ON THE DANCE FLOOR#2 UPDATED LAST PART,EPI@81 ON 13/2/15 - Page 23

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Hi ! happy New Year! wishing u all the best
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part 17 nice update ... geet is fallng for maan... like the way maan take care of ayan n geet
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lovely update
geet kissed maan was awesum 😉

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awesome updates...i loved it..never thought kiss will happen so fast great going sweta
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Beautiful Update
Geet letting out all her hidden burden and pain while Maan consoles
her , I loved how Geet gets annoyed with him because he does not want to talk to her then she kisses him it was just beautiful
now I'm hoping this Minal does not cause too much of a problem

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waiting for the next update .
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Thank u gunjar for this lovely banner!!


Heyyaa all..here is the next part!!

Enjoy!!

PART 20

She giggled...and ran away from him..whereas he attempted to grab her arm..

" U wont be able to catch me.." she screamed..sniggering Hiding behind the tree..

" geet where are u ...geeet..its not funny.." Maan cribbed hunting her..

" geet last warning...come her stop ur hide and seek game.." he grunted..annoyingly

She bit her lips..to hide her chuckle...since He was next to tree she was covered with..

All of a sudden the atmosphere grew clam..and hushed..

She frowned..unable to hear anything..

Her heart beats paced higher...As the time passed by..

She hid herself..and peeked from the corner to glimpse maan..but couldn't found him.

" maan..." she murmured..anxiously..And came out..running crazily...In the forest seeking him..

" maaannn.." she called him loudly...

She frantically looked for him everywhere but still couldn't find him..Tears formed in her eeys..Spilling out.." maaannn.." she whimpered..thumping on the ground...

" maaan" she screamed yet again..

" maaan.." she clenched her eyes tightly...mumbling his name..

" mmmaaannn" she yelped...and arouse from the bed..

" geeett..." Maan woke with her loud cry..and reached immediately besides her..

" geet...what happen"..he cupped her face...wiping the sweat from her forehead..

" maaan..maaan" she pounced on him...engulfing him ..Maan held her baffled

" maaan..maan..woh woh.." she cried her eyes out..gripping him securely

" geet shhsss..dont cry..shhsss..." he brushed her hair soothingly..She seemed a wreck..probably had a nightmare..

" U r fine..GEET its alright shhh .M here " he bought her in his lap...she was still trembling and murmuring something..

He spoke nothing just held her quietly and continued brushing her hair...

She was breathing normally..now..he cool feel her heart beating in sync with his..

A while later she parted away from his neck...blinking her eyes..rapidly..in confusion..Then it dawn upon her that she was sitting comfortably sitting on his lap...and hugging him..!!

She turned pink in embarrassment..wiping her trails of tears..and shifted back to her place..

Maan understood her discomfiture...and moved away making some distance between them..

She looked away chewing her lips..Forgetting her dream...

" i..i..i.." she tried to speak something but failed..Maan inwardly smile..

" gosh this girl drives me crazy..with her cuteness.."

" i..I..i..dint.." She continued in a low voice...which could barely be heard..

Maan shook his head gently smirking and leaned closer pulling her left cheek..

Her eyelids grew bigger..in astonishment...

" u r way to cute geet..its alright..u just had a bad dream..."

She nodded...blushing...

Maan climbed down from the bed..." there is lime juice ull need it..okay.."

She nodded again...Without glancing him...

" have it okay,...or else ur headache wont go...get freshen up" he repeated..

" ohh k.." she murmured..moreover later frowned.. " head ache yes..but how does he knw.." gaping him..

Like he read her thoughts.." geet hangover...u see.."

" ohh..ya.." she flashed a silly smile..

" but hangover..mujhe..what????????????" Her face changed its colour and she made a o shape face...

Maan pressed his lips tight to avoid his chuckle

Her eye balls were moving rapidly trying to chase the memories of last night..

In next split second..maan came before her..kiss her cheek..and dragged his lips to her ear..

" lot of things happened last night...u have my whole life to remember...until then just take care" he retreated...leaving behind a stunned geet

****

" kya baat hai sir ji..aaj subha subha yaha..geet k room mai?? Wiase kal raat ko bhi tum gaye nahi the..apne room mai..?" Naina spoke smirking..pretending to be amused..

Maan rolled his eyes..ignoring her and skipping the pages of magazine he was reading..

Yesterday Maan chose to stay in geet's room..after he dropped her on bed..he slept outside in hall..

Naina chuckled...slightly pulling the magazine.." nainaaa..." maan scowled

" Omg.." she widen her eyes slipping beside him..

She held his chin..keenly observing his cheeks..one by one

" what are u doing naina..." he gritted his teeth praying for patience..

" there see i got it...hayye ayyee maan kya baat..hai.." she winked at him..

Maan glared her..

" are mai toh tumhare cheeks par red hue dekh rai ti...itsnt this..the greatest news..MSK the HEART THROB BLUSHING...OooHHH HE IS IN LOVE...pata hai is news k kitne paise mileneg mujhe"

" nainaaa..ki bachi..tujhe mai..." Maan smiled...mounting down the couch..as naina ran in the room..

The same time..Geet flunk the door of her bedroom..and walked outside...and bumped into maan..causing her to fall..


Waaqif toh huey tere dil ki baat se

Chhupaya jise tune qaaynaat se

Waaqif toh huey tere uss khayal se

Chhupaya jise tune apne aap se

Maan blinked his lashes in surprise as she descended down in his arms..

Kahin na kahin teri aankhein,

teri baatein padh rahe hain hum

Kahin na kahin tere dil mein,

dhadkano mein dhal rahe hain hum

Her hand was clutching his shoulder..and his was protectively wrapped around her waist..

Tu Har Lamha.. tha mujhse juda..

Chaahe door tha main.. yaa paas rahaa

Uss din tu haan udaas rahe

tujhe jis din hum na dikhe na miley

She flickered her eyelids..flinching .His hands automatically moved to assemble her soft wet tresses...which were upsetting her...and tucked them behind her ear..softly..

Uss din tu chup-chaap rahe

tujhe jis din kuch na kahe na suney

Main hoon bann chuka, jeene ki ik wajah

Iss baat ko khud se tu na chupaa..

Tu Har Lamha.. tha mujhse juda..

Chaahe door tha main.. yaa paas rahaa

Their gazes held each other's captive..

" hayee kya flimy scene hai..." Naina commented gleefully clapping

" say cheese..." and flash ayan clicked their picture capturing the beautiful moment forever

Maan and geet split up...and straighten themselves.. shyly

Naina stared both of them in awe...and bend down kissing ayan on his cheek.. " perfect click partner..." Both high fived each other

Ayaan smiled widely and showed her the pic..

" do u all want to see the pic.."

" nainaaa...what .." maan gestured her to be quite..as geet turned into beetroot red..

" momaa..momaaa..." ayan went to geet..hugging her..Geet smiled and picked him up..

" u got ready sweetheart..." she asked ruffling his hair...while they all settled themselves On couch..

" yes..partner got me ready.." ayan uttered...

Geet spun her head in naina's direction..silently mouthing thank u ..

" so guys whats ur plan..for the day"

Geet lowered her head..and maan once again..glowered at naina

Geet was already feeling flushed..she seem to have glimpses of yesterday..which made her swoon..

" i mean..today maan u r going stuiod..right thats i asked..I m disappearing for a day with yash..." she spoke dreamily..

" we r going out partner..DD had promised me..me mumma and DD.. fantasy park right ??" ayan spoke elatedly

Maan nodded...and pulled ayan's cheek..

*****

" wohooo..." They ayan screamed...as they climbed down the roller coaster..

" that was a hell of a ride..." maan mumbled..and huffed..To which geet chuckled..She loved these rides..

She used to visit fantasy parks...with Di and jiju..

" Dd that was so much fun " ayan pulled his pants..

" yey..that was so much fun.." Maan said picking him up.." off course why not after all i had geet holding me tight...champ.." he inwardly thought..

" Ab konsi ride k liye jana hai..." geet asked ayan holding his hand..

" heyyy guys look thats MSK with his family..." One girl exclaimed...pointing at their direction..

" ah oh.." Maan uttered..

Within 10 mins..there were gush of all his fans...gathering around him to click..snaps..

Maan patiently refused..And later agreed to click solo snaps..

"Please we wana click pic with ur family..please sir..." one of his fans requested..

Geet who was quietly moving away..with ayan paused in her tracks..

" please sir.." the girl again requested..

Maan nodded..and privately thanked the girl..he excused and strolled towards geet and ayan

Geet turned behind to find maan...

" maan..Thats..Not.." she tried to say..But he interrupted..grabbing ayan from her..

She frowned...at him..and he leaned closer to her ear.." geet u n ayan form my family.."


Lab se bhale tu kuch na kahe

Tere dil mein hum hi toh base yaa rahe

Saansein teri iqraar kare

Tera haath agar chhulein, pakde

Her eyes filled up...she looked him in admiration and awe..

Maan faintly smiled..and clasped her hand...and squeezed it assuring her

" yeyehhh..family pic family pic..." ayan cheered..

The cameras..were set up..and they were ready to click their snap...

" maam please...look straight n smile..." the camera man asked geet who was still staring maan..

She glanced down..and swiftly wiped her tear..and raised her head smiling..


Saansein teri iqraar kare

Tera haath agar chhulein, pakde

Teri khwahishein kar bhi de tu bayaan


Maan s hand enclosed her shoulder...firmly..giving her a sense of warmth..

After they were done with clicking pictures as family..it was time to snap the pic of..couple in love..

Ayan..joyfully jumped out of maan's arms..and ran to the camera man..Clapping for them..

Geet was choked with emotions she dint dare to look..up..however grasped when a rugged arm slipped on her waist..sending shivers in her body..


Yehi waqt hai inke izhaar ka..

Tu Har Lamha.. tha mujhse juda..

Chaahe door tha main.. yaa paas rahaa

Her eyes rose to meet his...and flash snapped it!!

" woho..." ayan laughed merrily..

" thank u sir..." the camera man expressed his gratitude

Oblivious of their surrounding..geet and maan were lost in themselves..

Ayan paced to them..when they still dint move ..

Ayan narrowed his brows...placing hands on his waist..

" Dd ...mom..' he called them..No response..

" ahhh..." he screeched..startling them

oh..sorry...champ.." maan muttered apologetically brushing his hairs..backward..and cursing himself..

" chalo..i want to go to that ride.." he announced and ran away...

Geet advanced in ayan's direction..But paused...

Maan gripped her hand..and moved closer to her facing her..

" geett..."

She gazed him...limply

His finger trailed the skin under her eyes..wiping her tear..

" i don't need eyes to see ur tears..geet..." he whispered hoarsely...gripping her hand tight..

He grazed her cheek lovingly " i wont these eyes shed even a single tear...ever i promised..U and ayan are my world..."


Tu Har Lamha.. tha mujhse juda..

Chaahe door tha main.. yaa paas rahaa

With that he left and...and left her..

Geet stood there stunned...

Tears flew down her eyes...

The first time they met, their dance, their bickering, their cute moments as family,ayan's happiness, her dilemma...everything was revolving around her..

She placed hand on her thumping heart...in insight

" i love him...i love maan..." she closed her eyes..finally accepting her emotions..

Her craving to be with him..that magnetic pull...everything explains..it was love..!!

Here maan joined ayan..

He waved his hand...smiling..at ayan who was enjoying his ride...

He Himself was at peek now..he hadn't confessed his feelings..but today it felt it strongly..

He was never expressive..but in front geet he let out everything thought not clearly ..

It was necessary to leave her alone for something ..He wasn't sure whether she recollected yesterday's incidents..his claim would only confuse her further hence he preferred to be mum..and talk to her later..

Geet arrived half hour later..she seemed so fragile . Maan dint speak to her..neither did she.. they behaved perfectly normal before ayan..and spent a nice time in the park.

How was it??

Please please please comment guys..!!!

And about the song..well..Its TU HAR LAMHA from GC's movie KHOMSHIYAAN..I just felt it would go perfectly in this scene..!!

Now for the next update m confuse..please comment and let me knw..which story u want me to update next and STALK that thread..!!

Ull get my update depending on ur comments..as i haven't started typing anything yet!!

Love

sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
loved it
finally geet realised that she loves maan..
eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Geet had bad dream
Ayan and maaneet went park
Thanks for pm

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