Swaron SS:Alvida(current track)PART 5 Updated! - Page 4

Originally posted by: maliha_khan

Though u r new in writing bt still ur writing style ve a gripping points... Intresting storyline... Waiting 4 the next part😊

I really dnt knw wt does gripping style mean..Bt i do take it as a compliment! Thanx a lot!

guddd jobbb...i m so so so happy ...realllyyy gal thnk u so so much...i loved it ...seriously...Waohooo...

i m not a writer or such...bt watever u hv potrayed...well defining da situtaion of both swayam n sharon...too gud der..

main reason y i lykd it...bcoz i came across many (bt not much)OS FF...where reyam ,sharey,kriyaansh or any other duo were introduced to help Swaron...n i loved dat here i got Shammi pair ...seriously simmi is supposed to b her BSTFRND...lovd it

words changed into emotions n dat too impactful emotions...<3

too long speech ;) ...sorry for dat...

UPDATE SOON
n PM PLZZ

Awesome sis
Update soon 👏

Im hating the current track, they hav reduce d diva, the dazzler, THE sharon rai prakash to an indecisive, edgy, nervous weakling!! N swayam ko chuhe se tiger??????? I want sharon to give a f*** to swayam right nw n move on...he dsnt desrve her!!😡

Originally posted by: GlamourousPearl

guddd jobbb...i m so so so happy ...realllyyy gal thnk u so so much...i loved it ...seriously...Waohooo...

i m not a writer or such...bt watever u hv potrayed...well defining da situtaion of both swayam n sharon...too gud der..

main reason y i lykd it...bcoz i came across many (bt not much)OS FF...where reyam ,sharey,kriyaansh or any other duo were introduced to help Swaron...n i loved dat here i got Shammi pair ...seriously simmi is supposed to b her BSTFRND...lovd it

words changed into emotions n dat too impactful emotions...<3

too long speech ;) ...sorry for dat...

UPDATE SOON
n PM PLZZ

Thank u soo sooo much! It really meant a lot! I love reading long speeches,u cn always comment dis long i wont mind :P!

Originally posted by: soumeesg

Im hating the current track, they hav reduce d diva, the dazzler, THE sharon rai prakash to an indecisive, edgy, nervous weakling!! N swayam ko chuhe se tiger??????? I want sharon to give a f*** to swayam right nw n move on...he dsnt desrve her!!😡

But the start is really great...cn u plz plz plz send me a pm next tym u update??? Plzzz??😃

Ya i willl send u PM dnt say "plz" pls! I hope to match up ur expectations fr d cmng parts as well!

omg swayan is hurt her so much by word only... and sharon would take it more...
and are in pain and sharon got saved in time by simmi and vicky and took a promise
that they will not reveal to anyone what happen... precap ... forward to next part...
do continue soon and pm me

udattte please i loved it