SwaRon OS : Eternity

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@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

beautiful os tanya as usual loved how you wrote on the current track mouth to mouth respiration was like awww swayam breathing life into sharon was beautiful and it symbolised how swayam's breath is enough for both of them and as long as they are together everything will be alright sry to hear abt ur fracture dear hope u recover soon sent bussy request to ur new id do pm me when u update next love u doll

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Beautiful os :-) loved how Swayam was with Sharon just like in the show

Nikki <3

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

-res-

-Unres-

Firstly, very sorry for commenting soo late. 😊

I totally forgot about the unresng because of Exams!! 😕

This OS was amazing...

I didn't realize that i was smiling as the OS ended..😳

Had me wishing that i had an amazing guy like Swayam in this OS...or Swayam on the show itself. 😃

But that's too much to wish and hope right? 😛

The way he took care of her from the beginning...<3

When he couldn't find her inhaler...the way tears rolled down his eyes. 😭

For a second i thought he was kissing her, but then you clarified it. 😉

And yea, i hope the like changes into love soon...👍🏼(Even though she knows that she loves him, she just tries to deny it in front of him)😛

I hope you keep writing OSs like these.

Edited by damonelena - 12 years ago

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Sonya

@Ianoconic

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Beautiful Os dear. Very touching.

Loved it.

Continue soon with your awesome work

Love

Sonu

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

UNRES!

Tazzie... firstly thats so sweet of you to actually write on a request from your friend even though your hand i fractures...i am damn sure deeepika would agree with this...secondly you have got a nice cousin brother who has helped you
coming back to his OS
so far...congrats yaar its the best OS i have read on SwaRon... the emotions go of swaron is portrayed so cutely and awesomely...
i could actually imagine this as the main swaron track...
how adorably written yaar Tazzie...
i just love your works and looks like pretty soon your works are going to be my addiction...
loved it
love
Reena

Edited by safi_kisha - 12 years ago

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

lovely awesome dear tooo good😊

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

lovely OS... actually when i saw that scene on-air I was spell-bound and was just thinking something of this type of dialouges... 😉

Won't you sit on bed, next to me?"

and when i read it i was grining😃.. awesome... and swayam must be looking amazing while this......!!!😳

She heard a loud sound and turned her head back to find Swayam laying on the floor near the window and rubbing his head with one hand and bum with another and the cutest thing was that his tongue was half out and he looked no less than a small boy

awesome, amazing, sute, hot,, can't think of any other adjective😕 ... i'm kindda spechless...

P.S.. thankx for pm.. and i have sent u request on ur pm id.. !!