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LAST PART
" nainaa..yaha be toh...itne sare log hai..." Geet spoke in awe...pulling ayan down
NAina got down from her scooty and smiled...huffing
" phew..yes gee tab Mk ko rokhna tha yeh toh karna padega hi.." She commented..
Both of them now stood on the road facing MSK's bunglow...where a whole lot of girls was gathered for maan. They were ranting MK's name...and cheering for him..All just waiting to glimpse their superstar..
" chalo...back gate se jate hai..."
Geet nodded ...
" listen geet u guys go from here...c u all.." naina said and pulled ayan's cheek
" but naina..u r not coming??"
" geet patch up tumhara hona hai ..mujhe is crowd ko handle karna padega..u guys go.."
" oh..okay thanks naina..thanks a lot.." geet uttered appreciatively
Naina smiled..as ayan pulled her hand and kissed her cheek.." thank u partner..'
They bid bye to naina and entered in the mansion..
" mommaa...aap upar dekho ayan yah ape dekhega..okay...we have to find dd soon.."
Geet smiled...and nodded...she walked upstairs through the stairs..
The crowd was continuously roaring Maan's name.. Some of the girls...even screamed..." i love u maan..."
Geet made a o shape face...and went into the balcony ...to view those crazy girls.." aaj kal ki ladkiyo ko dekho..." she mumbled twisting her lip...and turned around bumping into someone..
Once again he saved her from falling...his hand wrapped around her waist while hers around his neck..
His eyes flickering in surprise while hers in delight.. Her hold on his neck tighten..as they pierce through each other's eyes...
Her brown hazels were shinning in bliss ...and her face was adorning a colour pink...
Maan's was blown away gazing her expressions..her face...her eyes...
" OMG THAT'S MK...I LOVE U MK" A girl screamed at the top of her voice...pointing at them...breaking their moment...
The balcony was at the right hand side...now all the crowd..moved their attention..towards them..
Maan thought to address them fro the last time...and thus came in the balcony..
He carefully made her stand ..and looked away stepping behind..
Geet blushed..lowering her lashes...
" I LOVE U MK...MK MK' crowd roared...again now glimpsing him..through the balcony..
Maan turned towards the crown...and waved his hand..smiling a little..
Geet frowned..at him.." yeh woh ladkiyo ko kyu dekh rahe hai"
He was still waving his hand ..when one of the girl hiked up the gate and gave maan a flying kiss..
This definitely hit the wrong spot..geet gasped..in anger...and marched to maan..
Maan spun his head at geet..who was staring him in anger...but before he could say anything..she gripped his shoulder raised to her toes...and slammed her lips on his...
His eye's grew big almost popping out feeling her soft ,warm lips on his... Her one hand clutched her shoulder while the other...gripped her collar...
The whole crowd went mum...Naina gaped the scene wide eyed.. and jaw dropped
she lavishly licked his lower lip...making him shudder...
The jitters he felt throbbing inside his heart through each and every vein in his body was startlingly incredible.. Her hands glided around his neck into his thick black hairs drawing him more close...while she strained upwards kissing him tightly..
Maan was propelled with the passion and zeal...of her remarkable kiss...
Her mouth was sweet, and her velvet tongue was touching maan in an intimating way. He tongue slowly met her's following a dreamy magical consequence on his mind. His eyelids dropped closed like her's ...
Maan was savouring the taste of her mouth against his... Despite of the urge to kiss her back he concentrated more on the feel and texture of her lips... Geet's fingers tightened painfully aganist his hairs...gripping them ...in desperation ..
Relinquishing his already limited restraint..she snaked his arm around her waist and deepend the kiss...
She surrendered herself...and moaned when his lips..fondled her..
The crowd now went roaring..cheering their fav superstar while naina smiled brightly...
A tear slipped through her eyes..feeling him responding . She smiled into the kiss...when he gloatingly pulled her up..kissing her ardently..
The reverberation of whistles and clapps echoed !!
Maan finally broke the kiss heaving.. Geet smiled with tears and kissed him again..
Maan smiled...wiping her tear..and shaking his head..
" this was wild...u r good kisser...espceially when u r jealous...partner.." Maan winked drawing her closer..
Geet dipped her head...low.." m sorry maan..." she spoke...raising her eyes to meet his..
" DD.."
Maan furrowed his brows with a small smile..and rolled...
" ayan..." maan smiled...widely...Ayan's smile widened...spotting his mom and dad..
He sauntered to him..and pounced on him..as maan kneeled down..
" haha.." maan laughed as he crashed on his chest hugging him tightly.." champ..." Geet adored the sight in front of her..
" daddy..." ayan parted..." u wont go away na..?" he questioned him cutely..
Ayan looked at maan and then at geet...Both were quiet..Maan felt so proud to hear the word daddy from his mouth..
" aap mumma se problem solve kar do na..plz don't leave me and mumma.." he whispered crying...
Maan shook his head..wiping his tear..and hugged him..Her kiss had shed all her and his insecurities...it showed her love for him.. No other explanation was needed...! Geet came back to him..with ayan.. this itself proved her faith and trust in him..!!
Geet chewed her lip... waiting maan to answer ayan's questions..
Maan parted...from ayan and smiled.." one second.." he replied and stood to his feet moving outside..
Ayan stared maan...and then went to geet holding her...
Both mother and son had no idea..what was maan upto..
Here naina was angry at maan.." ise bhi kya hogaya..uff i guess abhi bhi mujhe hi bolna padega...dekhti hu kuch der mai nahi aya toh ill go..upstairs ..gaurds handle karenge crowd ko.."
She impatiently waited for maan to come..and kept on .looking upwards in the balcony
Geet was nervous...as so was ayan...
" Geeettt..." naina screamed from downstairs..
Geet and ayan stepped ahead...holding the railing..and glanced down towards naina.. She had her mike...on..instructing the gaurds..
" where is maan? Is everything okay..should i come??" She aksed her...worriedly It was nealy 5 minutes...since maan had left
Geet shook her head...
" no need naina..i can handle from here.." Maan whispered in mike..
Geet and ayan turned to face maan... there he was grinning ..
Maan walked stylishly...and paused at a small distance..
Without breaking the gaze..he went down on his knees...
Geet blinked her eyes in surprise..while the girls..sighed loudly..He took geet's right hand...and ayan's left hand
" Miss GEET HANDA..and AYAN HANDA.." he smiled..softly... at them who stared him down in confusion..
" in this world there is nothing that is more important to me...than u both... i have never cherished anyone in my life other than my father...but u both have got me down to my knees...and i accept my defeat..Today in front of all my fans...whom i love...i want to ask confess something...i want them to be the witnesses of this beautiful moment "
all the girls..quietened hearing him addressing them...He smiled...caressing their hands with his other hand..
" u both..make my life beautiful...i cant even imagine a day without..u both...my heart is at peace only when i m besides u.."
A smiled formed on her lips...
" i knw u both are very happy with each other...and dont need me...But i need u ...i need u both..my existence is nothing without u ...nothing at all...so will u accept me in ur life...will u give a small place in ur heart and in ur life...???" he uttered looking straight in her eyes...
Geet gasped hearing his words...while ayan...narrowed his brows.. he pulled out his hand ..and shook his head..
" ayan ko kuch samjh nahi aya...but ayan wants to ask u something.."
Maan nodded..." bolo ayan.."
" will u be ayan's daddy??"
Geet looked away smilingly...while maan laughed...there were aww's and ha.'s all over the crowd..
He ruffled ayan's hair " only if u mumma says yes..."
" mummaa..." ayan and maan now expectantly looked at geet..who was blushing furiously..
She glanced at them..and nodded..." yes..."
" yeyyy...i love u mummaa" ayan jumped and hugged geet through waist..
maan got up...and hugged geet sideways.." i love u too...mummaa.." he whispered in her ears...
Her cheeks turned more pink...when he kissed her red cheeks...and picked up ayan in his arms..
Later they addressed his fans..thanking then..and spreading this news to them.. Maan thanked naina..for helping them out to which she smacked his arms.. Ayan was the most happiest , he at all got his daddy...!!
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EPILOGUE
" uff... maan tum aur ayan yeh sab kya hai..y cant u guys keep ur PS properly...ughh.." geet yelled at them..slumping on sofa.. She was came from her dancing institute...where she taught dance...
Both father and son..paid no attention..they were busy in their chess game
Geet rolled her eyes.." uff...yeh dono.bhi.na.."
Its been 2 years after their confession. They got married last year..after she completed her studies... Due to the sudden demise of her di..geet had to leave her studies mid way...hence maan forced her to complete her education..
Later they got married in a simple ceremony...which was lavish and fulsome..thanks to yash and naina.. Maan and ayan were the best thing happened to her. Maan's ayan relationship was so strong and pure..she was always grateful to naina for confronting her that day..or else she would never have forgiven herself.
Maan was a great husband a great frnd..and the best daddy... according to ayan. after they got married...maan gifted her own..dancing institute ...she couldnt be more happier . Infact during her education..one whole year maan worked from home..and handled ayan.. she was busy since she was pursuing her last year... She felt so special to have ayan and maan both in her life.. Naina was right she could be happy only if she takes the first step..
Ayan and maan's bond grew more stronger and father son duo left no stone upturned to trouble geet.. they teased her...irritated her..but they all had a good time.
Naina and yash got married last year. Naina is still maan's manager..but she is geet's best frnd..and ayan partner in crime.
Geet went to them...angrily..." are u both even listening to me??" She bit out
" yes..jaan...sun rahe hai.."
" yes mom.." they said without looking at her..
" ughhh..." she huffed and moved into the kitchen..
At Night...
" hahhaha..." geet giggled over the phone..." okay...bye.." she cut the call...and slipped besides maan..who was staring her curiously...
"kya baat hai Mrs.MSK kis baat pe itni hasi rai hai..." maan asked..moving close to her...and wrapping his hand on her stomach..
" woh..nothing..." she giggled...again...
" geettt..bolo..." maan tickled her waist hovering..her..
" maann..." geet sniggered..holding his hands..which were tickling her..
offo..okay okay...please..' she replied panting..
" hmm..thats better..." he kissed her cheeks..and reclined to his position..pulling her closer...geet placed her head on his chest...
" naina ka call tha..woh puch rai ti..mujh se kuch.."
" kya pucha usne..'' he brushed her hair..
She giggled..' maan jane do...she was like ask maan and confirm..with him..ki is baar bhi beech mai nahi chodenege na hum..yeh.."
" kyaa...???i dint get it..." he furrowed his brows..staring down at her..
" offo...cutie..." she pulled cheeks..
"Geett...' he shrugged her hands..and towered her again..pressing his body on hers..' bolo..seedhe..seedhe..." he nuzzled her neck...
" she was asking me..If we could get ON THE DANCE FLOOR again.." She muttered snaking her arms around his neck..
"kya..."
" haa..baba u remember..hum ne phele participate kiya tha...tab use beech mai hi chod diya tha..because of that ...bohot zayda lost hua tha...but people really liked our chemistry..they gave a name also maaneet...isliye...hmmm"she moaned...when he nipped her neck..and moved to the other side...
" isliye...??"
" isliye...they want us to..be on the show again..but..." She spoke in between her breaths...
Maan pulled her kuti..sleeves and licked her shoulder..." but??"
" this time ist for..Mrs. and Mrs..."
Maan smiled...and raised his head..looking in her eyes..
" toh..what say mrs.msk ..ek aur baar ON THE DANCE FLOOR ho jaye partner...??" and winked at her..
Geet laughed...and pinched his nose..." this time..we will win for sure..but bohot mehnat karni padegi...gurmmet and drashti bhi ane wale hai..they too good married na...we will have to pratice a lot ."
Maan laughed and..nodding his head...recalling their dancing days... Geet gets very professional when it comes to dancing. Maan bit her neck..and licked it...
" ouch maan..." she hissed staring him angrily
" geet abhi k liye u r not my dance partner but my life partner..and...i like my partner quiet when..i m busy loving her..." he whispered naughtily ...
" maaannn...suno too..."
THE END
P.S- Dont bash me for making gurmeet and drashti marry in this story. they are just characters!!
here finally journey of ON THE DANCE FLOOR comes to and end!!
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