NEW STORY : Emperor of the Darkness...chap 17/pg 24 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
loved it Rimi
Awesome update as always
So the 2nd meet of Nazneen & Siki was really interesting 👏
& loved how the meeting was sketched
Song you chosen was fab dear 😊
& one of my fav too...
Specialty of this song is that it contains a kind of peace & attraction 😊
well Pathan Lala the right hand or business partner of siki
nice sketch of his to 👏
Back story was interesting & heart touching too
yes at times kids like this have a great impact & same happened with him too
So his reaction & character is justified 👏
well Arjun came to meet siki
& now his all restlessness & remorse is taking a toll on him
as you sow you shall reap this is quite true
& same happened with siki too 😊
thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Awwwsssmmm Update
Just Loved it
As always Supperbly Written...
Pathan Lala's back story was interesting...
Loved Sikander n Nazneen's 2nd meet...
Arjun had come to meet Dilawar...
Amazing Update
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
Edited by _Nikita_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Hey Rimi
I am late
Second meeting of Sik and Nazneem
Beautifully etched plot yaar
Pathan's back story
Wow after a long time reading a back story who was just a name again like Sik
And then here he comes.
Arjun rawte himself
Waiting for the meeting


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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Awesome Chapter...

Hehe... zyaada likhne ka waqr nahi hai... so can just say that I loved it!!!

It was perfect to the T!



Trust me... I love the way you portray Sikki 😳

Ah... finally waiting for "that" moment!




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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Finally i am here...after a long time, almost a month...sorry for getting so late...but finally..😊

thank you so much everyone who had read the update and commented...😃

i am not replying to everyone individually this time...but i have read all your comments...the comments are always encouraging...do keep them coming...

here comes the next part...its updated in the blog...😊

Anyone with any issues about the blog...please do pm me...ill try to get back to you soon..😊

trailer for the update...😊


'Atya ke bare mein janna chahte ho?' he suddenly asked and turned back to me, analyzing my reaction. The fading smile on my face vanished instantly and I looked up at him.

Did he knew?

'I wonder what had led to this destruction or should I call it your destiny dilawar?' he mouthed the words which buried me deeper into the quicksand of my past.

*****



Edited by rimi_invisible - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
An excellent part dear
the way you portrayed this 2 men and their aged version was very good
so it was Rathod who came to meet him
And Atya's story is indeed terrible
but those last part... that shook me
Arjun is with her??
wow that was a twist I never expected
waiting for more

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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Wonderfully Written
Rathod had come to meet Dilawar
Flashback was painful
Arjun is with Atya...???
Continue Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Awesome update
loved it
So it was Rathod who came to meet Dilawar
The way u potrayed aged Rathod was nice
The past was indeed painful especially the last part
that shook me
aise Bhai ho to dushmano ki kya jaroorat
Arjun with Atiya?????
now thats interesting
This twist was indeed unexpected
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
loved it Rimi
awesome update
Dilawar turning into Sikandar.. 👏
the biggest reason was his family itself
I really felt bad reading his family condition
poor Atiya she is really in big trouble now 🤢
ye bhai hai ya kasai.. 😡
his weakness & helplessness gave him new power to save his sister from those beasts 👏
& so now it was sikis first step into the world of crime 🤢
sameers & dilawars meet was really good ⭐️
Atiya is with arjun 😲
thats really interesting
Thanks for the PM
Continue Soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Awesome update Di
loved it
it was Sam who came to meet Siki..
it was beautifully written
Sam's description from siki's POV was very nice!
fb.. Atiya n Ammi were being sent to Khala's place.. but Amil n Afsal came there.. how colud they do such a thing?? so disgusting..
Dilawar went to police station.. n treatened them.. got Atiya's location.. he shot the constable into his arm.. much expected one!
looking forward to how he saved Atiya n what he did to that officer!
well now.. this twist.. really intriguing.. Atiya with Arjun.. an unexpected one!!
why doesn't he want to meet Atiya?
do continu soon
Thanks for pm

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