SwaRon OS : Eternity - Page 11

Originally posted by: -Marium-

Aww, thanks tons honey!

I am glad that you liked it so much! =)

Thanks for the comment! :)

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Dis is my most favorite of all ur OSs.. I just love love love dis wrk. Its excellently penned.. It was nyc dat it ws thru Sharon's PoV.. D beginning where she thought Swayam wud cme fr her nd wen he didnt cum her sadness ws nycly shown.. Spcly wen she thought dat maybe her plan of mkin her hte wrkd but how cud it.. :D nd den Simmi's msg ws a rly nyc prt.. "Give him a chance"... Den our Majnu's entry nd her thoughts in presence of him ws superbly written.. D bst prt ws wen Swayam filled her wit his breath.. Dis ws extremely well thought Marium.. Nd d cute end wit Swayam's I Love You and Sharon's I Like you v v v v v v v v v much... Superb OS dear...