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@UserM123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: -Marium-

Aww, thanks tons honey!

I am glad that you liked it so much! =)

Thanks for the comment! :)

No Problem:)
aap Itna Aacha likho gi toh tarif toh karungi hi na... :)
Pm me ur any new works... :)

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Dis is my most favorite of all ur OSs.. I just love love love dis wrk. Its excellently penned.. It was nyc dat it ws thru Sharon's PoV.. D beginning where she thought Swayam wud cme fr her nd wen he didnt cum her sadness ws nycly shown.. Spcly wen she thought dat maybe her plan of mkin her hte wrkd but how cud it.. :D nd den Simmi's msg ws a rly nyc prt.. "Give him a chance"... Den our Majnu's entry nd her thoughts in presence of him ws superbly written.. D bst prt ws wen Swayam filled her wit his breath.. Dis ws extremely well thought Marium.. Nd d cute end wit Swayam's I Love You and Sharon's I Like you v v v v v v v v v much... Superb OS dear...

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--mystery.me--

@--mystery.me--

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam
Dis is my most favorite of all ur OSs.. I just love love love dis wrk. Its excellently penned.. It was nyc dat it ws thru Sharon's PoV.. D beginning where she thought Swayam wud cme fr her nd wen he didnt cum her sadness ws nycly shown.. Spcly wen she thought dat maybe her plan of mkin her hte wrkd but how cud it.. :D nd den Simmi's msg ws a rly nyc prt.. "Give him a chance"... Den our Majnu's entry nd her thoughts in presence of him ws superbly written.. D bst prt ws wen Swayam filled her wit his breath.. Dis ws extremely well thought Marium.. Nd d cute end wit Swayam's I Love You and Sharon's I Like you v v v v v v v v v much... Superb OS dear...

Uzma, thanks a lot for liking and commenting on this OS! You don't know how much these comments encourage me! :D