SwaRon OS : Eternity - Page 3

Originally posted by: sunvad278

loooved it :D <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

it was sooo beautiful:')

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey my sweet little monster...🤗

Thanx for writing an OS on my request..i know i have not been a very good reader lately..still u considered my request...that means a LOT...u shouldn't have gone through so much pain when ur hand is fractured...goshh..whom m i talking to ..u will never listen to me...


Coming to the OS...its beautiful...every SWARONIAN dreamed about watching something like this on the show...we are content with what we are getting but still we want the story to proceed ...loved the way u showed her restlessness waiting for him...the love..the pain..the crave was beautifully described ...she wanted him to hate her..but still couldn't tolerate his ignorance...


Seriously what was the reason of me being standing at the door any longer and sighing some more time when I knew he was not there, waiting for me and his Sharon. I guess my plan worked of making him hating me, but as of sudden something shouted inside me that how can it work. It has to fail no matter what. I took a long shower to soothed my nerves inside me who were arching with pain, because of me being tired, stressed, and the one thing most important thing due to which my soul was aching in pain is he not being with me anymore or rather I not being with him any longer.


The little msg conversation between sharon and simi...was lovely...he entered her room...through the window way...everything was the same as the real sequence ...only difference was a beautifully written sharon POV...the way she acknowledged her feelings for him...through her gestures was beautifully portrayed...

The way he gave mouth to mouth to her ...was just outstanding ..loved the action and the after effect


Without wasting a single more second, Swayam crushed his mouth on her and made her mouth open wide by his tongue and cupped her cheeks. Sharon felt like melting in his arms and take her last breaths but what he did, just shocked her. She thought that he might have been kissing her but soon she felt her lungs filling with enough amount of oxygen and she got to know that this angel was filling life in her. Her hot and scented breath was entering in her mouth giving her beautiful feeling she never felt before. He might be giving her oxygen only but the feel of his lips on her and his tongue touching the tops of her whenever he open their mouth a little more wider made her go weak on her knees.

The confession...the transition from like to love...a new dawn for their love..was well-written...loved the closing lines...their love till eternity..Beautiful OS swthrt...

She slept, it as the most peaceful sleep on her entire live. The most peaceful and lovely feeling was ringing within her now. She was alive again. She was breathing his breath in now and she wanted to breathe his breath till eternity. As eternity define them.

thanx for writing this one on my request

PS-beautiful banner kanks...

Luv
Deep

Originally posted by: BusyIndivaBee

awesome os tanya 😃

firstly the way you described the first part fo the os from sharon's point of view was nicely done

sharon wants to feel swayams love but is refraining herself from expressing her feelings

she wanted swayam to come and keep a check on her but when she didnt find swayam outside her house she was dissappointed and i felt bad. sharon thinks that she will have the worst sleep ever but swayam comes and i could feel her happiness. swayam was so caring. the last part where swayam tells her that he knows she's hiding something from him, and will waiit for her to open up. that was so sweet of him. and sharon finally tells him the she likes him very very very very very very much 😳 and swayams promise to make her fall in love with him. it was such an aamzung os.

simmi's message was so cute.

thanks for the pm 😃

Originally posted by: rakhiankita

o god tanya it was such a beautiful os loved ur us and i an speechless so just 👏
thanks for the pm