons in him..

He closed his eyes..and swiftly pulled her in his lap..

Her brows puckered as he entered her mouth speedily...kissing her deeply..

Maan held her hairs titling her head..while she moaned..gripping his shoulders..

Her innocent kiss drove him crazy in need of more..

His tongue stroked all the contours of her mouth...while she timidly followed his moves..

His mind still scorned him to pursue this act,..but he was too lost now..

After a moment went he felt her breathless he left her plum lips... and swung away from her..

Both took in bated breaths...to calm their wild pacing heart beats..

Maan brushed his hair backwards cursing himself for loosing it..while geet smiled..slyly..

She turned to face maan n kissed his cheek...lovingly

Thank u she said with a wide smile..

 

Maan blinked his eyes in surprised and blushed...

U r very sweet she said pulling  the same cheek..

He made a angry face...glaring her..she sniggered..patting his cheek once again..

She knows how to melt my anger... he thought..

He grasped her hand and stood to his feel pulling her up..

She frowned..at him..

Maan shook his head..

And picked her up in his arms..

She blinked her eyes innocently...staring him in confusion..

Umm where are we going..i want to be with u

she spoke childishly...Maan smiled at her..

As much i loved our kiss..and wanted to spend some time with u alone...we need to go back..

I guess it will be more fun to kiss to when u r in complete senses...he smirked..

Hmmm..she hummed and slipped her hand around his neck..dozing off..

 He felt her murmur something..he shifted his head close to her lips...and paused as he heard her

Mujhe aur ayan ko chod kar mat jana..plz..

His heart churned in pain..

I wont leave u geet i promise... He vowed

He stepped inside his Limo placing her comfortably in his lap and drove..off.

A girl came out of the bushes as maan left with geet in his arms..

So mera shaq sahi tha..Mr.MSk is in love with this girl..isliye us din meri insult kit hi.. Minal gritted her teeth...and then smiled wickedly[So my guess was right..Mr.Msk is in love with that girl...thats y he insulted me the other day]

Ab tumhe aur us ladki ko batati hu mujh se ujlajne ka matlb kya hota...mujhe nikala than a tum ne..just wait and watch now..

[Now i will show u what happens to those who mess with me...u threw me out that day ..just wait and watch]

She smirked...clutching the phone in her hands..

Wow what lovely pics...this is enough to create drama..Mr.Msk.. She said sliding her finger...on the screen and viewing their pics...

 

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Amazing update
Geet is drunk nd want to spend time wid maan. 😉
Maan is having difficulty handling geet.
Geet tells truth to maan abt Ayan.
Geet kissed maan 😳 nd don't want to loose him
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 9 years ago

kameeni
she took their pix
has she no shame
well duh course she doesnt
who he loves or doesnt well thats none of her business
but seems she thinks it is
wow drunk geet
very dangerous right maan
she kissed him
well she was drunk
does that excuse it
she told her story
well he wanted to know more about her right
now he does
hope he doesnt leave them
more like they arent separated i hope