Swaron SS:Alvida(current track)PART 5 Updated!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: -shenz-
its beautiful.. you expressed quite lot of things.. very brilliantly..
A few things that can be worked upon for sure.. I will say its because of the pressure of upcoming board exams and the nirdayi Maharashtra state Boardway of conducting exams may have got that..

But over all its beautifully done.. great efforts...

Thanxx, I knw i hv messed up at places! Ya n Nirdayi Maharashtra Board hv much to do with it! D time wen i wrote dis all d readers wer quite impatient fr d update..fr obvious reasons so wrote it in a hurry! Will definetly work on thngs n improve nxt time! Thanxx!

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Arushi Kotecha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Sachi! Roomie, sister, friend and awesome writer!

Man, what do I say?! Yes, there were errors in English, but as I told you, no idea is wrong! And the idea that love, only love can heal our brokenness is amazing :')

The depths of sorrow to which Sharon & Swayam fell when they didn't have the support of the other was heart-touching. Your love for intensity is pretty evident and I have to say you made me feel the intensity through your words! Keep writing!

Pro Tip: Write on SanDhir also! I'm sure you'll do a fabulous job on them too :D