Swaron SS:Alvida(current track)PART 5 Updated! - Page 6

Wow like really gal u have improved liked so so much. .
Dis chapter was very very well written. .
It was awesome. .
With every chapter ur improving as a writer n dats a really Gud. .
I liked how u showed all emotions, d pain, d care of friend. .
N most importantly Wat made me happy was seeing swayam having a weird feeling n he goes to check on sharon. . Shows how much he still lover her. .
Really lookin forward to read next part. .
Do pm. .

Mind blowing update. Waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: GlamourousPearl

Sometimes its not about Being Strong..its also abt Breaking down n let ur Emotions flow...


i loved it gal...superbbb...
👏All da best for u xamzzz👍🏼

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

the chapter 3 was great... finally their dance institute is about to open...
and they all are in enjoy mood the gang ... and i want sharon to stop hurt herself
is pain... do continue soon and pm me

Di u have return it so so well
Mind blowing
Update very soon i am waiting
👏

wah wah wah 👏
ds is nice..
want swaron scene happy wale.
nd thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

Di u have return it so so well
Mind blowing
Update very soon i am waiting
👏

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Wow like really gal u have improved liked so so much. .
Dis chapter was very very well written. .
It was awesome. .
With every chapter ur improving as a writer n dats a really Gud. .
I liked how u showed all emotions, d pain, d care of friend. .
N most importantly Wat made me happy was seeing swayam having a weird feeling n he goes to check on sharon. . Shows how much he still lover her. .
Really lookin forward to read next part. .
Do pm. .

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

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