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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow its mindblowing upate...

love d way u show sicky

update soon nd pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx fr all d appreciation guys! Even I m totally pissed by d Swaron Track,bt we really cnt do anything,no one will listen us!Anyways coming to d Update,I hv my 12th Board Exam in a Month so I m gonna finish this SS as fast as I cn..bt d Forum doesn't allow me to make more thn 10 posts in 24 hrs so..*sigh*!After 10th March I will write more stuff! So heres d Update-

PART 3

(Simmi n Sharon were sleeping in Sharon's room. Sharon usually slept at d Right side of d Bed bt today she slept at d Left side of Bed..Here,Swayam woke up n d time ws 2:30 am! His sleep ws getting disturbed thnking of Sharon,He woke up wit a jolt n realised dt it ws jst a Dream! He got negative vibes,he thought dt someone close to him is in Danger..so he called Rey n asked dt were He n Kria fine ..dey wer fine...He thought of his nightmare, were Sharon ws lying somewere n no one ws there to help her😕..He drank water in haste n thought to get a check on Sharon..He wore d Hoody sat on d Bicycle n went at Sharon's house jst to see if she ws alright!)

At Sharon's house-

Swayam entered d room through d window chori chori chupke chupke🥱..n as usual went towards d Right side of Bed...Unaware dt d girl sleeping there is Simmi,He pulled d Blanket n touched her forehead to check if she had fever like last time..He kept d hand n Simmi woke up like She saw some Ghost n started shouting..Swayam immediately kept his hand on her mouth so dat Sharon's sleep shudnt get disturbed.With d moonlight coming through d window dey both realised dt Swayam had goofed up with Sharon n Simmi..

Simmi:-Swayam Tum itnii raat ko ek abla naari k room me kya krne aaye ho? 😆🤢(She tried to shout bt thnkng of Sharon she spoke like a Mice..)

Swayam:-Mujhe kya pata tha ki tum rhogi Sharon k room me?😡😲

Simmi:-Gussa kyu kar rhe ho..aur kuch bolna baaki tha ki Raat k iss time pe u hv come😲.

(Swayam understood ab wt ws Simmi talking)

Swayam:-Simmi its none of ur concern,Jst tell me Is Sharon alright? Thn I will go away frm here..

Simmi:-Its my concern dammit..U cnt hurt Sharon ok..I knw she ws wrong bt d thngs u said ws Low even fr u , Swayam' d great to say..N ya she is alright u dnt need to care fr her..Show ur CONCERN for KRIA nt for SHARON😡😡😡!

Swayam ws hurt by Simmi's words bt d fact dt Sharon ws alright made him a bit relaxed n he left..

(Sharon ws on heavy antibiotics so she ws in a Deep Slumber..thus,She cudnt hear d conversation between her BFF n Ex-BF)!

Next Morning-

(Sharon had something planned..though she had failed in Love she didn't wanted to fail in Friendship..So,Miss.Diva Sharon Raiprakash is in action👏⭐️😊..She ws lil weak still but she decided she will n have to succeed in her plan..)

Meanwhile,In New York..

(D Dean of International School of Dance got a mail frm India which ws obiously frm Our Diva⭐️..He opened d mail..He ws too shocked to see d email😲..He immediately called a meeting fr Board of Directors to discuss abt it)

At college-

(Everyone ws busy planning fr Kria..Gifts,Minimela,Photos,Dance performances n wat nt..!Party ws at 7pm at Rey's house.Kria wud b leaving tommo morning at 8am fr USA.Sharon didn't go to college as she ws busy planning n executing something)!

(D time fr Party arrived Everyone including Natasha n excluding Sharon were present..)

Kria:-Thank u soo much guys it really means lot ya..Vese Swayam ,Sharon kaha h dikhai nhi de rhi?

Swayam:-Mujhe kya pata Kria ,me thodi uske peeche peehe jaake puchta hu ki aap aayengi yha nhi?!

Simmi:-Give a break to ur words Swayam🤢..Sharon thode der me aati hi hogi Kria!

(Bell ranged n a letter addressed to Reyaansh Singhania ws kept at d doormat)

Rinni:-Rey,ye letter pe toh tumhara naam likha h?!

Nilesh:-Rey k Ghar pe kisi aur ka letter kese aayega Rinni o_O!

Rinni:-Haa, voh bhi sahi h -_- !

(Evryone chuckled😆)

Rey:-Padhne to do Guys..!

(N suddenly Rey jumped n shouted Wooohooo👏 !)

Vicky:-Aisa bhi kya likha h letter me Rey ki tu uchal rha h?

(Rey passed letter to Vicky,after reading Vicky jumped Woohoo👏)

Swayam:-Kya Woohoo'😲 guys..hume bhi toh batao kya baat h..n he snatched letter frm Vicky's hand n started reading it loudly...

Respectd Team D3,

I d Dean of ISD apologize u for rejecting d affiliation.I m happy n content with ur performance at Annual Day..I m sorry fr d earlier thng..Pls forgive us.We at ISD want to affiliate with Talented n Superb Dancers like you. We would like our student Kria Ghai to stay there n complete her Graduation n also complete the remaining part of our Workshops. We have informed it to d Vp Of ur college..n we have decided to Open a Dance Institute on 29th April 2014 i.e International Dance Day immediately after ur Graduation Exams at Mumbai! We need ur cooperation n support for this.

Keen to work with all of you😳!

-Dean,

ISD,

NY (USA)

(Everyone had gone crazy,they were jumping n dancing all over..Swayam wanted Sharon to come..Evryone ws so engrossed in enjoyin dt dey dint see Sharon enter..n d view dat Sharon saw shook her WORLD..she jst ran out of d place trying to control her tears)

(Sharon closed her eyes to let her tears fall n think dat it was all lie..bt it wsnt😭..She saw Natasha n Swayam too close giggling..n whispering something in each others ears😉..D thought dat Swayam d person she loved d most could move on or cheat so easily her made her heart broke into million pieces💔..Bt d reality which Sharon ws unaware ws ki Natasha ws abt to fall n Swayam caught her at d right time..n thn dey both started laughing as it happened 3rd time today😲🥱)

(Sharon went at her home..N started cutting her hairs in Frustration..she still thought dat She ws at fault n she deserved it..n sobbing she drifted of too sleep..D room ws messed up with Hairs,Broken piece of Glasses n Blood stains all over😕😭...)

"In my story U r the Villian but in my Heart U r still the reigning King!"

-Coco J. Ginger.

Sometimes its not about Being Strong..its also abt Breaking down n let ur Emotions flow.A tough nut like Sharon broke down which is rather not her personality trait.But somethings in our life dnt go according to our way.If there is a Dark Night, we have Morning Sunrays too..

END of PART 3

Precap:-Sharon's MOM n D e-mail which made DEAN change his decisions.

I hv send Buddy requests to ppl,pls accept it.It makes my work of sending PMs easy n others send me Buddy request if u want PM regarding my work!I hope u liked dis part..Pls do comment n hit d like tab,it gives a lot of encouragement..Appreciations,Criticisms n Suggesstions r Most Welcome!

-Sachi

Edited by sachi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Awesum update... Bt y she cut her hairs :( ab swayam kya karega...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its amazing dear... i mean., really well written...
thnx fr d pm... & plz plz plz update soon... cnt wait fr d next part...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update 😊
Swayam disturbed for Sharon
Loved the Swayam-Simmi convo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*Speechless*...with the ongoing track, this is the only way dukhiyaari swaron fans can actually be happy...would love to read the next parts...please pm me...sending you a buddy request
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the chapter 3 was great... finally their dance institute is about to open...
and they all are in enjoy mood the gang ... and i want sharon to stop hurt herself
is pain... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazingg update !!!
the story so far seems very interesting
swayam n simmi convo was beautifully penned
n sharon's hurt n pain was very clearly evident
all in all a very heart-touching read
do update soon 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update soon and pm me...please...can't wait

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome SS..👏
pls do pm me when u update

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