Swaron SS:Alvida(current track)PART 5 Updated!

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Cenjonstrand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

awesome update ya
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Gayathri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

realllyyy gud..update sooon...only these stories can save us now

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Amy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Awesome update dear.. 😊
Written work is mind blowing... 👏
Plz do update soon... 😊

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Sachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

I m overwhelmed with d response! Thanx a lott guys! It

really means a lot! Even I felt Part 3 ws great..While writing it I felt

content n satisfied.Dis part is spcl fr me...I hope u wud like it! Pls comment n hit d like tab! Here goes-

PART 4

Sharon slept on d floor itself. N suddenly she heard a

melodious voice calling out her name,''Sharon Sharon, Hw r u Sweety? I missed u soo much darling" n d lady place a peck on Sharon's forehead! Sharon said in a shaky voice,"Mom I missed u soo much...Noone loves me mom..After u left I m alone

mom pls comeback mom😭.." n she starts sobbing..There ws bright light all over d room. "Sharon bte everyone loves u,n even if dey dnt its dere loss darling,u r destiny's child, U shouldn't cry n hurt urself in such small things".

Sharon:-"Mom,Dad is soo busy always .. he hardly comes home..Even Rey is busy with Kria..I m glad fr him bt I feel lonely..Evn Swayam hates me nw..I m such a bad child Maa"*sobs*

SM:-"Sharon baccha u r a strong child..u never gave up thn y

nw?😲! The people who deserve u dey will automatically come to u..n if dey dnt dey r nt worthy..n talking abt Swayam

let him move on Sharon..dts d best fr u to prove ur True,Pure love..Dont do things which make other people sympathize u..If u get hurt..its ur problem,u hv to deal with it..Others cant! Having a confidant,a lover is good.But telling ur problems to everyone or even making dem know it increases n multiplies it! So, get up..get urself medicated n be strong darling..even if u take time its alright but dpnt hurt urself..it hurts me..Promise me Sharon!

Sharon:-I promise u mom I will be strong n I wont hurt myself anymore. But u don't go pls😔..

Sharon's mom smiled at her😳😊 ..carressed her cheek lovingly n

left leaving Sharon in d room!

(Sharon woke up with a jolt n realised dt her mom had gone again..Whenever something major happened to Sharon her Mom wud talk to her..U cn call it a Dream bt no it's a Mother's love dt can travel frm Heaven to Earth jst fr d Child!)

(By d time Sharon realised wht her Mom said...it ws Dawn..Sunrays were entering d room,making it bright..Sharon stood with a great difficulty called d driver n went to hospital fr getting herself medicated. It took an hour to clean all d wounds n dressing dem.She came home n stood infront of mirror..Bandages were on arm,right

knee, dere ws a scratch on forehead, n hairs were unusual bcz of her last night's reaction.She decided to go to colg..bt as her mom said she dint want anyone to see her in dis state..So for d first time Sharon Raiprakash wore full sleeves top n jeans n normal chappals with a cute cap over her head...With lots of pain she walked inside d colg..)

At colg-

She entered college,no one recognized her..she directly went

to class n sat at her usual place..

Rinni:-How dare u sit at SRP's place?Get up chic😡!

(By d time she said dis whole gang surrounded Sharon)

(Sharon saw all of dem..by removing her Cap)

Simmi-OMG! Sharon ye tumhe kya hogya😲?

Bharat:-Bantae ye DIVA se DEVI kaise ban gyi?

Aashi:-Sharon,aap thik toh ho aur ye sir pe chot kaise lagi?

Vicky:-Sharon,ab kya naya kia tumne😲?

Rey:-Sharon r u okk😕?

Nilesh:-Sharon wt happnd yaar?

Kria:-Sharon pls say something!

Natasha:-R u alright girl?

Amar:-Ale teko loi ploblem h kya🥱?

(Swayam didn't utter a word he ws trying to read her face,bt her face ws Deadpan..no single expression or reaction..she ws jst staring at all of dem..n suddenly she wore her cap)

Rinni:-Mujhe lagta h ye koi naya fashion trend hoga hena Sharon? Vese I like ur new Haircut..mast h😆😉!

(Rey,Kria,Simmi n Swayam knew dere ws something more to it bt dey thought to nt speak anything at d moment..rest of dem got convinced with Rinni's analysis of Fashion trend..Proffessor entered d class n everyone sat at there plce..bt Sharon still had d same expression..Dis horrified Swayam🤢!)

Meanwhile at New York d Dean ws thnking abt mail..n he saw

it again n ws impressed by Sharon..so he called VP n said abt it..VP saw d email n thought dis ws so typical Sharon Raiprakash who can do anything n evrythng😳..to convey dis to every1 he called d Gang..

Gang:-May we come in Sir?

VP:-Sure,come in..Congratulation guys fr d affiliation I m proud of all of u ,especially a girl.. I wud like u to show something..bcz of dis Girl,Kria is in Mumbai,bcz of her u will have ur own Dance Academy.

Pls see dis email..

D email startd with..

Respected Dean of ISD,

Kindly see dis Video!

(N d video started)-

(Sharon ws sitting on a stool legs crossed with a smirk😳 on her face in d video ofcourse!

Sharon:-Sir, I m Sharon Raiprakash GS of ST.Louis college,Mumbai n also a part of Team D3 who u rejected bcz of some unknown foolish reason.Before saying something else..I would like show n tell u some facts..

1)India is a country of Dance..everyone Dances

here wen dere is a Good news,or Bad news..or may be anything..they celebrate it with Dancing..even after winning a Cricket match people Dance..Dance is integral part of every Indian.

2)We at ST.Louis college are known all over India for our Dancing..Wecan do any dance form such as Kathak, Bharatnatyam, Contemporary,Hip Hop, Lyrical Hip Hop, Jive, Locking, Popping, Street Dance, Waltz, Salsa, Paso Doble, Tutting, Bachata, Samba, Ballet, B-Boying, Belly dance, Disco, Dandia, Kuchipudi,Latin dance, Tap dance, Manipuri, Chacha, Rumba, Tango, n etc..*sigh*

3)A affiliation would do great to not only us but also fr u! Ur Goodwill,Brand image,Social accountability n Advertisement would increase of ISD!

4) Our team is winner of Footloose 1,Footloose 2,Dance Camp,Charity shows n most importantly National Dance Championship!

5)I hv pasted all d links of our 250 Dances in d email.Kindly see it!

6) In anyway we r n we will be successful in opening our Dance Academy..N d loss is only urs.

7)I m ending it..jst answer me one thng, Cn anyother country provide any better than TEAM D3,INDIA! (No offense to anyone)!

N lastly ur student Kria Ghai is an Ex-Student of ST.Louis n she has been trained professionally frm our college only!

Thank u fr listening me!

-SHARON RAI PRAKASH

(Everyone ws sooo sooo proud of Sharon dt dey pounced on

her..She ws injured bt she bared it all n still didn't utter single word n had d same Deadpan face!)

VP:-Aree use saans to lene do! Thank u soo much Sharon I m

proud of u dear! Nw all of u leave n

study fr d exam only 25 days r left..we can celebrate it later😲😉..

(Everyone left..Rey took Sharon to Fire exit)

Rey:-Thanx a lott Sharon..Aaj tumhari vajah se mera dream pura hua aur Kria bhi yhi h..u r such true frnd n he hugged her..bt she dint utter a word again..Sharon kya hua h? Tum subah se kuch nhi bol rhi..Kya baat h? Pls tell me we will solve it together..

(No response again,Rey thought to give her a some space!)

(Everyone told her same thng excluding Natasha n Swayam bt she dint reply..She ws silent..Evryone shook her,shouted on her,pleaded her to speak ..bt she dint.everyone ended up crying😭🤢 seeing Sharon's state.With Swayam her voice went away somewhere!)

AFTER 24 Days-

It ws there Last Paper..everyone gave it n dey had farewell d next evening arranged by dere Juniors..Swayam finally took courage n thought of talking to Sharon..Sharon ws totally fine nw..she dint had any injury n no asthma problem..Bt d thng ws she ws silent n wore d same type clothes nw alSO!

End of PART 4

I hope u all like it! Appreciations,Suggestions n Criticisms

r Most Welcome!Bcoz i hv updated dis one early..Next Update on Pg.15..

Precap-Swayam n Sharon's breakdown!

Edited by sachi123 - 11 years ago

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Prachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Good one di
Update soon

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Sanskriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Awesome update

Loved the convo between Sharon n her Mom

I really like emotional n intense stories

Feeling bad for Sharon's condition

Update soon

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Trisha paul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awesome part..👏

loved it...

pls update soon

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ANMOL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

wow aswom part loved it...

sharon change...

nd swayam kitna bhav kha rha ha

plz update soon...its aswom.

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darshita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

finally sharon mail and video show their in it ... and vp to tell her she did a amazing
to feel all of them proud... and i hope sharon became her injuries get heal soon...
and all the gang member are try so hard to make her talk and that made a 😭...
the precap was amazing... do continue soon and pm me

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Suhana

@Summer_Rain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

waiting fr next part :)

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