SwaRon OS : Eternity

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: swaronamit
Amazing os...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007
Beautifully Penned!!❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: zb456789
Super os thnx for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sadafarsha
OMG that was really really really I just can't stop reading it again and again I just luv this OS <3

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Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha
It's amazing one dear Sharon point if view was awesome one . And der love for each other very well mannered . I enjoyed it . Thanx for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

awesome os tanya

you penned it beautifully

wish we had got this in the show

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Posted: 12 years ago

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trying... ignore kar 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Seriously i took real long for commenting here.
But you know the reasons :)

Anyways this OS deserves Awesomeness Mahn! Tanya you are a wonderful writer Babe..!
What a nerve wrecking write up dude.!
Thanks alot for showing sharon's p.o.v...it was so well penned that i was just glued to it.
Loved the starting when sharon was fighting from her thoughts...she thought she succeeded in her mission but at the same time she was like i should fail.
That was so brilliantly done.

And this swayam...thank god sharon hi thi koi aur hota toh jaan bachaane ke chakkar mei :* :*
Lol sry for my spontanity.

I really loved this OS tanya...its almost 4am nd i m commenting hre...you made me smile and smileee :)
The way you took off and landed the OS...the concept was same but yet at the same time it appeared to be soo unique and AWE-some!
I guess it was the best substitute for the real one...!

Keep it up Bebyy ;D

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I wonder how do you come up with such beautiful stories one after another. This one is beyond beautiful. The way it started, exact portrayal of Sharon's state of mind. She wants to push Swayam away and at the same time wants to keep him with her till 'eternity'. A little gloomy in the beginning. But the moment Swayam entered, it took an entirely different turn. How i wish the actual sequence had also proceeded more or less like this. His concern for her and her trust in him, perfect.

P.S. Swayam noticed increase in "very' Sharon uses to say 'I like you'? Then again, knowing how he notices every little things about her, it doesn't come as a surprise.

P.P.S. You are extremely amazing writer. Keep it up.

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