Swaron SS:Alvida(current track)PART 5 Updated!

Hey Guys, I m Sachi new to Forum bt an old fan of D3.Honestly,I ws a Kriyaansh fan earlier bt after Vrushika entered d show day by day I got obsessed wit Swaron.Last few months have been hell for Swaron fans.First I ws annoyed thn I got angry nw I m hell lot of frustrated seeing D3! I hv started hating d show day by day. So,I finally thought to write fr d first time n give myslf lil Peace! Its like "Baaki Sab First Class h Bas Swaron FANS Udaas h" Enough of my feelings.I dnt knw rules here,If I m wrong pls CORRECT me.So, heres my first writeup-

PART 1

Everyone ws at Rey's home thinking about "How to make last 3 days special fr Kria?!"

Rinni:-I m feeling guilty fr nt accepting Kria before😭

Simmi:-Its ok Rinni dnt be sad,we shud focus n how to make Kria feel special n happy!

Bharat:-Haa be,Banatae apneko Kria ko rokna hoga be.

Swayam:-Hum kuch nhi kr skte. Use jaana hi hoga. I cnt stay away frm my Bestfrnd again.It hurts me to nt do anything fr her.(He ws upset,Sharon saw him fr a moment n thn spoke..)

Sharon:-Guys, Dnt be sad. Kria is way to special fr all of us n always will be.(Swayam rolled his eyes on Sharon's statement. Finally dey all decided to give her a Farewell Party)

Next Day at College VP sir called Swayam n Sharon in his cabin.

VP:-Swayam n Sharon, I told u abt my neice joining d college. So,here she is Natasha come in bte.A girl dressed in Salwar Kameez came in,she ws pretty bt nt as much as Sharon!

Natasha:-Hi,Guys I m Natasha frm UK.I joined dis college to spend d last few months of my Graduation wit my dear Uncle 😳!

Sharon:-Hi,Natasha I m Sharon GS of college n also ur new frnd. If u need any help u cn ask me!

Swayam:-Hey,Natasha I m Swayam Shikhawat ACS, if u need any help I m always available.

Natasha:-Thank u guys. U both r so nice n genuine 😛!

(Trio left cabin,Natasha ws guided by Swayam n Sharon abt evry nook n corner of College. While Swayam ws showing her everything excitedly, Sharon ws lost in her own World)

Swayam:-U r born n brought up in UK thn too u r soo INDIAN N TRADITIONAL.I m Impressed.

(Dis statement alarmed Sharon abt d thngs going around her.She ws nt jealous.She ws jst shocked by Swayam giving a compliment to girl which ws a rare sight)

Natasha:-Well, d credit goes to my Parents n Family. Dey r particular abt Indian Customs n Tradition.

Swayam:-Nice yaar,I too belong frm same kind of FAMILY 😊

(Sharon felt unlucky at d moment fr nt having a family.Though she hd a lovely Dad bt he ws always busy wit Business n ws mostly out of town)

Swayam:-Ppl like u r rare. Some ppl dnt even give importance to Relationships,Culture is faraway. He said eyeing Sharon.

(Tears formed in Sharon's eyes,she felt unlucky fr nt having her Mother n losing d most precious relationship of her life wit Swayam.Even before Natasha cud reply Sharon spoke..)

Sharon:-Guys,I hv an important work. I wil meet u later. Enjoy!(She left frm thr wiping her tears. Swayam felt bad fr wat he said bt he ws too engrossed in Natasha to give Sharon a thought)

Natasha:-I m hungry.Lets go to d canteen SAM. I hope I cn call u SAM!

Swayam:-Ya , U definetly cn! Chalo..

(Sharon sat on d Terrace crying n speaking to herself)

Sharon:-I deserve all of it.First Mom left me n nw Swayam. Rey is too busy wit Kria to notice me.Gang is busy wit arranging party n handling thr lives.Noone cares abt me,Noone loves me. I m n always wil be alone😭.Wiping her tears she decided to give it all a last try. She texted Swayam,"Pls meet me on Terrace in 10 mins pls".

(Swayam read d message n decided to meet her. Sharon ws frantically moving on terrace hoping for Swayam to come n He came)

Swayam:-Kyu bulaya h Sharon? Mere pass tumhare liye jyada waqt nhi h jo bolna h jaldi bolo.

Sharon spoke with a tear stained face:-Swayam,me manti hu ki mene Kria se dosti ek agenda se kithi,bt Trust me Swayam I genuinely consider her as friend n she is important fr me. Pls forgive me. I love u.Pls give us a chance.She said pleading n crying😭.

Swayam:-Sharon,tum Love aur Trust k bare me naahi baat kro toh hi accha h. Tum ek Shallow aur Selfish ladki ho.Ye tumhara ek phase hai,tum college k baad mujhe aur tumhare iss fake Pyaar ko bhul jaogi.Pls for Godssake Spare Kria. N get one thing clear U n ME can NEVER be US.Pls dnt shw ur face to me again. N he left witout evn giving a glance to Sharon.

(Sharon ws devasted,his words kept ringing in her ears.She thought she ws nomore needed in anyones life. Everyone wanted Kria n now Natasha.She felt neglected n ignored😭. She started coughing. Nt hving asthma attack frm a long time she dint hd her inhaler at d moment. D attack ws severe she fainted at d terrace itself🤢.)

Precap:-Simmi taking Sharon to d Hospital.

I knw I m nt a good writer bt I cant help it.Pls do comment n hit d like tab. Appreciation,Criticism all is accepted.N say me if I shud continue dis or nt?!

INDEX

PART 1-ABOVE

PART 2-Pg 3

PART 3-Pg 7

PART 4 -Pg10

Author's note-Pg 15

PART 5-Pg 15

beutiful story..pls post the nxt part..m waitng..:-)

Very great start. .
Pls do continue n pm me Wen u update😊

Grt start
Continue soon !

Loved it yaar every bit of it except one thing dat is swayam's characterization, he was way too rude wid sharon his words were really hurtful it felt a lil imposed so dats it n rest of the part was nice & correction who said ur not a good writer, to be honest ur an amazing writer, for me atileast so plz continue soon.

concept different and great well written... do continue soon and pm me

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this was good.. I would like to know what happens next..

the only thing that was a bit weird for me..was Sharon.. she isnt someone who would get insecure or feel left out due to some third party entering their lives.. she would rather react.. scream and shout.. than shed tears..