SwaRon OS : Eternity - Page 4

Originally posted by: cenation123

beautiful os tanya as usual loved how you wrote on the current track mouth to mouth respiration was like awww swayam breathing life into sharon was beautiful and it symbolised how swayam's breath is enough for both of them and as long as they are together everything will be alright sry to hear abt ur fracture dear hope u recover soon sent bussy request to ur new id do pm me when u update next love u doll

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Beautiful os :-) loved how Swayam was with Sharon just like in the show

Nikki <3

Originally posted by: -SmokySapphira-

Beautiful Os dear. Very touching.

Loved it.

Continue soon with your awesome work

Love

Sonu

Originally posted by: safi_kisha

UNRES!

Tazzie... firstly thats so sweet of you to actually write on a request from your friend even though your hand i fractures...i am damn sure deeepika would agree with this...secondly you have got a nice cousin brother who has helped you
coming back to his OS
so far...congrats yaar its the best OS i have read on SwaRon... the emotions go of swaron is portrayed so cutely and awesomely...
i could actually imagine this as the main swaron track...
how adorably written yaar Tazzie...
i just love your works and looks like pretty soon your works are going to be my addiction...
loved it
love
Reena

Originally posted by: varsh-mayur

lovely awesome dear tooo good😊

Originally posted by: rinkubathija12

lovely OS... actually when i saw that scene on-air I was spell-bound and was just thinking something of this type of dialouges... 😉

Won't you sit on bed, next to me?"

and when i read it i was grining😃.. awesome... and swayam must be looking amazing while this......!!!😳

She heard a loud sound and turned her head back to find Swayam laying on the floor near the window and rubbing his head with one hand and bum with another and the cutest thing was that his tongue was half out and he looked no less than a small boy

awesome, amazing, sute, hot,, can't think of any other adjective😕 ... i'm kindda spechless...

P.S.. thankx for pm.. and i have sent u request on ur pm id.. !!

loved d os..
it was not at al boring but was cute n sweet..
loved it..
awesome os..
sharon feeling restless coz swayam didnt come to c her.. n her curiosity to check whether he at d door step was cute...
simi's text her words she spoke d other day made her sad n cry..
swayam came n made her sleep n sharon asking him to sit next to her was nice... sharon suddenly feeling heavy n lack of breath n swayam searching for her inhaler while checking on her so that she doesnt faint showed his concern..
he gave mouth-mouth respiration coz he was not able to find d inhaler n d way he asked whether she trust him r not before doing m-m was superb it showed sharon's trust n love for him,...
swayam kept staring sharon wen she slept hugging his legs..
finally sharon said she likes him a lot n said ll make sure she changes d very to love soon n d way she said i know u ll wen swayam said he ll make her fal in love wit him n wen he promised he ll do..
awesome os.. i loved it..