Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing yaar. continye soon...and shud pm me

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This scar is intriguing me to no end now. Payal and Aakash are so in love. Sigh!

I love Arnav's character, dealing the situation with Lav, like an adult, brilliantly done :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
So Cinderella is at the ball thrown by Prince Charming. The interest is there and the rest may follow. I like the fact that he has a Ravi Varma in his house 😃
Akaash and Payal are refreshing to read about.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome love Khushi'[s dress ...you always leave a cliff hanger and hmphh! 😉😛😊 Cannot wait to see cinderella's reply!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav was not really planning to have the house warming party. But since he learnt that Aakash knows Khushi he all of a sudden decided to have one? (Aakash was surprised too with the sudden party plan)

So you are telling me that Arnav is already so intrigued about/ smitten with Cinderella that he planned a party out of the blue?

If Khushi had not met him in the elevators that day, had not literally fallen into his arms that way this party wouldn't have happened?

I know I know mein ek party ke peeche padi hoon but... I just want to undst this.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Arnav was not really planning to have the house warming party. But since he learnt that Aakash knows Khushi he all of a sudden decided to have one? (Aakash was surprised too with the sudden party plan)

So you are telling me that Arnav is already so intrigued about/ smitten with Cinderella that he planned a party out of the blue?

If Khushi had not met him in the elevators that day, had not literally fallen into his arms that way this party wouldn't have happened?

I know I know mein ek party ke peeche padi hoon but... I just want to undst this.



i was going to address this in my next chapter. No, Arnav didn't make the plan for Kushi. Initially I had a whole conversation written out between Lavs and Arnav where he talks about the party and invites her. I scrapped that as it was boring. So it came across as Arnav making plans so that he could invite Kushi. I dint mean it that way.

Guess my lack of experience as a writer is showing through, lesson for the future I guess.
Edited by Naach_Basanti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it..do pm mee wn u update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti



i was going to address this in my next chapter. No, Arnav didn't make the plan for Kushi. Initially I had a whole conversation written out between Lavs and Arnav where he talks about the party and invites her. I scrapped that as it was boring. So it came across as Arnav making plans so that he could invite Kushi. I dint mean it that way.

Guess my lack of experience as a writer is showing through, lesson for the future I guess.

Koi baat nahi hota hain.. Life hain 😊
May I say something if you don't mind? You could have just made Aakash say that finally the party is happening instead of making him show surprise. Just a thought. Pls don't mind...
And your FF is brilliant for the 1st time. So, keep quiet!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cindrella! !!!! ... ❤️
good going ...
Arnav is Interested in Khushi. Now waiting for their meeting in Party...
Update next chapter soon pleeejjj...
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Posted: 12 years ago
was the party on purpose to gt to know khushi the cindrella more?😳

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