ON THE DANCE FLOOR#2 UPDATED LAST PART,EPI@81 ON 13/2/15 - Page 7

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Nice teaser interesting teaser
geet falling for maan
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Geet is realizing her love for maan. 😉
She is feeling puzzled 😳
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intrstng teaser baby😃
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Banner is made by My sweetheart GUNJAR...THNAK U dear!!

This update is specially for VANDANA i.e VANDY congo sweety ...for celaring ur viva.. nad for DIVYA(DESRIRE6) thank u yaar mujhe sun k liye..fb par...!!!


PART 17

Heheheeh..stop it stop it..ayan sniggered...and giggled.. clutching his stomach

maan laughed and ...tickled him more..

After a few mins he stopped and ayan panted heavily jumping in his lap..while maan ruffled his hairs..

practice nahi karna hai..aaj ayan said hugging maan through his neck..

maan sighed making a baby face and nodded

this was his routine since last 4 days...After their passionate dance maan maintained his distance from geet. Her expression ..her bewilderment were quite evident in her eyes..He knew she would need some time to sort of her feelings. She wouldn't be able to handle her feelings...their dance together. Hence he gave her some time off..

his and ayan bonding grew a lot ..their spent a lot of time together ..nd maan..completely enjoyed himself with this little boy..

they would eat bf together ..play PS together ..infact..since last 2 days ayan was cribbing on accompanying maan to his concert practice ..

Maan would practice while ayan would play games on his. phone ..

Back to geet

She thumped on the ground panting ..

grabbing the bottle she gulped down the water...

not even one single step m able to put in this song..Whats wrong with me....she rubbed her face in frustration ..

Instantly she was taken aback to their moment on the dance floor at the restaurant ..

she snapped her eyes open..

Since the time maan had..kept his distance geet was struggling wit her feelings ..

She stayed in her room..whole day..during bf time..she would stare at maan who was engrossed in ayan..all the maan. she would even pout often when maan dint pay attention to her...not even sparing her a glance Oblivious to her maan was secretly checking her out every now and then.

both of them carved for each other..but none voiced this out ..

so geet decided its better to focus on her job...she was here as his choreographer and she dint even set the choreography ..

She managed to get a practice room where she was trying to do the choreography...

hey geet ...busy ..?? naina said walking inside ..along with a tall guy..

heyyya..nai..geet said raising up..

okay..first of all..let me introduced u to my..fianc..Yash Kapoor.. and... she is geet maan's frnd..choreographer..and my frnd. she said chirpily

hey..nice to meet u...Yash said forwarding his hand for hand shale..


same here..I have heard a lot about u..from.naina geet said smiling

Naina blushed ..

acha laga..jaan kar ki yeh mere baare mai..baate toh karti hai..warna maan ka schedule sambalte sambalte toh yeh Mujhee bhul hi gayi ti..

ah..shss aisa nahi nahi..kuch bhi,,,naina elbowed him..

geet just laughed seeing both of them fighting

anyway geet..yeh cd layi hu tumhare liye..

naina said giving her the cd

mere liye ..kyu ..geet asked puzzled

actually ..hmm..ruko..yash bahar jao phele..I cant say this on front of you ..

are..Lekin aisa..kya..

nai..jao na..naina whined and pushed him out of the practice room

wait for me..I'll be back ..and shut the door ..

sorry ..actually geet u knw..yash ki sis ki wedding hai..next month ..

and we are suppose to perform..and m a very bad dancer..

mujhe dance classes join karne padenge dance sikhne k liye..but as u knw..I m ao busy that I cant...plus i have to teach yash also..she made a cute face

that's y I need ur help ..she said excitedly clasping geet's hands

sure naina..but mai kya kar sakti..hu..

are kuch nahi..tum is gane ko suno and set the chorography..and mujhe sikha dena..plz dont say no..geet mai kisi aur ko nahi jaanto joh itna acha dance kare..and now u r.kya frnd ao I trust u..completely u teach me..and ill teach yash


okay..okay..naina ..I will..okay..kab tak sikhana hai..tumhe ..?

yeyyy...thank u..geet naina said and pounce hugging her..

geet shook her head and reciprocated her hug..

after naina left..

Geet received ayan's call...from maan's number

Hey baby...

Mumma...plz come here ayan is missing u... ayan said cutely

Awe...baby geet smiled...

Ayan wants to be with u and dd..please momma... He was feeling very secured with maan around. For him he appeared as fatherly figure...as he started to develop a special bond with him..

Before geet could reply she heard maan's faint voice...he was practicing his lyrics...

She felt jittery listening his voice...

Momammaa...are u der..

Ah...ha..i..m der..she bit her lips...okay m coming baby...

She smiled and cut the call...

She reached the studio with naina and yash...

Momaa.....ayan came running to her...

Heyy baby...i bought ur lunch also..chalo lunch karte hai... She anxiously looked around for maan but there was no sign of him...

Naina noticed this...

Um..geet u guys have ur lunch mai...and yash maan ko dekh kar ate hai..okay...

Ohkay....geet replied...feeling disheartened


Geet held ayan's hand and both started moving out in the cafeteria...

Ayan was blabbering continuously about maan and his songs..and the fun he had...geet was quietly listening...

She was glad that ayan was happy...she was definitely grateful to maan...

In midst of all this she dint pay attention where she was walking and bumped to a girl...

What the hell... the girl screamed...

i..i..m sorry I,,wasn't looking and......the girl cut off geet rudely..

u girls..i knw...tumhare jaise ladkiyo ko... she said giving geet a disgusting look..

hey don't talk to my mumma..like that ayan said...coming in front of geet protectively..glaring the girl

momma...maa aisi hai toh beta toh aise hoga hi...huh the girl rolled her eys...

who gave u both entry here..yeh koi india ka festival nahi hai..its a studio...samjhe... pata anhi kaise kaise disgusting logo ko entry mil jati hai yaha...

U r crossing ur limit..i said sorry for bumping into u..but it wasn't my mistake..aap k bhi anke hai...u could have paid attention too... geet chided her..the girl was just creating nuisance over this small thing...

The girl made a o shape face

How dare u talk to me like that..do u even knw who m i..

I m the main lead singer...and dancer here ...Minal shahai... she said proudly...

and tumne mujh se aise baat ki..u and ur son...how dare u...huh...

Don't talk to my mom like that....ayan pushed her...

Ayan...geet called him..no..baby she held ayan's shoulders...pulling him back..

i..apologize on his behalf..yeh..are u okay

Ahh...u kid u pushed me..she was stunned

Minal raised her hand to hit ayan...Ayan closed his eyes...

Stop it...

Minal..paused...ayan slowly opened his eyes..

All of them turned their head to see...and angry maan...

Minal smirked...

Thank god maan tum aa gaye...look the way they spoke to me... she said innocently twisting her lips...

Geet dipped her head...nervously...clutching ayan ..But ayan struggled...to let go..

She feared that may be he would think otherwise...

Maan tighten his jaws...

Ya..i saw the way u behaved with that kid...minal..how dare u do that..Maan said gritting his teeth..

Geet raised her head...as she heard him say this..

Mai..i..maan.. Minal looked shocked

Ayan left geet and ran to maan...

Maan knelled down...and picked up ayan...in his arms...

Dd this women na..she yelled at me..and mommaa

Leave right now....His eyes were red..Minal almost shivered with his deadly glare

Leave now...maan said dangerously..u r out...m not performing with u ...just get the hell out of here...

But..maan..how can u do this...Minal tried to speak in her defense...how could he throw her out..for them..

Geet parted her lips to say..but maan's one look quiten her..

Maan raised his hand to stop..her

Leave ..now..minal...I can do what i want...I wont perform with u...if u r on the stage..i swear i wont even step in..

Before i loose my temper just buzz off

Minal...huffed angrily and stormed off after glaring geet and ayan..

Geet's respect for maan grew...all that she thought of him...initially were falling untrue...

He wasn't arrogant..neither..egoistic...the way ayan confided in him was surprising yet emotional for her...

She was speechless with maan's love and care for ayan..

Next morning was usual..maan and ayan left with naina for the studios...

Geet was in her Practice room..rehearsing their next performing...she walked to the player...to put in her cd...and her eyes fell on naina's cd..

Oh..yes I have to hear this...she recalled her and naina's meeting yesterday...

geet placed the cd in the player and played the song..

The music started ..it was very soft...

geet closed her eyes...and picked up her ears to the music...

Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware

she grooved according to the music...which drove her into a different world..

Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re

She opened her eyes..feeling very light...on her toes...the lyrics and music..took her into a fantasy world...

Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware

Red hue spreaded on her cheeks as she sang...

Le khela maine jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka
hai daav re

She lowered her eeys pointing her hand to her heart and then...

Musaafir hoon main door ka

She saw a man walking out from the fog ...and he was none other than maan..

She ..twisted her lips...to which he smiled charmingly...And sang..

Deewana hoon main dhoop ka

He shook his head ...swaying his hands..in air

Mujhe na bhaye.. na bhaye, na bhaye chaanv re

She knotted her brows ...dancing to the tunes..making cute expressions...

Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re

She turned performing a turn...and landed on his chest...

Her hands on his chest while his on her waist...
hey hey...**

She had her head dipped low..shying..her heart giving away her plight...

Maan smiled sweetly..holding her hand in his...and clasping her waist tight...

She looked up to see him...

Her one glance made him lose her sanity..making her drown in his chocolate brown eyes...


Aisi kaisi boli tere naino ne boli

Jaane kyon main doli

Maan grazed her cheek..moving around with her...


Aisa lage teri ho li main, tu mera..

She shivered as he ran his hands on her waist...

Unable to take his sweet assault she pushed him...stepping back...

Maan made a baby face...and sang...widening his arms


mm.. Tune baat kholi kacche dhaago me piro li
Baaton ki rangoli se na khelun aise holi main
naa tera..

Maan pouted and turned his face to the other side...

Geet smiled naughty...coming close to him..

Geet smiled sweetly...running her hands over his chest..making him.. shudder

She seductively ran her hands on his chest...cupping his chin through her fingers..


O.. kisi ka toh hoga hi tu
Kyun na tujhe main hi jeetun


She winked at him...he smiled widely pulling her closer...

Khule khabon me jeete hain, jeete hain baawreee

He leaned to her...with desire in his eyes...She quivered..as he laid just a few centimetres apart...

He almost reached to her lips...and she closed her eyes in submission...


Mann ke dhaage, o mann ke dhaage
Dhaage pe saanwre
Dhaage pe saanwre
Hai likha mene tera hi, tera hi, tera hi to naam re

She opened her eyes...feeling void of his warmth...

She shied...slapping her forehead...

She spun making patterns through her hands...


Ras bundiya nayan piya raas rache
Dil dhad dhad dhadke shor mache
Yun dekh sek sa lag jaaye
Main jal jaaun bas pyaar bache

Maan replied hugging her from back..and nuzzling his nose in her neck..

Aise dore daale kaala jaadu naina kaale
Tere main hawaale hua seene se laga le
Aa.. main tera...

She hummed along with him..gluing herself more to him...

O.. dono dheeme dheeme jalein
Aaja dono aise milein
Zameen pe laage, na tere, na mere paanv re

she abruptly turned behind...and hugged him...tighly hiding her face in the crook of his neck..

Maan closed his eyes..holding her in his arms...

Manva laage.. manva laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re


The song ended but she was still ..Spinning with her arms spread, eyes closed and shy smile paying on her lips.

She slowly...opened ..her eyes..smiling and blushing ...

She blinked her eyes...as crashed back into reality..

It was her dream...where she imagined MAAN dancing..with her...maan..?????

she embraced herself...in protective manner...

yeh kaisa ehsas hai..joh mujhe maan k taraf khiche jaa raha hai..

kyu maine use sochti hu apne khayalo mai...

Her face reflecting so many emotions..which she felt now...

jab woh nahi dekhte toh..unki ek nazar k liye bekarar hoti hu..kyu..

yeh kaisi ajeeb si tadap hai..

she thought of their bf scene

tears gathered in her..eyes

unke chune se saase teez ho jati hai..kyu..

she recalled their dance ..

kyu mujhe unke sath time spend karna cha lagta ahi..unhe nahi janti ti mai..lekin ab unhe aur jaan na chahti hu...

O god what is it that binds me..to him...kya hai yeh...

She slumped on the floor...helplessly unable to gather answers for those questions...

PRECAP- GEET DRUNK

So how was it??

This was really a long update as I had promised...its my apology for updating my stories late..!!!

Guys please leave ur comments...and let me remind u

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I m literally stuggling with my updates so I think I deserve this..!!

P.s- NEXT UPDATE WILL BE ISHQIYA'S

and vandy i knw u dont like the song..😆 still tumhare liye hai yeh update!!

Love

Sweta

Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsmmm updte dear...
Thnk u sooo much fr d dedication sweety...ovrwhlm...

N abt updte...it ws fab...lovin ds maan...n maan n ayaan bondn...
Evn thgh ddnt like dat sng bt suited best fr updte...n hw geet releasn her feelin...

Precap is intrstn...may b she blurt out sumthn...
Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woowww i can't believe dis is d same maan gosh he has changed so much
Pyaar insaan ko kya kya jar deta hai
Loving d bond b/w maan n ayan
Poor boy was craving for father's love care warmth which finally hez getting thru maan
So sad for geet struggling with her feelings
Hahaha maan pass aaye toh prob door jaye toh prob ufff so much of confusion
Naina k dance kya naya chakkar 😉
Ahaaan mrng scene more confusion for geet more struggle
Dat girl deserved it aacha hua nikal diya
Nw i guess geet is gonna perform instead of her lets c wat happens
Loved d song dream sequence
One of my recent fav manwa laage ❤️
Alll in alll mindblowing part
Thanks for a long one
Ahhh im excited for ishqiya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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finally geet is trying to figure out her feelings towards maan as now he is avoiding geet. good to see how both aryan and maan enjoying their time with other and now their bond too became strong. arey waah maan mein itna change , dekho kaie minal ki band bajadi usne😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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maan wantedly staying away from geet so that geet can realise her feelings for him...on the other hand geet is feeling sad at his avoidance...
respect for maan grew more for geet when maan supported her and ayan before minal..
geet is dreaming about maan and her doing dance ..she is thinking about the feelings which she felt for maan but she couldn't figure out what those feelings called...eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vandy28

Awsmmm updte dear...
Thnk u sooo much fr d dedication sweety...ovrwhlm...

N abt updte...it ws fab...lovin ds maan...n maan n ayaan bondn...
Evn thgh ddnt like dat sng bt suited best fr updte...n hw geet releasn her feelin...

Precap is intrstn...may b she blurt out sumthn...


welcome back...sweetheart...😳!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..superb update
love d way ur making geet fall for him..
Loved it
precap..wow drunk geet😆
cont soon

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